Kitabo Ke Panne Palat Ke Sochta Hoo'n..........Touhid

by Mohammad Touhid on August 16, 2011, 07:38:34 PM
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Ye ghazal mujhe bahut pasand hai... (bt its originaly NM)
Ish Ghazal Ke bahut se lafz mai modified kar ke pesh kar raha hoon... Usual Smile
(Isme seventy % ka hissa mera hai... love9)




Kitabo Ke Panne Palat Ke Sochta Hoon,
Yu Palat Jaye Zindagi To Kya Baat hai.,

Tamanna Jo Puri Ho Khwaabo Me,
Haqikat Ban Jaye To Kya Baat Hai.,

Kuchh Log Matlab Ke Liye Dhundte Hai Mujhe,
Bin Matlab Ke Koi Aa Jaye To Kya Baat hai.,

Katal Kar Ke To Sab Le Jayenge Dil Mera,
Koi Apni Baato Se Le Jaye To Kya Baat hai.,

Jo Shareefo Ki Sharafat Me Baat Naa Ho,
Ek Hamara Apna Keh Jaye To Kya Baat Hai.,

Zinda Rehne Tak To Khushi Dunga Mai Sabko,
Kisi Ko Meri Maut Pe Khushi Mil Jaye To kya Baat Hai.,

Kitabo Ke Panne Palat Ke Sochta Hoon,
Yoon Palat Jaye Zindagi To Kya Baat hai..,
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2011, 07:02:43 PM »
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Ye ghazal mujhe bahut pasand hai... (bt its originaly NM)
Ish Ghazal Ke bahut se lafz mai modified kar ke pesh kar raha hoon... Usual Smile
(Isme seventy % ka hissa mera hai... love9)




Kitabo Ke Panne Palat Ke Sochta Hoon,
Yu Palat Jaye Zindagi To Kya Baat hai.,

Tamanna Jo Puri Ho Khwaabo Me,
Haqikat Ban Jaye To Kya Baat Hai.,

Kuchh Log Matlab Ke Liye Dhundte Hai Mujhe,
Bin Matlab Ke Koi Aa Jaye To Kya Baat hai.,

Katal Kar Ke To Sab Le Jayenge Dil Mera,
Koi Apni Baato Se Le Jaye To Kya Baat hai.,

Jo Shareefo Ki Sharafat Me Baat Naa Ho,
Ek Hamara Apna Keh Jaye To Kya Baat Hai.,

Zinda Rehne Tak To Khushi Dunga Mai Sabko,
Kisi Ko Meri Maut Pe Khushi Mil Jaye To kya Baat Hai.,

Kitabo Ke Panne Palat Ke Sochta Hoon,
Yoon Palat Jaye Zindagi To Kya Baat hai..,


wah ji wah kya baat hai


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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2011, 07:09:49 PM »
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Touhid Sahaab Aadaab!

janab waaah Kia baat hai... waqai achche khayaalat
aur ahsaasaat se kalaam ko sajaaya hai aapne.. Usual Smile

humari dili daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2011, 08:40:38 AM »
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wah ji wah kya baat hai


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Shukriya Sheba Ji.... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2011, 08:43:33 AM »
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Touhid Sahaab Aadaab!

janab waaah Kia baat hai... waqai achche khayaalat
aur ahsaasaat se kalaam ko sajaaya hai aapne.. Usual Smile

humari dili daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         



Shukriya Parwaaz Sahab Bahut Bahut Shukriya..... Usual Smile Usual Smile

Ish Dili Mubarak baad ka bhi tahe dil se shukriya..... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2011, 09:33:56 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Tauhid,bahut khoob

Shukriya Khumar JI... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2012, 01:47:38 AM »
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Kitabo Ke Panne Palat Ke Sochta Hoon,
Yu Palat Jaye Zindagi To Kya Baat hai.,

Tamanna Jo Puri Ho Khwaabo Me,
Haqikat Ban Jaye To Kya Baat Hai.,

Kuchh Log Matlab Ke Liye Dhundte Hai Mujhe,
Bin Matlab Ke Koi Aa Jaye To Kya Baat hai.,

Katal Kar Ke To Sab Le Jayenge Dil Mera,
Koi Apni Baato Se Le Jaye To Kya Baat hai.,

Jo Shareefo Ki Sharafat Me Baat Naa Ho,
Ek Hamara Apna Keh Jaye To Kya Baat Hai.,

Zinda Rehne Tak To Khushi Dunga Mai Sabko,
Kisi Ko Meri Maut Pe Khushi Mil Jaye To kya Baat Hai.,

Kitabo Ke Panne Palat Ke Sochta Hoon,
Yoon Palat Jaye Zindagi To Kya Baat hai..,
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