khalwat......sheba

by Sheba on September 20, 2013, 02:47:58 AM
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                          mujhe'   main'  rahne   do,'hum'  na karo!
                          bana  kar dost mujh  pe  raham  na  karo!!


                           talaash kar shahr ke maikhaane mein mujhe.
                           saaghar-o-meena   per aisa sitam  na karo!


                           aisi  shaiye nahin ki  qismat sanwar jaaye.
                           mujhe  khone  ka   kabhi   gham   na  karo!


                           wo  alfaaz-e-dard  hoon  jiska ilaaj nahin.
                           padh   kar  mujhe, aankein  num na karo!


                    
                          rahne  do  ghazal  meri tanhaai mein  zara.
                           suna kar  apne   sher use  be-dum  na karo!



                           karte raho sheba buraai zamaane ki her waqt!
                           aur  zulm  aurat  per  kabhi  kam  na karo!!



                          


                          
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2013, 03:07:08 AM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne Shebaa Sahibaa... aate hi aap toH gazab kar gayi...
badi achchi kalaam huyi hai jee... kafi umdaa sher huye sabhi...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2013, 03:20:09 AM »
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                          mujhe'   main'  rahne   do,'hum'  na karo!
                          bana  kar dost mujh  pe  raham  na  karo!!

Dosti nahi to dushmani chalegi..??..hmmm..??.. Winking Winking Winking


                           talaash kar shahr ke maikhaane mein mujhe.
                           saaghar-o-meena   per aisa sitam  na karo!

 
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                          aisi  shaiye nahin ki  qismat sanwar jaaye.
                           mujhe  khone  ka   kabhi   gham   na  karo!

Ha ha ha..ab ek dushman ko khone ka gham kaisa..aj to 4 peg maarunga khush hua hun bahut aaj..tongue3 tongue3 tongue3

                           wo  alfaaz-e-dard  hoon  jiska ilaaj nahin.
                           padh  kar  mujhe, aankein apni num na karo![/b][/color]
 
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                          rahne  do  ghazal  meri tanhaai mein  zara.
                           suna kar  apne   sher use  be-dum  na karo!

Jao to phir tanha hi rakho apni ghazalo.N ko mehalo.N me,,
Bas bacha lena us sheeshe ke mahal ko shayro.N ke pattharo.N se..

                           karte raho sheba buraai zamaane ki her waqt!
                           aur  zulm  aurat  per  kabhi  kam  na karo!!


 
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Kya kehne sheba jee..bahut bahut khoob..1 RAU 4 u..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2013, 04:17:46 AM »
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waah waah waah waah Sheba ji, kyaa kehne, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2013, 08:58:00 AM »
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karte raho sheba buraai zamaane ki her waqt!
 aur  zulm  aurat  per  kabhi  kam  na karo!!

are ye kyaa kah gai
phir bhee rk rau baaqee misron ke liye
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2013, 09:04:03 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2013, 10:43:55 AM »
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  wo  alfaaz-e-dard  hoon  jiska ilaaj nahin.
  padh   kar  mujhe, aankein  num na karo!         

  karte raho sheba buraai zamaane ki her waqt!
  aur  zulm  aurat  per  kabhi  kam  na karo!!
                           

  Bahut khoob likha hai , khastaur se ye ashaar .
  Dili mubarakbaad .

                           
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2013, 11:13:53 AM »
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bohut khub sheba ji waaah
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«Reply #8 on: September 20, 2013, 01:45:23 PM »
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wo  alfaaz-e-dard  hoon  jiska ilaaj nahin.
padh   kar  mujhe, aankein  num na karo!
             
rahne  do  ghazal  meri tanhaai mein  zara.
suna kar  apne   sher use  be-dum  na karo!

karte raho sheba buraai zamaane ki her waqt!
aur  zulm  aurat  per  kabhi  kam  na karo!!

Bahut khoob likha hai Sheba jee
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«Reply #9 on: September 20, 2013, 01:46:24 PM »
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                           karte raho sheba buraai zamaane ki her waqt!
                           aur  zulm  aurat  per  kabhi  kam  na karo!!


Waah Sebaji, Ekdam sach .... Applause Applause

Karta hoon buraai ki buraai hazaar baar,
parhez buraii se sudhertaa bhi nahin hoon.  


                          


                          
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«Reply #10 on: September 20, 2013, 03:33:56 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: September 20, 2013, 06:02:54 PM »
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                           mujhe'   main'  rahne   do,'hum'  na karo!
                           bana  kar dost mujh  pe  raham  na  karo!!


                           talaash kar shahr ke maikhaane mein mujhe.
                           saaghar-o-meena   per aisa sitam  na karo!


                           aisi  shaiye nahin ki  qismat sanwar jaaye.
                           mujhe  khone  ka   kabhi   gham   na  karo!


                           wo  alfaaz-e-dard  hoon  jiska ilaaj nahin.
                           padh   kar  mujhe, aankein  num na karo!


                     
                           rahne  do  ghazal  meri tanhaai mein  zara.
                           suna kar  apne   sher use  be-dum  na karo!



                           karte raho sheba buraai zamaane ki her waqt!
                           aur  zulm  aurat  per  kabhi  kam  na karo!!



                           


                           

very nice,ma'am
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«Reply #12 on: September 20, 2013, 09:54:19 PM »
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                         mujhe'   main'  rahne   do,'hum'  na karo!
                          bana  kar dost mujh  pe  raham  na  karo!!


                           talaash kar shahr ke maikhaane mein mujhe.
                           saaghar-o-meena   per aisa sitam  na karo!


                           aisi  shaiye nahin ki  qismat sanwar jaaye.
                           mujhe  khone  ka   kabhi   gham   na  karo!


                           wo  alfaaz-e-dard  hoon  jiska ilaaj nahin.
                           padh   kar  mujhe, aankein  num na karo!


                    
                          rahne  do  ghazal  meri tanhaai mein  zara.
                           suna kar  apne   sher use  be-dum  na karo!



                           karte raho sheba buraai zamaane ki her waqt!
                           aur  zulm  aurat  per  kabhi  kam  na karo!!



                          


                          

bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 21, 2013, 08:38:28 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaah sheba ji... kya baat hai.. bahut khoob.. yeh ashaar bahut pasand aaye..

 aisi  shaiye nahin ki  qismat sanwar jaaye.
 mujhhe  khone  ka   kabhi   gham   na  karo!

 wo  alfaaz-e-dard  hoon  jiska ilaaj nahin.
 padh   kar  mujhe, aankein  num na karo!

                   
 rahne  do  ghazal  meri tanhaai mein  zara.
 suna kar  apne   sher use  be-dum  na karo!
Is khoob kalaam par hazaron hazaron dili daad qubool kijiye...
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«Reply #14 on: September 22, 2013, 01:42:35 AM »
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Sheba ji ... Is khoobsurat aur pur asar qalaam par apko daad o mubaarakbaad
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