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«Reply #30 on: July 22, 2010, 01:11:56 PM »
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Yu kisi k shabdon k behkaave me n aa sakhee
Himmat nahi jisme iqraar ya inkaar karne ki

Kaise tu usski ho sakegi,hosh me aa sakhee
Mann ki band aankhon se n kar pyaar sakhee

Jeevan hakikat hai nahi koi khawaab sakhee
Ulfat kee uljhano sey ab tu jaag meri sakhee
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«Reply #31 on: July 22, 2010, 01:49:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 22, 2010, 10:50:43 AM
Great going....Kapil and kasak-di..... Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

Ye kyaa bannenge kisi ke hothon ki muskaan
Ye bigde nawaab inka he nahi koi bhi emaan


Insaan ko khuda maanne ki galti tum kyu karti ho
Bhawron se waffa kee ummeed tum kyu karti ho


Ye ras-k-lobhe kabhi ess phul par to uss par kabhi
Ye Bharose key laayak hote hi nahee sakhee kabhi
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«Reply #32 on: July 22, 2010, 01:51:49 PM »
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waah Anamika ji maan gaye aapke jawaab ko aur apne pyaar ke liye aapke aetbaar ko...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 22, 2010, 11:02:52 AM
yun na kaho tum mere priywar aise nahin
jo hain ye wo tum samjhi hi nahin

inke dil me hai pyaar beshumaar mere liye
hai inki kya majburi tum samjh sakti hi nahin

rahenge dil o jaan se ye mere ta umra ye pata hai mujhe
inhe na samjhna bewafa ye koi gali gali mandarata bhanwara nahin

meri puja meri ibadat mere khuda hain wo
kya kahun tumhe main k mera immaan hain wo

bahut khoob Koyal ji...!!! Waise aap Anamika ji ko bhadka kyun rahi hain Usual Smile

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 22, 2010, 01:11:56 PM
Yu kisi k shabdon k behkaave me n aa sakhee
Himmat nahi jisme iqraar ya inkaar karne ki

Kaise tu usski ho sakegi,hosh me aa sakhee
Mann ki band aankhon se n kar pyaar sakhee

Jeevan hakikat hai nahi koi khawaab sakhee
Ulfat kee uljhano sey ab tu jaag meri sakhee
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«Reply #33 on: July 22, 2010, 01:53:16 PM »
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bahut khoob Anamika ji... bahut bahut khoob...!!!
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in hawaon me aisi mehek si hai ki jaise tere badan ko chhuke aayi ho,
suraj ki laali bhi kuch aisi hai ki jaise tere hothon ko chhuke aayi ho,

in fizaon me aaj bechaini si hai ki maano teri wafa ka sandesha leke aayi ho,
in phoolon me kuch yun narmi si hai ki jaise tere baagon se hoke wo aayi ho...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 21, 2010, 02:18:43 PM
waahhhh ji.....

na kar paye tu mujhse pyar ka ikraar to koi baat nahin
main dekh sakti hu teri aankhon me pyar apne liye

na ho paye tu mera na ban paye humsafar mera to koi baat nahin
tu sath hai har pal mere ye janti hun main

tere pyaar me bhulkar iss duniya kojii lungi main
k ab tujhe hi apna khuda maan chuki hun main...!!![/b]
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«Reply #34 on: July 22, 2010, 02:01:59 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 22, 2010, 01:53:16 PM
bahut khoob Anamika ji... bahut bahut khoob...!!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


in hawaon me aisi mehek si hai ki jaise tere badan ko chhuke aayi ho,
suraj ki laali bhi kuch aisi hai ki jaise tere hothon ko chhuke aayi ho,

in fizaon me aaj bechaini si hai ki maano teri wafa ka sandesha leke aayi ho,
in phoolon me kuch yun narmi si hai ki jaise tere baagon se hoke wo aayi ho...


in hawaon me fizaon me mujhe mehsus karta hai tu
dekh to sahi kis kadar mujhpe marta hai tu
suraj chand ki roshni tujhe mera ehsaas dilati hai
fir bhi mujhse durr reh sakega kaise sochta hai tu...!!!
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«Reply #35 on: July 22, 2010, 02:06:50 PM »
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achi mehfil jam rahi hai gud going kasak ji n kapil ji...
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«Reply #36 on: July 22, 2010, 02:10:10 PM »
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Achhe kalaam padhne k liye Ghee dalna padta hai.... Giggle Giggle Giggle
Tap kar hi sona kundan banta hai......
Aapka singhaashan kyu dol raha hai.... Winking Winking Winking
Apni sakhee ko aagaah karna mera farz hai....
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Quote from: klaskar on July 22, 2010, 01:51:49 PM
waah Anamika ji maan gaye aapke jawaab ko aur apne pyaar ke liye aapke aetbaar ko...!!!

bahut khoob Koyal ji...!!! Waise aap Anamika ji ko bhadka kyun rahi hain Usual Smile
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«Reply #37 on: July 23, 2010, 06:20:01 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 22, 2010, 02:06:50 PM
achi mehfil jam rahi hai gud going kasak ji n kapil ji...
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«Reply #38 on: July 23, 2010, 06:21:12 AM »
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hahahahahahaha.... bilkul sahi kahaa aapne Koyal ji... aapka poora farza banta hai apne saheli ko agaah karna ... yunhi lage rahiye....!!!

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Achhe kalaam padhne k liye Ghee dalna padta hai.... Giggle Giggle Giggle
Tap kar hi sona kundan banta hai......
Aapka singhaashan kyu dol raha hai.... Winking Winking Winking
Apni sakhee ko aagaah karna mera farz hai....
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«Reply #39 on: July 23, 2010, 06:21:56 AM »
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bahut khoob Anamika ji...!!!
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suraj kya, chand taaren kya, dharti hai kya aur ambar kya,
tumse dur main hoon hi nahi, jhoot hai kya aur haqiqat kya,

tum me hoon main, aur mujhme ho tum, is baat ko bhi to jaante ho tum,
jism hain do par ek jaan hain hum, tum hi kaho ye bhi koi doori hai kya ....

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 22, 2010, 02:01:59 PM
in hawaon me fizaon me mujhe mehsus karta hai tu
dekh to sahi kis kadar mujhpe marta hai tu
suraj chand ki roshni tujhe mera ehsaas dilati hai
fir bhi mujhse durr reh sakega kaise sochta hai tu...!!!
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«Reply #40 on: July 23, 2010, 01:16:54 PM »
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Aap k kalaam ka sheershak kisi k hothon ki muskaan ban sakta hoon.......
Saarthak ho paaya ya nahi......
Algaav...shikayat...dard... se thodi raahat hetu meri lines...
Haan par meri ye lines aapke hothon par hassee ley he aayee.....
mubaarak ho ye haashay...

Quote from: klaskar on July 23, 2010, 06:21:12 AM
hahahahahahaha.... bilkul sahi kahaa aapne Koyal ji... aapka poora farza banta hai apne saheli ko agaah karna ... yunhi lage rahiye....!!!
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«Reply #41 on: July 23, 2010, 01:42:33 PM »
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Ji bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji mere hothon pe muskaan laane ke liye... sach me kabhi kabhi dard se dur bhi rehna chahiye... achcha lagta hai... Usual Smile shukriya ...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 23, 2010, 01:16:54 PM
Aap k kalaam ka sheershak kisi k hothon ki muskaan ban sakta hoon.......
Saarthak ho paaya ya nahi......
Algaav...shikayat...dard... se thodi raahat hetu meri lines...
Haan par meri ye lines aapke hothon par hassee ley he aayee.....
mubaarak ho ye haashay...
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«Reply #42 on: July 23, 2010, 02:14:18 PM »
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Ye kaam tou tha kasak-di ka..... Mujhe karna pada... Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle
Har chehre par Muskaan bikherne ka waada hai unka... wave
Har dil me umang jagaana.. hello
Ye pehchaan hai unki...  icon_flower
Par wo ulajh gayee aapke khatte-meethe aaropo me.... sad11 sad11 sad7 sad7
Aakhir aapki kalaakaari kaam kar he gayee..... icon_salut



Quote from: klaskar on July 23, 2010, 01:42:33 PM
Ji bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji mere hothon pe muskaan laane ke liye... sach me kabhi kabhi dard se dur bhi rehna chahiye... achcha lagta hai... Usual Smile shukriya ...!!!
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«Reply #43 on: July 25, 2010, 09:14:24 PM »
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Hahahahahaha... aap bhi khoob chhedti hain... maine kahaan uljhaaya aapki Kasak di ko... wo to bahut suljhi hui hain... par sach kahun to unhone hi firse likhne pe majboor kiya hai... kaafi dino se kuch likh hi nahi paa raha tha... ab fir likhne laga hoon unki kavitaayein padh ke... Usual Smile

wo uljhi nahi hain meri baaton mein,
badi suljhi hain wo, badi sayani hain,
isme meri koi kalaakaari nahi hai,
main likhta nahi wo likhwaati hain...

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Ye kaam tou tha kasak-di ka..... Mujhe karna pada... Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle
Har chehre par Muskaan bikherne ka waada hai unka... wave
Har dil me umang jagaana.. hello
Ye pehchaan hai unki...  icon_flower
Par wo ulajh gayee aapke khatte-meethe aaropo me.... sad11 sad11 sad7 sad7
Aakhir aapki kalaakaari kaam kar he gayee..... icon_salut
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«Reply #44 on: July 26, 2010, 03:49:29 AM »
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shukriya klaskar ji...aapki tareef k liye...
aapne itni ijjat di itna sath diya uske liye kabhi aapka shukriya nahin kar paungi...
fir bhi dil se kehna chahungi thnx a lott for all the replies..and appreciation..
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