Kiske kadmon ki aati aahat hai..... mann

by mann.mann on February 06, 2012, 10:45:52 AM
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Dil ke andar dimag ke bhitar
Jane ye kaisi sugbugahat hai.
Koi aaya nahin hai muddat se
Kiske kadamon ki aati aahat hai.

Zindagi jal hai koi makade ka
Iska har resha uljha uljha hai.
Lakh chahen ise ham suljhana
Kaisi uljhi huyi bunabat hai.

Zindgi aisi ek ibarat hai
Jisko padhna na sikh paye ham.
Isko ab tak samjh nahin paye
Kaisi anpadh si ye likhawat hai.

Koi kanon main aake kahta hai
Koi dil ko hai aake samjhata
Isse anjan rah na payen "mann"
Ham samjhte hain jo sunawat hai.

mann
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2012, 10:58:59 AM »
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bahut khoob mann ji... Usual Smile

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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2012, 11:09:37 AM »
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shukriya janab touhidji
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2012, 11:11:11 AM »
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Bahut bahut bahut umdaa mann bhaai jindaabaad
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2012, 11:31:46 AM »
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shukriya janab saini saheb..

bas aapki hausla afazai ka natiza hai....

yun hi sath dete rahiye
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2012, 01:39:50 PM »
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Mann Jee Aadaab!

kia kahen janab... behad achche aur gehre ahsaas o
khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne... Usual Smile

kafi achche ashaar rahe janab, zindagi waqai behad
uljhi huyi paheli hai aur aapne jin upmaoN se zindagi
ko bayaaN kiyaa hai kabil e tareef hai... Usual Smile

humari dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2012, 02:17:58 PM »
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Bahut khoob !
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2012, 05:18:33 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2012, 01:08:09 AM »
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very nice writing mann saab. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2012, 03:31:39 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya janab parwaaz saheb.. yun hi apni duaon se nawaazte rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2012, 05:15:53 AM »
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waah mann ji bht khoob
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bujh gya woh deepak jo tha armaan ka
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«Reply #11 on: February 07, 2012, 08:17:41 AM »
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dhanyawad sarfiraji... achcha sher kaha aapne
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bahut dhanyawad shakerji
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