***KOI APNA NA LAGA***

by kaushikbhawna008 on September 18, 2008, 09:25:35 AM
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dunia ki bheed-bhaad mei
sukh-dukh k is vyapaar mei
rishton k is janjaal mei
koi apna na laga

aane-jaane ki hod mei
fashion k is daur mei
apna-teri k is shor mei
koi apna na laga

paiso ki pyaas mei
mit.tte jazbaaton ki laash mei
kuch paane ki aas mei
koi apna na laga

kisi chaht k ehsaas mei
bikhre hue khwaab mei
dil k is vyapaar mei
koi apna na laga
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«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2008, 09:59:55 AM »
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Bhawna,

Wah ! Bahut ache Applause Applause Applause

Nice thoughts Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2008, 10:39:07 AM »
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Very nice bhawna.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2008, 05:14:43 AM »
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shukriya rajbir ji and shukriya natural ji   
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2008, 06:02:51 AM »
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bahoot khoob likha bhawna aapne......
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2008, 06:05:27 AM »
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hamare likhe ko padhne aur sarahne k liye bohut bohut shukriya sanjeev ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2008, 03:20:13 PM »
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Nice One Kaushik Ji,.
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2008, 09:37:58 AM »
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thnk u jaanasheen ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2008, 09:45:28 AM »
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dunia ki bheed-bhaad mei
sukh-dukh k is vyapaar mei
rishton k is janjaal mei
koi apna na laga

aane-jaane ki hod mei
fashion k is daur mei
apna-teri k is shor mei
koi apna na laga

paiso ki pyaas mei
mit.tte jazbaaton ki laash mei
kuch paane ki aas mei
koi apna na laga

kisi chaht k ehsaas mei
bikhre hue khwaab mei
dil k is vyapaar mei
koi apna na laga


Bahut Khoob Bhawnaji.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2008, 11:18:41 AM »
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Ati sundar Bhawnaji

Is matalbi beraham sansaar mein
Sab khoye rahte hain apne aap mein
Har chote bade kaaraj ke aadh mein
Sab rahte hain apne faeyde ki khoj mein

Is matalbi awa gaman sansaar mein
Kuch lahme aur jeene ke aas mein
Maut ko maut dilane ke fariyaad mein
Sab rahte hain apne faeyde ki khoj mein

Ab aap hi batayen ki is matalbi sansaar mein
Jahan sab rahte hain apne faeyde ki khoj mein
Bus ab yoon hi samajh le ki ye hai ek bura sapna
Jahan bhool mein bhi na  lagega aap ko koi apna
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2008, 07:15:56 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Bhawna and Rajesh Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2008, 07:30:24 AM »
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shukriya rajesh ji
celmira ji and khwahish ji
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«Reply #12 on: November 11, 2008, 08:00:10 AM »
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har rishte se mukh mod aayi hoon mein
shyd is dard ki ek parchaayi hoon mein
jo bhi dekhta hai mujhe kehta hai bas yahi
jaane kyu is jahaan mei aayi hoon mein


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«Reply #13 on: December 23, 2008, 06:03:08 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Bhawna and Rajesh Applause
Thanks Celmira Ji
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«Reply #14 on: February 08, 2009, 08:26:13 AM »
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har rishte se mukh mod aayi hoon mein
shyd is dard ki ek parchaayi hoon mein
jo bhi dekhta hai mujhe kehta hai bas yahi
jaane kyu is jahaan mei aayi hoon mein


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Nice lines Bhawna Ji
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