khabar..........A.B

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                        nazar   jo     ru- ba- ru     hui...,
                        mokammal    phir    guftagu   hui...,

                         rah   kar   unke   kooche   main ...,
                        harkat  sharaab  ki  hu-ba-hu hui...,

                        bekhudi mein jo badli zindagi apni...,
                        sharaab  nahin, nashe ki aarzu hui...,

                        andaaz-e-dushmani pe aise fida hue...,
                        phir  usi  dushman  ki justju  hui...,

                        khabar taarik raat ki jaane kaise...,
                        ujaale   mein  bechain  her-su hui...,


                        
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2013, 09:56:09 PM »
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beautiful.....
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2013, 10:13:48 PM »
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good one................ Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2013, 10:59:01 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai adil jee..Dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2013, 11:12:59 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2013, 11:34:43 PM »
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superb
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2013, 11:48:08 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2013, 01:06:21 AM »
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wah wah..Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2013, 04:19:53 AM »
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andaaz-e-dushmani pe aise fida hue...,
phir  usi  dushman  ki justju  hui..., Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2013, 08:56:31 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2013, 10:21:35 AM »
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bekhudi mein jo badli zindagi apni...,
sharaab  nahin, nashe ki aarzu hui...,

andaaz-e-dushmani pe aise fida hue...,
phir  usi  dushman  ki justju  hui...,

Bahut khoob Adil bhai
ye do sher ..kya kahne
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2013, 01:14:48 PM »
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andaaz-e-dushmani pe aise fida hue...,
                        phir  usi  dushman  ki justju  hui...,

excellent sir
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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2013, 02:41:27 PM »
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Nice!!!!

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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2013, 08:54:20 PM »
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बहुत खूब.....आदिल जी  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: September 05, 2013, 10:36:47 PM »
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beautiful.....

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