kaun hai..... manjum

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Gaal pe dhalka hua aansu ponchh jata hai… kun hai.
Tapti dhup main saya banke chala aata hai... kun hai.

Ajab ajab se kartab dikhata hai ki hansdun main,
Wo pathrili rahon main phul bichhata hai... kaun hai.

Jise apna kahte the wo hi mera apna hua nahin,
Jo gair hokar bhi mujhe apna batata hai…. Kaun hai.

Hausla deta hai dil ko aur kahta hai hans do,
Mere ghamo ko bhi galese lagata hai.... kaun hai.

Use kya dun ke mere pas bas toota hua dil hai,
Mujhe pal pal jina wo sikhata hai… kaun hai.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2011, 06:41:43 AM »
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bahoot nazuk aur bahoot hi pyaara sa kalam hai ..daadkabool karen mnju ji
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2011, 06:43:13 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya bekararji... shukriya

sath rahiega......
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2011, 06:49:46 AM »
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uff……
iss kalaam ki koi saani nahi…
aansu aa jayenge yar…

na puch aur na hi soch ki wo kaun hai…

uski khusi judi hai teri muskurahat se
tere gamo ko apnakar bhi wo khamosi se maun hai……

kar amal uski bato par
na puch ab ki wo kaun hai……
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behad umda kalaam manju ji…
daad dil se
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2011, 06:51:36 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kbji....

aap sath rahie......
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2011, 07:23:18 AM »
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achi koshish !!
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2011, 07:26:34 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya ishuji....

sath rahiega.........
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«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2011, 06:48:49 PM »
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Manjum jee Aadaab!


Kia kahne janab aapki lafzi parwaaz to kafi unchi hoti jaa rahi hai... Masha Allah kafi umdaa likhne lkage haiN aap Usual Smile

Muafi chahate hai ke aapke kuch gujishta kalaamoN par reply nahi kar paye.... Kia kaheN waqt ki tangi si ho chali hai is muqtasar si zindagi meiN .... Usual Smile

Par hum sabhi post padhte rahte hai... sabhi members ko bus reply nahi kar paa rahe hai... Usual Smile Is liyte hum tamaam YOINDIANS se muafi chahte hai..... jinki posts waqai behad daad ke kabil thi aur hum badnaseeb use daad se bhi nawaaz nahi sake Usual Smile

         


Quote from: manjum on April 25, 2011, 06:21:28 AM
Gaal pe dhalka hua aansu ponchh jata hai… kun hai.
Tapti dhup main saya banke chala aata hai... kun hai.

Achcha khayaal hai janab daad Usual Smile

Jaane kiski duaaoN ka asar sambhalta hai mujhe.
MaiN doobta huN to daryaa uchalta hai mujhe.. Usual Smile         

Ajab ajab se kartab dikhata hai ki hans dun main,
Wo pathrili rahon main phul bichhata hai... kaun hai.

Hmmm Manjum jee ..... Yeh DUN ke kia maynee hote hai hume samjh nahi aaya.. ? behad ahem lafz hai aapke upri misre ka aur wohi samjh nahi aaya.. to sher samjh ke bahar hi raha sad5         

Jise apna kahte the wo hi mera apna hua nahin,
Jo gair hokar bhi mujhe apna batata hai…. Kaun hai.

Kia kahne jee bahut khoob Usual Smile

YahaaN kouN waqif hai kirdaar o naam se apne...
YeH andhere ke musafir hai roshni pe marne wale         

Hausla deta hai dil ko aur kahta hai hans do,
Mere ghamo ko bhi galese lagata hai.... kaun hai.

Achcha sher hai jee daad Usual Smile         

Use kya dun ke mere pas bas toota hua dil hai,
Mujhe pal pal jina wo sikhata hai… kaun hai.

Kia kahne waah bahut khoob daad Usual Smile         

manju "mann"


Behad achche ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai Manjum jee koshish bhi behad khoob rahi...

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2011, 03:52:52 AM »
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bahuu bahut shukriya... parwazji....

aapka ek ek lafz kimti naghina hai hamare lie... sach kahe aapke cmnt ka intzar rahta hai....

ham mafi chahenge ki hamne socha hi nahin ki wah mamuli sa shabd.... ufff... dekhie do hisson main bant ke arth hi kho gaya... asal main wo "hansdun" hai... "hans" aur "dun" ke bich ke fasle ne use beasar kar diya.... bs...

bahut bahut shukriya.....

sath rahie......
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«Reply #9 on: April 26, 2011, 08:55:27 AM »
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Bahot khoob Manjum. Bahot achhi poetry hai. Daad...
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«Reply #10 on: April 26, 2011, 09:26:29 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya riyazji

sath rahie
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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2011, 07:42:18 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on April 25, 2011, 06:21:28 AM
Gaal pe dhalka hua aansu ponchh jata hai… kun hai.
Tapti dhup main saya banke chala aata hai... kun hai.

Ajab ajab se kartab dikhata hai ki hansdun main,
Wo pathrili rahon main phul bichhata hai... kaun hai.

Jise apna kahte the wo hi mera apna hua nahin,
Jo gair hokar bhi mujhe apna batata hai…. Kaun hai.

Hausla deta hai dil ko aur kahta hai hans do,
Mere ghamo ko bhi galese lagata hai.... kaun hai.

Use kya dun ke mere pas bas toota hua dil hai,
Mujhe pal pal jina wo sikhata hai… kaun hai.

manju "mann"


bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam

 zindagi mein andhere ke siva ab kuch bhi nahin,
apni nigaahon se mujhe roshni dikhata hai...kaun hai..!
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2011, 07:46:04 AM »
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bahutbahut shukriya shebaji....

bahut acha kaha aapne..

sath rahie.....
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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2011, 05:45:49 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on April 25, 2011, 06:21:28 AM
Gaal pe dhalka hua aansu ponchh jata hai… kun hai.
Tapti dhup main saya banke chala aata hai... kun hai.

Ajab ajab se kartab dikhata hai ki hansdun main,
Wo pathrili rahon main phul bichhata hai... kaun hai.

Jise apna kahte the wo hi mera apna hua nahin,
Jo gair hokar bhi mujhe apna batata hai…. Kaun hai.

Hausla deta hai dil ko aur kahta hai hans do,
Mere ghamo ko bhi galese lagata hai.... kaun hai.

Use kya dun ke mere pas bas toota hua dil hai,
Mujhe pal pal jina wo sikhata hai… kaun hai.

manju "mann"


padh kar tera ye kalaam bechain aaj maun hai.
lataa hai jo teri zindagi mein tabdiliyaan kaun hai..!
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«Reply #14 on: April 28, 2011, 07:17:51 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya adilji...

khub kaha aapne....

kaun hai.... ye sawal to mann ka mann se hai..... ki kaun hai..
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