Khoobsurat Hai Zindagi....!!!

by Talat on March 03, 2010, 02:56:36 PM
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Jab main India se wapis aayi, aur bohot mayoos aur dukhi thi apni ammi ki untimely, early death ki wajh se, tab mujhse ek dost ne yahan Zindagi pe kuch positive likhne ko bola tha.
Aaj main Zindagi pe kuch likh rahi hoon.....!

This ghazal is dedicated to my friend Khwaish,
who has always supported me in good and bad times.
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2010, 03:38:15 PM »
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waah bahut hi khoob likha hai celmira ji...
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2010, 05:48:40 PM »
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Thanks a lot BBL ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2010, 06:11:09 PM »
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ur Welcome Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2010, 06:21:19 PM »
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It is good .
The effort of your friend is visible, you have successfully tried to incorporate all his words in this poem!
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2010, 06:25:53 PM »
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Badi bhavpurn zindagi ki tarah he khoobsurat hai aapki ye Gazal.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kitni haseen hai ye zindagi kehte hain sabhee
Talashna hai mujhe kahaan mere hisse ki khushi

Umeed lagaye baithee hu,ab koi gul khilayegi zindagi
Mere dil k chaman mai kab bahaar layegee ye zindagi

Quote from: Celmira on March 03, 2010, 02:56:36 PM
Jab main India se wapis aayi, aur bohot mayoos aur dukhi thi apni ammi ki untimely, early death ki wajh se, tab mujhse ek dost ne yahan Zindagi pe kuch positive likhne ko bola tha.
Aaj main Zindagi pe kuch likh rahi hoon.....!

This ghazal is dedicated to my friend Khwaish,
who has always supported me in good and bad times.
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2010, 09:59:52 PM »
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Quote from: Gumshuda on March 03, 2010, 06:21:19 PM
It is good .
The effort of your friend is visible, you have successfully tried to incorporate all his words in this poem!

Thank you so much Gumshuda Ji..thanks a lot for feeling the depth of this poetry !
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2010, 10:00:29 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 03, 2010, 06:21:54 PM
Bahut Khub Talat Ji... Applause Applause Applause

Bohot bohot shukriya aapka, Shihab
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2010, 10:05:41 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 03, 2010, 06:25:53 PM
Badi bhavpurn zindagi ki tarah he khoobsurat hai aapki ye Gazal.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kitni haseen hai ye zindagi kehte hain sabhee
Talashna hai mujhe kahaan mere hisse ki khushi

Umeed lagaye baithee hu,ab koi gul khilayegi zindagi
Mere dil k chaman mai kab bahaar layegee ye zindagi



Thanks a lot Koyal ji....Very nice lines from you....


Gulshan-e-bahaar Ban Jaaye Tumhaari Zindagi,
Har Khwahish Har Ummeed Bar Laaye Tumhari Zindagi

Ho Na Koi Gila, Na Koi Shikayat Isse,
Khwaab Ki Surat Nazar Aaye Tumhari Zindagi
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2010, 11:16:16 AM »
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Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!

Iss Ghazal mein Aapne Zindagi Ki Haqeeqat Bayaan Ki..

Zindagi ke kai Rang,Kai Mausam Hote hai,Jaise Dhoop-Chaau,Gham-Khushi..

Aapne bahut Hi khoobsurti Se Zindagi Ki Haqeeat Bayaan Ki..

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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2010, 11:18:50 AM »
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 Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Thankyou !

Thanks A Million For Dedicating This Beautiful Piece Of Poetry To Me..

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooooooo Much Dear  Hats off to you!
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2010, 11:21:21 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 03, 2010, 06:25:53 PM
Badi bhavpurn zindagi ki tarah he khoobsurat hai aapki ye Gazal.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kitni haseen hai ye zindagi kehte hain sabhee
Talashna hai mujhe kahaan mere hisse ki khushi

Umeed lagaye baithee hu,ab koi gul khilayegi zindagi
Mere dil k chaman mai kab bahaar layegee ye zindagi


Bahut Bahut Khoob Koyal.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: March 04, 2010, 11:22:37 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 03, 2010, 10:05:41 PM

Thanks a lot Koyal ji....Very nice lines from you....


Gulshan-e-bahaar Ban Jaaye Tumhaari Zindagi,
Har Khwahish Har Ummeed Bar Laaye Tumhari Zindagi

Ho Na Koi Gila, Na Koi Shikayat Isse,
Khwaab Ki Surat Nazar Aaye Tumhari Zindagi





Bahut bahut Khoob Talat Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2010, 11:23:23 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 04, 2010, 10:15:55 AM
waah Celmira ji,behad achi tarah se aapne zindagi ko baya kiya aur inspirational poem likhi,bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot Kaash Ji, aapko ye peshkash pasand aayi....bohot bohot shukriya, hausla afzaai ka....
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2010, 11:24:47 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 04, 2010, 11:16:16 AM
Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!

Iss Ghazal mein Aapne Zindagi Ki Haqeeqat Bayaan Ki..

Zindagi ke kai Rang,Kai Mausam Hote hai,Jaise Dhoop-Chaau,Gham-Khushi..

Aapne bahut Hi khoobsurti Se Zindagi Ki Haqeeat Bayaan Ki..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khwaish Dost, bohot bohot shukriya aapka  happy3  happy3
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