*--khaamoshi ke gaon me--*

by vimmi singh on February 15, 2013, 10:52:04 AM
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shaam se ja  baithi
Us khamoshi ke gaon me
Vichaaron ke patte ude
Mann ke talaab me
Kheton me dhaan khade rahe
Aaj ki talaash me
Dhaan ki puaal mili
Bite lamhon ki yaad me
Jaane kitni der rahi main
Us khaamoshi ke gaon me

Tanhaai ki aandhi me
Bas udte hi gaye
Apni usi kahaani me
Ulajhte hi rahe
Dariya ke paani se
Ghade bhar gaye the
Striyon ki toli me
Hum bhi chal rahe the
Mandir ke praangan me
Puja ki thaal sajne lagi
Mere bhi mann me
Vichaar saj rahe the
Prabhu ke kirtan me
Hum bhi rum rahe the
Koi  baarish ki fuhaar nahi
Fir bhi bhing gaye
Mann ke manthan se
Bauchhaar hui thi
Naye sapno ki
Shuruaat hui thi
Andhera chha raha tha gaon me
Suraj doob sa gaya
Chaandni ki halki roshni me
Wo kisaan apne bailo sang
Ghar ko chala tha
Jahan diye ki lau
Timtimaane lagi
Mera mann bhi ujjwalit ho utha
Anant prakaash se
Shaam se jo thi baithi
Us khaamoshi ke gaon me
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2013, 12:20:26 PM »
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shaam se ja  baithi
Us khamoshi ke gaon me
Vichaaron ke patte ude
Mann ke talaab me
Kheton me dhaan khade rahe
Aaj ki talaash me
Dhaan ki puaal mili
Bite lamhon ki yaad me
Jaane kitni der rahi main
Us khaamoshi ke gaon me

Tanhaai ki aandhi me
Bas udte hi gaye
Apni usi kahaani me
Ulajhte hi rahe
Dariya ke paani se
Ghade bhar gaye the
Striyon ki toli me
Hum bhi chal rahe the
Mandir ke praangan me
Puja ki thaal sajne lagi
Mere bhi mann me
Vichaar saj rahe the
Prabhu ke kirtan me
Hum bhi rum rahe the
Koi  baarish ki fuhaar nahi
Fir bhi bhing gaye
Mann ke manthan se
Bauchhaar hui thi
Naye sapno ki
Shuruaat hui thi
Andhera chha raha tha gaon me
Suraj doob sa gaya
Chaandni ki halki roshni me
Wo kisaan apne bailo sang
Ghar ko chala tha
Jahan diye ki lau
Timtimaane lagi
Mera mann bhi ujjwalit ho utha
Anant prakaash se
Shaam se jo thi baithi
Us khaamoshi ke gaon me
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2013, 12:37:52 PM »
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Kya shamaa baandha hai..
shaam se ja  baithi
Us khamoshi ke gaon me
Vichaaron ke patte ude
Mann ke talaab me
Kheton me dhaan khade rahe
Aaj ki talaash me
Dhaan ki puaal mili
Bite lamhon ki yaad me
Jaane kitni der rahi main
Us khaamoshi ke gaon me

aage bhi accha likha hai  apne..
bahut badhiya..
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2013, 01:01:24 PM »
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Bahoot khoob vimmi ji dheroN daad
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2013, 01:22:08 PM »
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chalo ik rau aap ko hi de de
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2013, 01:24:58 PM »
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bahut bahut sunder ek rau qubool karo
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2013, 02:37:41 PM »
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bahut khoob

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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2013, 04:55:43 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2013, 05:06:01 PM »
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Kya shamaa baandha hai..
shaam se ja  baithi
Us khamoshi ke gaon me
Vichaaron ke patte ude
Mann ke talaab me
Kheton me dhaan khade rahe
Aaj ki talaash me
Dhaan ki puaal mili
Bite lamhon ki yaad me
Jaane kitni der rahi main
Us khaamoshi ke gaon me

aage bhi accha likha hai  apne..
bahut badhiya..

bahut bahut dhanywaad mkv ji...... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2013, 05:41:32 PM »
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acha chitran h ji--
mann ke bicharon aur ghumadti anginat baaton ka acha samavesh h

daad daad
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2013, 05:03:05 AM »
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kya baat hai vimmi ji. bahut khoob likha hai aapne. dheron daad
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«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2013, 07:01:06 AM »
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Bahoot khoob vimmi ji dheroN daad
bahut bahut shukriya premdeep ji.......  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2013, 07:04:12 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anmol ji.... thank you sooooooo much....  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 16, 2013, 09:57:55 AM »
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bahut bahut sunder ek rau qubool karo
thank you sir... thank you,thank you soooooo much....... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: February 16, 2013, 10:24:06 AM »
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bahut khoob


shukriya Ravi ji......  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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