Kaun hai..............???

by jannatjahan on March 25, 2009, 02:00:25 PM
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Matlabi jahan me apna kehlaane wala kaun hai,
chalate hai khanjar sabhi, jakham mitane wala kaun hai

ghataon se barasta pani bhi ab khuni ho chala hai
khun se sarabor zindagi ko dhone wala kaun hai,

aate hai sabhi akele jahan me, jaate bhi tanha hi
is akelepan ke khauff ko mitane wala kaun hai,

dil bhi sabke alag alag, alag alag hi majhab
is majhabi duniya me apnaiyat lane wala kaun hai,

apne apne gharon ko to roshan kar lete hain sabhi
magar kisi garib ke ghar me ujala karne wala kaun hai,

apne liye to apni zindagi jee lete hain lagbhag sabhi
jiye jo zindagi auron ke liye, aisa dilwala kaun hai,

ab sabra ke daaman par humne pakad majbut kar li hai yaaron
magar bhagti duniya me sabra aajmane wala kaun hai
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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2009, 02:04:04 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob Seema dear..... superb  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2009, 02:18:43 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 25, 2009, 02:04:04 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob Seema dear..... superb  Applause Applause Applause
Thanks but i m not seema dear
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2009, 02:21:31 PM »
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Bahot khoob likha hai aap ne

Aap ki hausla afzaai ke liye chand panktiyaan pesh hai:


Ek se ek mile to kaarwaan ban jaata hai
khatre-khatre se dekho sagar bhar jaata hai

Ghataa kab talak chupaa sakega suraj ko
Badal ke baraste hi aasmaan mil jaata hai

Sabr kyon aazmaaye koi, tum khud ko aazmaao
Manzil par ho nazar to khud raasta mil jaata hai
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2009, 02:29:45 PM »
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Quote from: asma zehra on March 25, 2009, 02:21:31 PM
Bahot khoob likha hai aap ne

Aap ki hausla afzaai ke liye chand panktiyaan pesh hai:


Ek se ek mile to kaarwaan ban jaata hai
khatre-khatre se dekho sagar bhar jaata hai

Ghataa kab talak chupaa sakega suraj ko
Badal ke baraste hi aasmaan mil jaata hai

Sabr kyon aazmaaye koi, tum khud ko aazmaao
Manzil par ho nazar to khud raasta mil jaata hai
nice sharing zehra ji & thanks
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2009, 02:32:30 PM »
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Quote from: asma zehra on March 25, 2009, 02:21:31 PM
Bahot khoob likha hai aap ne

Aap ki hausla afzaai ke liye chand panktiyaan pesh hai:


Ek se ek mile to kaarwaan ban jaata hai
khatre-khatre se dekho sagar bhar jaata hai

Ghataa kab talak chupaa sakega suraj ko
Badal ke baraste hi aasmaan mil jaata hai

Sabr kyon aazmaaye koi, tum khud ko aazmaao
Manzil par ho nazar to khud raasta mil jaata hai

Bahut khoob Zehra ji
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dead heart
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2009, 07:16:49 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Jannar jee aur Zehra jee... Applause

Sab dosh dete hai tujhe ke diya hai dard tune Rahim,
Jo tujhe dard dejate hai unhe zalil karta kaun hai...
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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2009, 07:18:39 PM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on March 25, 2009, 02:00:25 PM
Matlabi jahan me apna kehlaane wala kaun hai,
chalate hai khanjar sabhi, jakham mitane wala kaun hai

ghataon se barasta pani bhi ab khuni ho chala hai
khun se sarabor zindagi ko dhone wala kaun hai,

aate hai sabhi akele jahan me, jaate bhi tanha hi
is akelepan ke khauff ko mitane wala kaun hai,

dil bhi sabke alag alag, alag alag hi majhab
is majhabi duniya me apnaiyat lane wala kaun hai,

apne apne gharon ko to roshan kar lete hain sabhi
magar kisi garib ke ghar me ujala karne wala kaun hai,

apne liye to apni zindagi jee lete hain lagbhag sabhi
jiye jo zindagi auron ke liye, aisa dilwala kaun hai,

ab sabra ke daaman par humne pakad majbut kar li hai yaaron
magar bhagti duniya me sabra aajmane wala kaun hai

Bohot Khoob Jannat Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohot achcha likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #8 on: March 25, 2009, 07:19:55 PM »
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Quote from: asma zehra on March 25, 2009, 02:21:31 PM
Bahot khoob likha hai aap ne

Aap ki hausla afzaai ke liye chand panktiyaan pesh hai:


Ek se ek mile to kaarwaan ban jaata hai
khatre-khatre se dekho sagar bhar jaata hai

Ghataa kab talak chupaa sakega suraj ko
Badal ke baraste hi aasmaan mil jaata hai

Sabr kyon aazmaaye koi, tum khud ko aazmaao
Manzil par ho nazar to khud raasta mil jaata hai

Bohot Khoob Asma Ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2009, 07:31:03 PM »
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Bohot acha likha hai jannat ji..keep writing!
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