kis maatam se ubar aaya hai ye insaan... Intezar !

by Intezar on November 13, 2010, 08:04:22 PM
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         ek koshish us wakt ke haalaat par... jab azaadi ke baad humare desh mein
sarhad banaa di gayi thi us wakt ke majboor insaan ka dard likhne ki ek adhoori koshish ki hai humne... !

   Banaa kar sarhade baant diya logo ko bhi kuch Siyayast daaro ne
   Machaa kar qatle aam thamaa diya hume bhi khanjar gunehgaaro ne

   Wo ho gaye khuda jinko thi karni apne watan par kabhi khudaayi
   Par na jaana kabhi ki zindagi ko kaise behlaaya kismat ke maaro ne

   Na jaane kaun si kaum hai ye jo lahoo bahaana chahati hai sabka
   Ab tak to kisi majhab me suna nahi kissa jaan ki azmaayish ka

   Le kar saamaan kuch jeene ka,tay kiya safar hazaaro meel ka sabne
   Bad iske bhi kya hua haasil, unhe mila bhi to  naam muzaahid ka

   Aankho me aansuo ka sailaab liye, dil me apne ghar ki yaad liye,
   Mitti se apni door chala har insaan hokar  shikaar kisi saazish ka

   Kis maatam se ubar aaya hai ye insaan ki ab aansu bhi na behte hain
   Kaheen door waadiyon mein wo jala aaya hai mahal apni khwaahish ka

   Ab toot bhi jaayen to kya rishta hai, kya gham kisi se door jaane ka
   patthar hogayi hain aankhen dekh kar silsila laasho ki numaayish ka,

   ek dusre ke seene se lag kar ro le ek baar jinhe chhod aaye kahin door
   hai isi Intezar mein har insaan, khatam karo silsila lahoo ki baarish ka…!


                                                    Shukriya
                                                    Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: November 14, 2010, 01:38:47 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob Intezar ji,heart touching  great creation,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 14, 2010, 03:39:35 PM »
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Janab Intezaar sahab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab bahot hi umdaa ashaar kahe hai.....
Kafi tadakte fadakte aur dil se nikle huye ashaar lagte hai ... Waah janab bahut khoob.... Daad Hazir hai.....

Haan kuch tip dena chaheNge ... waise hum koi shayar wayar nahi hai. par jitna shayari ko samjhe hai aur jaise shayari ki jati hai us hisab se kaheNge ke radiff aur kafiye ko samjhiye.. aur us hisab se likhiye aapki kalaam Masha Allah behad khub rang dikhayeNgi..

Chunki aapke khayaaloN meiN behad gehrai hai ...
Dil se daad kabool farmaiye....

Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile        
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«Reply #3 on: November 14, 2010, 05:25:51 PM »
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bahoot hi dil ko chho lenewale ashaar h aapke Aisa laga jaise aapne khud is derd ko mahsoose kiya h Keep writting
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«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2010, 07:59:33 PM »
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shukriya madhuwesh ji... tahe dil se shukriya !

Intezar !
Quote from: madhuwesh on November 14, 2010, 01:38:47 AM
Bahut hi khoob Intezar ji,heart touching  great creation,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2010, 08:01:51 PM »
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Parwaaj sahab aap ko har baar aap ki har baat hume har baar kubul ki aur is baar bhi... har cheez kya khayal rakha jaayega.. bas ye samajhiye ki is creation mein aisa hi kuch ho gaya jo bhi ho gaya...
aap huyi saath banaaye rehiye... aur aap ka shukriya har baar ki tarah dil se shukriya !

Intezar

Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 14, 2010, 03:39:35 PM
Janab Intezaar sahab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab bahot hi umdaa ashaar kahe hai.....
Kafi tadakte fadakte aur dil se nikle huye ashaar lagte hai ... Waah janab bahut khoob.... Daad Hazir hai.....

Haan kuch tip dena chaheNge ... waise hum koi shayar wayar nahi hai. par jitna shayari ko samjhe hai aur jaise shayari ki jati hai us hisab se kaheNge ke radiff aur kafiye ko samjhiye.. aur us hisab se likhiye aapki kalaam Masha Allah behad khub rang dikhayeNgi..

Chunki aapke khayaaloN meiN behad gehrai hai ...
Dil se daad kabool farmaiye....

Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2010, 08:02:55 PM »
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yasmeen ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya... khush rahiye...  bahut saara shukriya !

Intezar !

Quote from: yasmeen khan on November 14, 2010, 05:25:51 PM
bahoot hi dil ko chho lenewale ashaar h aapke Aisa laga jaise aapne khud is derd ko mahsoose kiya h Keep writting
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«Reply #7 on: November 15, 2010, 11:11:01 AM »
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bahut badhiya...ji..dher  saaari daad~

ek baat share karna chahuga yahan..

us waqt ke kashmir ke raja ya kahen jo bhi leader the unhone bahut koshish ki apni akhiri saans tak ki bantwara na ho..
or Desh ki kismat bhi dekho hamare paas aise aise SO CALLED " MAHAAN MAHATMA LOG" the jinke ek bar kehene se poori awaam chupchap man jati or shayad bantwara na hota par unhone kisi ko nahi roka....uske bad ki sari khoon ki nadiya or aaj tak chhoti chhoti baton par hone wale dange marte masoom log..kya kya nahi dekha hamne in khokhle siyasatdaron ke karan...or aaj bhi wahi manzar jaari hai...
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«Reply #8 on: November 15, 2010, 11:13:38 AM »
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Shukriya Abhi ji...

aur aapne sahi baat kahi hai.. ki aaj bhi wahi manjar hai thamaa kuch bhi nahin hai... har maasoom jaan aaj bhi khauf mein jee rahi hai... aapne ise dil se padha iske liye dhere saara shukriya abhi ji...!

Intezar !
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«Reply #9 on: November 22, 2010, 06:42:06 PM »
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intezar ji.......kya khub likha hai aapne..partition k dard aur yahan wahan k bichde hue logon ka dard kya khub bayaan kiya hai tumne
bht hi achche sher likhe hain aur puri rachna ki to baat hi alag hai..heart touching poem intezar ji
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«Reply #10 on: November 22, 2010, 06:47:22 PM »
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Shukriya Kasak ji... bahut bahut shukriya... !
dard aap ko samajh aaya bas yahi mera maksad tha is poem ke zariye ki logo tak us haalaat ka manzar saamne aaye...

Intezar !

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on November 22, 2010, 06:42:06 PM
intezar ji.......kya khub likha hai aapne..partition k dard aur yahan wahan k bichde hue logon ka dard kya khub bayaan kiya hai tumne
bht hi achche sher likhe hain aur puri rachna ki to baat hi alag hai..heart touching poem intezar ji
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