***kis daur se zindgi gujar rahi hai***

by kaushikbhawna008 on August 27, 2008, 09:41:01 AM
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Bhawna man mei badle ki umad rahi hai
Jaane kis daur se zindgi gujar rahi hai
Jinhe dekh kabhi muskurate the ham
Unhe aaj dekh aansuon ki jhadi beh rahi hai

Jaane kis daur se zindgi gujar rahi hai

Khuda bachaye rakhe mujhe is gunaah se
Jo badle ki aag man mei mere jal rahi hai
Kar du aaj khatam kissa ye gam-e-daur ka
Bas yahi soch dil mei ek pal rahi hai

Jaane kis daur se zindgi gujar rahi hai

Kaun hai jo apna keh sakega hamei
Bas tanhaiyon mei hi zindgi sambhal rahi hai
Dheere dheere bhuj raha hai zindgi ka Deepak
Dukho ki aandhi itni tez chal rahi hai

Jaane kis daur se zindgi gujar rahi hai

“Bhawna” hai man ki bholi ye sabhi jaante hain
fir bhi har ek ki ungli meri aur uth rahi hai
bekasur thi mein gunahgaar hai mujhko banaya
isliye sabse nafrat si ab ho chali hai

jaane kis daur se zindgi gujar rahi hai

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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2008, 09:47:03 AM »
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Touching and Sentimental...
Very Nicely written Bhawna..  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2008, 10:05:46 AM »
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Jaane kis daur se zindgi gujar rahi hai

Kaun hai jo apna keh sakega hamei
Bas tanhaiyon mei hi zindgi sambhal rahi hai
Dheere dheere bhuj raha hai zindgi ka Deepak
Dukho ki aandhi itni tez chal rahi hai

Bahut accha likha hai Bhawna. dard bara kalam aapne
bahut hi accha likha hai.
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2008, 04:16:13 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob bhawna... bahoot ache shabdo se apne dil ki bhawnao ko shabdo main piroya hai... good creation!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2008, 04:43:43 PM »
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Very touching and emotional creation Bhawna...Bohot khoob Applause
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2008, 09:18:16 AM »
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thnk u so much all of u
jo aapne mere likhe ko saraha    Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2012, 12:48:40 PM »
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bahut khoob......
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