khwab

by bekarar on April 02, 2010, 03:11:27 AM
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mai khwabon ke tasavvur me khud ko bhul jata hun,
mai khwabon ke mahal har din, banata hun mitata hun,

kabhi khud ko samajh majnu tujhe laila banata hun,
fir khud hi tod deta hun bharam ko, jaag jata hun,

mere khwabon me kitne taazmahal har roj bante hain,
mai khwabon ka mahkta phool hun, khushboo udata hun,

mere khwabon me koi muflis nahi, rakeeb nahi, mohtaj nahi,
meri nagri me har ek aah ko, mai dua banata hun,

mai kyun-kar neend se jaagun, mai kyun jhutha kahun isko,
yahi duniya meri hai, jisme aakar mai chain pata hun.


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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2010, 03:50:44 AM »
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wah...
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2010, 06:23:08 AM »
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Wah wah Bekarar ji bahut behtreen creation hai. Alfaaz ka order bahut achha laga jisse khoobsurti paida ho gai. Well done.
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2010, 08:27:34 AM »
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Waah!!!Waah!!!Bekarar ji bahut achachha creation hai. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2010, 09:55:16 AM »
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Bahut khoob Bekarar ji. Khwaabon ko bahut khoobsurat roop diya hai aapne apni is ghazal me. Sach... kabhi kabhi khwaabon se bahar nikalne ka mann hi nahi karta hai.. . bahut khoob Bekarar ji... bahut khoob... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2010, 09:58:58 AM »
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Wah Wah Bekaraarji bahut khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause
koi funds nahin chhahiye aapko.aur kitna achha mahal bana lete hain.bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2010, 11:29:35 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 02, 2010, 03:11:27 AM
mai khwabon ke tasavvur me khud ko bhul jata hun,
mai khwabon ke mahal har din, banata hun mitata hun,

kabhi khud ko samajh majnu tujhe laila banata hun,
fir khud hi tod deta hun bharam ko, jaag jata hun,

mere khwabon me kitne taazmahal har roj bante hain,
mai khwabon ka mahkta phool hun, khushboo udata hun,

mere khwabon me koi muflis nahi, rakeeb nahi, mohtaj nahi,
meri nagri me har ek aah ko, mai dua banata hun,

mai kyun-kar neend se jaagun, mai kyun jhutha kahun isko,
yahi duniya meri hai, jisme aakar mai chain pata hun.




Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Khwaab Sajaya Hai Aapne.. Usual Smile

4rth Sher Par Hazaaro Daad..Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2010, 09:14:55 PM »
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Wah! Bahut Khoob Bekarar Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2010, 08:28:34 AM »
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Bahut khoob kaha hai aapne Bekarar ji
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2010, 10:47:31 AM »
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 Applause  bahot hi umda likha hai,, bahot khoob
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2010, 02:23:00 AM »
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Quote from: vsss on April 02, 2010, 03:50:44 AM
wah...

shukriya dost padhne ke liye
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2010, 02:24:12 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 02, 2010, 06:23:08 AM
Wah wah Bekarar ji bahut behtreen creation hai. Alfaaz ka order bahut achha laga jisse khoobsurti paida ho gai. Well done.
shukrgujar hun aapka Riyaz sahab.,,aapne samay diya
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2010, 02:24:59 AM »
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Waah!!!Waah!!!Bekarar ji bahut achachha creation hai. Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahoot shukriya dr sahab..aapne is rachna ko saraha
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2010, 02:28:22 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 02, 2010, 09:55:16 AM
Bahut khoob Bekarar ji. Khwaabon ko bahut khoobsurat roop diya hai aapne apni is ghazal me. Sach... kabhi kabhi khwaabon se bahar nikalne ka mann hi nahi karta hai.. . bahut khoob Bekarar ji... bahut khoob... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sach kaha dost....na jaane kitni jindagiyan.....bas khwabon ke sahare hi kat jaya karti hain......baharhaal....apane rachna ke marm ko samjha..aur saraha ....tah-e-dil se shukriya klaskar ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2010, 02:31:17 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 02, 2010, 09:58:58 AM
Wah Wah Bekaraarji bahut khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause
koi funds nahin chhahiye aapko.aur kitna achha mahal bana lete hain.bahut khoob

Usual Smile bahoot khoob kaha suresh ji aapne.....ek kahawat yaad aa gai.....man ke laddu feeke kyun, aur feeke bhi to thode kyun
bahoot shukriya aapne samay diya..
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