"Khwaish" Dil Mein Deewarein Ho To Insaan Kya Keejiye

by khwaish on January 28, 2011, 02:55:12 PM
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Woh Aadmi Hai To Hua Kijiye
Woh Aadmi Hi Bankar Jiye Dua Kijiye

Muflisi Ke Daur Mein Jo Halaaton Se Ladta Raha!!
uske Himmat Ki Har Jagah Charcha Kijiye

Muskuraane Se Kabhi Taqdeerein Nahi Badalti!!!
Par Kabhi Apne Dard par Bhi Muskurane Ka Hausla Kijiye

Humne To Jugnuo Se Bhi Sirf Yehi Seekha!!!
Auron Ke Roshni Ke liye Beshak Khud Jala Kijiye

Apne Gham Ko Chupaane Ke Liye Woh Hasta Raha!!!
Haste-Haste Aankh Bhar Aaye, Itna Naa Hasaa Kijiye

Duayen Kubool Ho Jaaye To Khuda Ko Hi Bhoola Baithe!!!
Eh Insaan  Khuda Ka Humesha Shukar Ada Kijiye..!!!

Gharon Mein Agar Deewarein Ho To Dhal Jaayegi "Khwaish"
Par Agar Dil Mein Deewarein Ho To Insaan Kya Kjiye???

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: January 28, 2011, 03:21:37 PM »
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wah janab kya khub sher hain.
har sher me jeene ki seekh aur raah chipa hai.
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«Reply #2 on: January 28, 2011, 07:16:59 PM »
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Fida hogaya main iss nazm pe dost..
Kya likha hai..wah wah wah wah aur dher sari wah.
Kya baat hai..
Dil tak ponch gayi yeh nazm..
Pehli line se leke akhri line tak, leh nahin toota..
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Dil dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: January 28, 2011, 07:57:30 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2011, 06:23:48 AM »
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Bhaut khoob ...achha mahesush huva padhke
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2011, 08:25:37 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 28, 2011, 03:21:37 PM
wah janab kya khub sher hain.
har sher me jeene ki seekh aur raah chipa hai.
behad umda

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Niralaji, Jo Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..

Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2011, 08:56:42 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on January 28, 2011, 07:16:59 PM
Fida hogaya main iss nazm pe dost..
Kya likha hai..wah wah wah wah aur dher sari wah.
Kya baat hai..
Dil tak ponch gayi yeh nazm..
Pehli line se leke akhri line tak, leh nahin toota..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Dil dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!

bahut bahut bahut bahut Shukriya mere Bhai!!!

Aapke Comments ke bin meri har nazm adhuri hai..

bahut bahut shukriya Dost!! icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2011, 11:44:26 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 28, 2011, 07:57:30 PM
Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji Applause Applause

Teh Dil se Shukriya Rishiji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2011, 06:05:04 AM »
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Muskuraane Se Kabhi Taqdeerein Nahi Badalti!!!
Par Kabhi Apne Dard par Bhi Muskurane Ka Hausla Kijiye


Wah Ji... Wah... Behad Khoobsurat... Aise likhte rahiye...Ji...
Excellent Lines...
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2011, 02:45:37 PM »
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Quote from: kishan8888 on January 29, 2011, 06:23:48 AM
Bhaut khoob ...achha mahesush huva padhke

Ji Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya Kishanji
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2011, 02:58:59 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash insaniyat ke naam .

 philosophy mein kafi dakhal hai aapka khwaish ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2011, 02:47:52 PM »
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Quote from: mrkotians on January 30, 2011, 06:05:04 AM
Muskuraane Se Kabhi Taqdeerein Nahi Badalti!!!
Par Kabhi Apne Dard par Bhi Muskurane Ka Hausla Kijiye


Wah Ji... Wah... Behad Khoobsurat... Aise likhte rahiye...Ji...
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Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Mrkotians Ji..

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«Reply #12 on: February 22, 2011, 05:26:46 PM »
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Apne Gham Ko Chupaane Ke Liye Woh Hasta Raha!!!
Haste-Haste Aankh Bhar Aaye, Itna Naa Hasaa Kijiye

Duayen Kubool Ho Jaaye To Khuda Ko Hi Bhoola Baithe!!!
"Khwaish" Khuda Ka Humesha Shukar Ada Kijiye

Gharon Mein Agar Deewarein Ho To Dhal Jaayegi "Khwaish"
Par Agar Dil Mein Deewarein Ho To Insaan Kya Kjiye???

superb lines khwaish ji..and mind blowing post.......
bht sahi kaha hai apne hr ek sher me ji...aur last stanza to bas dil hi le gaya......mastammmmmmmmmmm mast post hai ye aapki khwaish ji....
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«Reply #13 on: March 09, 2011, 10:04:16 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on January 31, 2011, 02:58:59 PM
bahut khoobsurat peshkash insaniyat ke naam .

 philosophy mein kafi dakhal hai aapka khwaish ji
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Sureshji..Aapka Tehhhhhhhh Dilllll Se Shukriya..

Aur Philosphy ka Pata Nahi Sureshji par Haan insaaniyat Par Likhna Bahut Acha Lagta Hai..
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«Reply #14 on: March 09, 2011, 10:15:35 AM »
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are khwaishji ye kaise chhut gaya.. hamse padne se... bahut khub hai.... badiya...

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