"Khwaish" Chalta Raha..........

by khwaish on April 06, 2012, 09:08:46 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 06, 2012, 12:44:02 PM »
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bahut sunder....and its utmost reality of life...bahut khoob khwaishji......
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«Reply #16 on: April 06, 2012, 01:28:32 PM »
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sabse reqest hai apne sahee lafzon se logon ke sahee mashvire se kalaam kee khoobsoortee ko bdhaaye.ismen ego ko chhod kar kalaam ke behtree soche yaad rakhee hamaaree zimmedaaree samaaj aur aane waalee naslon ko sahee nazeer dene kee hai to ismen kuchh n kuchh apnee ego kee qurbaanee denee hee padegee
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«Reply #17 on: April 06, 2012, 04:43:39 PM »
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ye zarooree naheen ki aap meree baat maane par jahaan tak "SEHRAA" lafz kaamatlab hai to broad sense men uskaa matlab mukut,taaj yaa yoon khaiye ki zimmedaaree bheee hotaa hai.aapne aksar kahte sunaaa hogaa ki is kaam kaa sehraa kiske sar bandhegaa.aur zimmedaariyon men to sukh dukh dono hote hain.
jahaan n pahunche ravi vahaan pahunche kavi.
kai baar kavi yaa shaayar esee baat kah jaataa hai ki use khud uskee ahmiyat kaa pataa naheen hotaa kavivar Bihaaree ke baare men kahaa gayaa hai ki unhone gagar men saagar bharaa hai mujhe jab master ji padhaate the ki  bihaaree ke ek dohe ke bahut saare matlab nikalte hain ab bihaaree ko kyaa ye baat pataa thee.khwaish ji ne jo bhee soch kar likhaa hai vo unkee soch hai ham log usko kis tarah sochte hain ye hamaaraa nazariyaa hai. haan grammar ki baat alag hai.usme kaheen kamee hai to use to har ek ko haq hai kahne kaa.main samjhtaa hoon mere nazariye ko sab log positively lenge

khwaish ji kul milaakar aapkaa kalaam pasand aayaa badhaai ho daad haazir hai
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«Reply #18 on: April 06, 2012, 06:47:56 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause but khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!
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«Reply #19 on: April 07, 2012, 05:00:25 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 06, 2012, 09:08:46 AM
Toot Jaata Hai Gareebi Mein Aksar
 Woh Rishta Jo Khaas Hota Hai....
Paraye Bhi Apne Ho Jaate Hai!!!!!
Jab Paisa Paas Hota Hai..

              ~~Khwaish~~


Yeh Tajurba Kar Ke Bhi Dekh Liya...!!!!!!!!!
Apni Mushkilon Mein Koi Saath Tehra Naa Tha

Main Jisse Meri Duniya Ka Maalik Samaj Baitha.!!!!!!!
Usse Nazdeek Se Dekha To Uska Ka Koi Chehra Naa Tha

Waqt Ke Mutaabik Logon Ki ZaroorateiN Badalti Hai..!!!!!
Jahan MushkileN Thi Wahan, Apno ka Koi Pehra naa Tha

Zakhm Mile Hai To Iski Dawaa Bhi Zaroor Milegi..!!!!!!
Apno Ke Zakhmon Se Badhkar,Koi Zakhm Itna Gehra Naa Tha

Meri Kamzoriyon Ko Kisi Ki Bulandiyon Se Naa Tattolo..!!
Yaad Rakho,Uske Sar Par Majbooriyon ka Sehra Naa Tha

Mujhe Khud par Fakr hai Ke Main Zindagi Se Haara Nahi..!!
"Khwaish"Chalta Raha...Halaat Se Darr Kar Kabhi Tehra Naa Tha



                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
Bahut Khoob!
Aakhiri sher pe khaas taur se daad. Ye jajba kayam rakhiyega Khwaish ji kyonki "man ke haare haar hai, man ke jeete jeet".
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: April 07, 2012, 09:52:09 AM »
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sir apko jitni daad di jaye utni kam hai........u r just a awesome writer.dil se daad sikar kare..
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«Reply #21 on: April 07, 2012, 10:12:59 AM »
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बहुत सुन्दर, हमारी दाद कुबूल फरमाइए
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«Reply #22 on: April 07, 2012, 10:30:23 AM »
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bahut khoob khwaishji...behad sundar...mubarak... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: April 07, 2012, 10:39:18 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 06, 2012, 10:13:16 AM
बहूत खूब लिखा भाई ख्वाइश,..बधाइयाँ, Thumbs UP

@ qalb ji मेरे ख़याल से ख्वाइश जी ने यहाँ "सेहरा" जिसका मतलब रेगिस्तान होता है वो लिखा है ना की "दूल्हे वाला सेहरा" अब शायद आपको पढ़ने मे ठीक लगेगी,  Usual Smile Usual Smile

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Bro
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«Reply #24 on: April 07, 2012, 10:40:34 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on April 06, 2012, 10:39:00 AM
waah Khwaish ji
kamaal ki post hai
bht bht bht khoob
daad daad daad

khus rahie
muskurate rahie

Aap Ka Teh Dil Se Shukriya S.F Ji..

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«Reply #25 on: April 07, 2012, 10:47:05 AM »
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Quote from: Kohinoor on April 06, 2012, 10:47:15 AM
Accha likha hai bhai ji aapne


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«Reply #26 on: April 07, 2012, 10:48:13 AM »
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Quote from: dolly on April 06, 2012, 12:44:02 PM
bahut sunder....and its utmost reality of life...bahut khoob khwaishji......


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«Reply #27 on: April 07, 2012, 12:53:50 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 06, 2012, 01:28:32 PM
sabse reqest hai apne sahee lafzon se logon ke sahee mashvire se kalaam kee khoobsoortee ko bdhaaye.ismen ego ko chhod kar kalaam ke behtree soche yaad rakhee hamaaree zimmedaaree samaaj aur aane waalee naslon ko sahee nazeer dene kee hai to ismen kuchh n kuchh apnee ego kee qurbaanee denee hee padegee

Saheb Aapne Bilkul Sahee Kaha,,Main Aapke Baaton Se Bilkul Sehmati Rakhta Hoon Aur Umeed Karta Hoon, Har Koi Aisa Soche Bhi..

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«Reply #28 on: April 07, 2012, 12:56:49 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 06, 2012, 04:43:39 PM
ye zarooree naheen ki aap meree baat maane par jahaan tak "SEHRAA" lafz kaamatlab hai to broad sense men uskaa matlab mukut,taaj yaa yoon khaiye ki zimmedaaree bheee hotaa hai.aapne aksar kahte sunaaa hogaa ki is kaam kaa sehraa kiske sar bandhegaa.aur zimmedaariyon men to sukh dukh dono hote hain.
jahaan n pahunche ravi vahaan pahunche kavi.
kai baar kavi yaa shaayar esee baat kah jaataa hai ki use khud uskee ahmiyat kaa pataa naheen hotaa kavivar Bihaaree ke baare men kahaa gayaa hai ki unhone gagar men saagar bharaa hai mujhe jab master ji padhaate the ki  bihaaree ke ek dohe ke bahut saare matlab nikalte hain ab bihaaree ko kyaa ye baat pataa thee.khwaish ji ne jo bhee soch kar likhaa hai vo unkee soch hai ham log usko kis tarah sochte hain ye hamaaraa nazariyaa hai. haan grammar ki baat alag hai.usme kaheen kamee hai to use to har ek ko haq hai kahne kaa.main samjhtaa hoon mere nazariye ko sab log positively lenge

khwaish ji kul milaakar aapkaa kalaam pasand aayaa badhaai ho daad haazir hai


Saheb, Mere Liye Aapke Yeh Comments Bahut Zaroori the..Maine Jis Soch Ke saath Likha Tha, Woh Mera Nazariya Tha..zaroori nahi Ke har Koi Ussi Soch Ke Mutaabik usse Samjhe..

Aapko Meri Yeh kalaam Bhi pasand Aayi, yeh jaankar Mujhe Behad Khushi hui hai..Aapka Tahe Dil Se bahut bahut Shukriya.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #29 on: April 07, 2012, 12:58:01 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 06, 2012, 06:47:56 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause but khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!


Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Hriday ji icon_flower icon_flower
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