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«Reply #15 on: July 18, 2010, 12:25:27 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 03, 2010, 04:25:53 AM
Wah wah Kapil ji,bahut hi khoob,dil ko chu jaati hai aapke kavita.lovely creation,beautiful lines by Veea ji and Cara ji.excellent Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile

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«Reply #16 on: July 18, 2010, 12:28:55 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on June 03, 2010, 01:32:18 PM
bahut bahut shukriya Veena ji.... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!


gazal aapki acchi
hum to yu hi tarif  pa liye
likhne walo ki mahfil me
do akshar humne bhi jama liye
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«Reply #17 on: July 18, 2010, 01:24:37 PM »
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Nice verse and thought.... Kapil-ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
good support by Cara & v/v ji.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mujhe ek pyara sa gana yaad aa gaya.....jo aapke bhavo ko support karta hai......

Kisiki muskuraahaton pe ho nisaar
Kisika dard mil sake to le udhaar
Kisike waaste ho tere dil mein pyaar
Jeena issi ka naam hai) -2

(Maana apni jeb se fakeer hain
Phir bhi yaaron dil ke ham ameer hain) -2
Mitte jo pyaar ke liye woh zindagi
Jale bahaar ke liye woh zindagi
Kisi ko ho na ho hamein to aitbaar
Jeena issi kaa naam hai

(Rishta dil se dil ke aitbaar ka
Zinda hai hameen se naam pyaar ka) -2
Ke mar ke bhi kisi ko yaad aayenge
Kisi ke aansuon mein muskuraayenge
Kahega phool har kali se baar baar
Jeena issi kaa naam hai
Kisiki muskuraahaton pe ho nisaar..
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«Reply #18 on: July 18, 2010, 07:24:07 PM »
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thank u so much Koyal ji... aur bahut hi pyaara geet share kiya hai aapne... thanx...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 18, 2010, 01:24:37 PM
Nice verse and thought.... Kapil-ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
good support by Cara & v/v ji.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mujhe ek pyara sa gana yaad aa gaya.....jo aapke bhavo ko support karta hai......

Kisiki muskuraahaton pe ho nisaar
Kisika dard mil sake to le udhaar
Kisike waaste ho tere dil mein pyaar
Jeena issi ka naam hai) -2

(Maana apni jeb se fakeer hain
Phir bhi yaaron dil ke ham ameer hain) -2
Mitte jo pyaar ke liye woh zindagi
Jale bahaar ke liye woh zindagi
Kisi ko ho na ho hamein to aitbaar
Jeena issi kaa naam hai

(Rishta dil se dil ke aitbaar ka
Zinda hai hameen se naam pyaar ka) -2
Ke mar ke bhi kisi ko yaad aayenge
Kisi ke aansuon mein muskuraayenge
Kahega phool har kali se baar baar
Jeena issi kaa naam hai
Kisiki muskuraahaton pe ho nisaar..
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«Reply #19 on: July 18, 2010, 07:48:36 PM »
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Aur koi shabd nahin mile mujhe aapki tareef k liye Klaskar ji...bas jo dil me feelings aai likh di.....

[center]Itne gum leke tu lakhpati to ban sakta hai
Kya kuch gum mujhe apne udhaar de sakta hai
 
Aansuon ki barish me bheegta hai tu har din
Kya kuch ashk se mera chehra bhigo sakta hai

Hai andhera Ghana tu jaise kaali raat ho koi
Kya mere jeewan se ye kadi dhuup hata sakta ahi

Iss kadar khamosh hai ye shant zindagi teri
Kya  mere kaanon me gunjte shor band kar sakta hai

Chahut ki tadap to uthti hai mere bhi dil me
Kya koshish karke mere dil se ye nafrat mita sakta hai

Hai  yakeen tujhe k tu kisiki zindagi ban sakta hai
Lekin kya tu meri zindagi se ye gum k badal hata sakta hai

Thokrain khake zamane ki muskutrata rehta hai tu
Par kyat u mere hothon pe kabhi ye muskaan khila sakta hai…!!!
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«Reply #20 on: July 18, 2010, 08:22:16 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji.... tahe dil se main aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon... aur bahut hi khoobsurti se aapne apne dil ka haal pesh kiya hai ... bahut khoob sarkaar... bahut hi khoob...!!!

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tujhe chot pahuchne se mujhe dard hota hai,
main kaise tujhe apne hisse ke dard de du,

tere har aansoo mitaake bas main muskaan maangu,
kaise apne aansuon se main tera chehra bhigo du,

raat kaali hai andheri uspe ghum ka saaya ghana hai,
pyaar ka deepak jalake main teri raate roshan bana du,

har taraf veerana hai ab, zindagi khaamosh si hai,
teri khaatir main o jaanam khaamoshi ko bhi mita du,

dil me tere nafratein hai, chahatein bhi kam nahi hai,
apni chahat se O jana saari nafraton ko main mita du,

agar yakeen na ho tujhe to aazma ke dekh le tu,
maang le tu jaan meri, tere liye khud ko mita du,

tuta bhi kai baar hoon main, judne ki koshish bhi ki hai,
saath agar tera mile to, saare bandhano ko mita du,

maang loon tujhi se tujhi ko, baahon me bhar loon tujhe main,
mohabbat ka tu iqraar kar le, main saari dooriyon ko mita du...


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«Reply #21 on: July 20, 2010, 04:56:32 AM »
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waahhhh kya khub jawab diya hai Klaskar ji aapne meri baat ka....
sahi me aapke replies padhke na ajeeb si khushi hoti hai.....
thnx alot for repling...and appreciating.....

ab kyun fir iss baat ki deri hai
jab mil gaye hain dil to kya majburi hai
tod k sare bandhan gile shikwon k
tham le hath mera meri bhi manjuri hai
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«Reply #22 on: July 20, 2010, 08:03:37 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne... !!!

Apnapan tera kahin mujhse mere apno ko na lele,
Saadgi teri kahin mujhse mera imaan to na lele,
Humko to inkaar hai ki hume tujhse mohabbat hai,
Darte hain kahin ye jhoot humse hamari jaan to na lele......
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«Reply #23 on: July 20, 2010, 08:10:37 AM »
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Wah wah bahut hi khoob Kapil ji,great lines by Kasak ji.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: July 20, 2010, 08:14:12 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 20, 2010, 08:10:37 AM
Wah wah bahut hi khoob Kapil ji,great lines by Kasak ji.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: July 20, 2010, 05:16:23 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 20, 2010, 08:03:37 AM
bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne... !!!

Apnapan tera kahin mujhse mere apno ko na lele,
Saadgi teri kahin mujhse mera imaan to na lele,
Humko to inkaar hai ki hume tujhse mohabbat hai,
Darte hain kahin ye jhoot humse hamari jaan to na lele......


tere apne mere bhi apne hain jaan
tere imaan k liye de dun main apni jaan
gar main hi teri raste ki deewar hun
to beshak karde mere pyaar se inkaar...!!!
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«Reply #26 on: July 21, 2010, 02:03:55 PM »
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Bahut khoob Kasak ji...!!!

naa inkaar kar paata hoon, na iqraar kar paata hoon,
chahke bhi na main apne chahat ka izhaar kar paata hoon,
kaise kahun tujhse o jaana kya hai mazboori ye meri,
hote huye bhi tera main tera nahi ho paata hoon.....
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«Reply #27 on: July 21, 2010, 02:18:43 PM »
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waahhhh ji.....

na kar paye tu mujhse pyar ka ikraar to koi baat nahin
main dekh sakti hu teri aankhon me pyar apne liye

na ho paye tu mera na ban paye humsafar mera to koi baat nahin
tu sath hai har pal mere ye janti hun main

tere pyaar me bhulkar iss duniya kojii lungi main
k ab tujhe hi apna khuda maan chuki hun main...!!![/b]
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«Reply #28 on: July 22, 2010, 10:50:43 AM »
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Great going....Kapil and kasak-di..... Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

Ye kyaa bannenge kisi ke hothon ki muskaan
Ye bigde nawaab inka he nahi koi bhi emaan


Insaan ko khuda maanne ki galti tum kyu karti ho
Bhawron se waffa kee ummeed tum kyu karti ho


Ye ras-k-lobhe kabhi ess phul par to uss par kabhi
Ye Bharose key laayak hote hi nahee sakhee kabhi
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«Reply #29 on: July 22, 2010, 11:02:52 AM »
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yun na kaho tum mere priywar aise nahin
jo hain ye wo tum samjhi hi nahin

inke dil me hai pyaar beshumaar mere liye
hai inki kya majburi tum samjh sakti hi nahin

rahenge dil o jaan se ye mere ta umra ye pata hai mujhe
inhe na samjhna bewafa ye koi gali gali mandarata bhanwara nahin

meri puja meri ibadat mere khuda hain wo
kya kahun tumhe main k mera immaan hain wo
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