"Khwaish" Zindagi ka Yeh Safar Hai Lamba Bahut!!!!

by khwaish on June 30, 2010, 12:35:03 PM
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Kuch Din Pehle Ki Baat Hai, main Train Ki Journey Kar Raha Tha,Mere Saath Wali berth mein Ek Ajnabi Se Kuch Baatein hui,Aur dekhte-Dekhte Hum Doston Ki Tarah Baatein karne lage, Phir Ek station Aaya Jahan par Usse Utarna Tha,Ek Duje Ko Alwida Kehkar Hum Dono Apni-Apni Raah Chal Pade...Uss Waqt Baithe-Baithe Main Kuch Likh Gaya, Main Train Ke Iss Safar Ko Zindagi Ke Safar  Ke saath Jod Raha Hoon,Bas Kuch Baatein Hai jo Lafzon Mein Utaar raha Hoon Umeed Karta Hoon Humesha Ki Tarah Aap Sab Zaroor Sarahenge...

Tha Sirf Yahan Tak Ka Yeh Safar Apna
Shukriya Tera Eh Ajnabi Bahut...

Aakhri Manzil To sabhi ki Ek Hi Hai
Par Raah mein Hai Raaste Bahut...

Tu Bhi Daud Raha Hai Hum bhi Daud Rahe Hai
Sohrat Ko Chumne Ki Hai Dil Mein Hai Hasrat bahut..

Talaashthe Hai hum sab yahan Par Sirf Do Pal Khushi Ke,
Jeene Ke Liye Yahan Par Hai Gham-e-Zindagi Bahut...

Kisi Rishte Mein Woh Apnapan To Nahi,
Par Phir bhi Kuch Log Apne Hai!!!!
Dil Ko Tasalli Dene Ke Liye Hai Yeh Marham Bahut...

Musafir To Yahan Milte-Bichadte Hai!!!
"Khwaish" Zindagi ka Yeh Safar Hai Lamba Bahut....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2010, 12:50:05 PM »
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bahut khoob jazbaat likhe hai khwaish ji..sach kaha hai apne manzil sabki ek hi hai per raste hazaro hai..kuch asaan tou kuch mushkil jite raho zindadili se isi ka naam zindgi hai...
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«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2010, 05:05:54 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2010, 01:29:23 PM »
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Bahaut acha likha hai apne...Bahaut sahi bhi hai ke zindagi ki raah behad lambi hai, manzil ek hi hai mage raaste raaste alag alag...Bahaut khoob Dost as usual..
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«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2010, 05:22:37 PM »
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bohut accha khawish ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2010, 01:45:00 PM »
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Bohat achche Khwaish saheb................
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2010, 05:46:15 AM »
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WAH WAH KHWAISH JI BAHUT ACHHI POEM LIKHI HAI. DAAD HAZIR HAI.
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2010, 07:44:49 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on June 30, 2010, 12:50:05 PM
bahut khoob jazbaat likhe hai khwaish ji..sach kaha hai apne manzil sabki ek hi hai per raste hazaro hai..kuch asaan tou kuch mushkil jite raho zindadili se isi ka naam zindgi hai...

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Geetji..

Aapne Iss Poetry ke ehsaas ko sahi samjha..sach kaha aapne..Zindadili se jeena hi zindagi hai..
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2010, 08:07:29 AM »
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kasam khuda ki aap ne ye kya dikha diya
mere soye hue un jakhmon ko fir se hila diya
sapna mera aap ki gajal se milta hai
haqikat me hamne apni mohaabaat ka sila diya
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«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2010, 12:48:58 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 30, 2010, 12:58:25 PM
Bahut Khub Khwaish Bhai...

Likhte Rahiye...


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mere Bhai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2010, 12:57:27 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 01, 2010, 05:05:54 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kapilji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2010, 10:14:04 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on July 01, 2010, 01:29:23 PM
Bahaut acha likha hai apne...Bahaut sahi bhi hai ke zindagi ki raah behad lambi hai, manzil ek hi hai mage raaste raaste alag alag...Bahaut khoob Dost as usual..
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Shukriya Bhai rahim!!!!

Bas Yhi saath Dete Rahiyega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2010, 10:27:51 AM »
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kya baat hai ek aur baat aapne bahut achhi kahiki hum do pal ki khushiyan hi to dhundhate firte hai,
sach hai pata nahin hota ki wo khushi kab aur kahan mil jaye.
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Quote from: khwaish on June 30, 2010, 12:35:03 PM
Kuch Din Pehle Ki Baat Hai, main Train Ki Journey Kar Raha Tha,Mere Saath Wali berth mein Ek Ajnabi Se Kuch Baatein hui,Aur dekhte-Dekhte Hum Doston Ki Tarah Baatein karne lage, Phir Ek station Aaya Jahan par Usse Utarna Tha,Ek Duje Ko Alwida Kehkar Hum Dono Apni-Apni Raah Chal Pade...Uss Waqt Baithe-Baithe Main Kuch Likh Gaya, Main Train Ke Iss Safar Ko Zindagi Ke Safar  Ke saath Jod Raha Hoon,Bas Kuch Baatein Hai jo Lafzon Mein Utaar raha Hoon Umeed Karta Hoon Humesha Ki Tarah Aap Sab Zaroor Sarahenge...

Tha Sirf Yahan Tak Ka Yeh Safar Apna
Shukriya Tera Eh Ajnabi Bahut...

Aakhri Manzil To sabhi ki Ek Hi Hai
Par Raah mein Hai Raaste Bahut...

Tu Bhi Daud Raha Hai Hum bhi Daud Rahe Hai
Sohrat Ko Chumne Ki Hai Har EK Dil Mein Hai Hasrat bahut..

Talaashthe Hai hum sab yahan Par Sirf Do Pal Khushi Ke,
Jeene Ke Liye Yahan Par Hai Gham-e-Zindagi Bahut...

Kisi Rishte Mein Woh Apnapan To Nahi,
Par Phir bhi Kuch Log Apne Hai!!!!
Dil Ko Tasalli Dene Ke Liye Hai Yeh Marham Bahut...

Musafir To Yahan Milte-Bichadte Hai!!!
"Khwaish" Zindagi ka Yeh Safar Hai Lamba Bahut....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2010, 11:06:08 AM »
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bht gehri baat sidhe saral shabdon me keh gaye khwaish ji aap
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«Reply #14 on: October 22, 2010, 04:36:56 PM »
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Quote from: rayees abdullah on July 01, 2010, 05:22:37 PM
bohut accha khawish ji

Teh Dilllllll Se Shukriya Rayees Ji..
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