KOI GILA NAHI......(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on October 06, 2008, 02:34:12 PM

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sajid_ghayel

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WOH KEHTE HAIN YEH SAFAR BHALA NAHI
MANZIL TAK AA GAYE KOI MILA NAHI

UMR BHAR AAKHO ME USKI UDASI THI
JAB BHI POOCHA HAS KE KAHA KOI GILA NAHI

KISMAT KO APNI ROYE YA APNE HUNAR KO
MALI KE GHAR KA AAGAN AUR KOI PHOOL KHILA NAHI

JO WOH ROOTHE MAI MANAOO JO MAI ROOTHU WOH MANAYE
AISA SHEHAR ME GHAYEL KE KOI SILSILA NAHI

-SG-


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honeyrose

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Re: KOI GILA NAHI......(GHAYEL)

«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2008, 05:50:20 PM »

Bohat khoob umda likha hai aapne sajid ji..g88


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: KOI GILA NAHI......(GHAYEL)

«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2008, 03:44:33 AM »

thanks honey

Quote from: honeyrose on October 06, 2008, 05:50:20 PM

Bohat khoob umda likha hai aapne sajid ji..g88


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Tanha(Saurabh)

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Re: KOI GILA NAHI......(GHAYEL)

«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2008, 04:45:32 AM »

bohat bohat bohat behtareen ghayel ji... bohat khoob.. Applause


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badnaam_shayar

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Re: KOI GILA NAHI......(GHAYEL)

«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2008, 05:06:40 AM »

Nice One Ghayal....!!!

Taraste hai hum...
Ab bhi uski Mohabbat ko....

Jo abhi Tak hume mila nahi...

Shikayat hai mujhe khud se....
Mohabbat ya Khuda se koi gila nahi...!!!!


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kaushikbhawna008

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«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2008, 05:20:13 AM »

nice creation ghayal ji Applause


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: KOI GILA NAHI......(GHAYEL)

«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2008, 06:55:21 AM »

thank you very much tanha appne mera kalam pada bas yahi kafi tha aapki tareef to mere liye bonus hain

Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on October 07, 2008, 04:45:32 AM

bohat bohat bohat behtareen ghayel ji... bohat khoob.. Applause

Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on October 07, 2008, 04:45:32 AM

bohat bohat bohat behtareen ghayel ji... bohat khoob.. Applause


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: KOI GILA NAHI......(GHAYEL)

«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2008, 06:56:57 AM »

double thank you badnam for appreciating my work with such a beautiful reply

Quote from: badnaam_shayar on October 07, 2008, 05:06:40 AM

Nice One Ghayal....!!!

Taraste hai hum...
Ab bhi uski Mohabbat ko....

Jo abhi Tak hume mila nahi...

Shikayat hai mujhe khud se....
Mohabbat ya Khuda se koi gila nahi...!!!!


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: KOI GILA NAHI......(GHAYEL)

«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2008, 06:58:06 AM »

thank you bhavna

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 07, 2008, 05:20:13 AM

nice creation ghayal ji Applause


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: KOI GILA NAHI......(GHAYEL)

«Reply #9 on: October 07, 2008, 07:03:04 AM »

u r welcome ji :notworty:

aaye jo fiza har baag ujad jaate hain
gam-e-daur mei apne saaye bhi choot jaate hain
milte hai yu to anek zindgi k safar mei
par chaht k pal na jaane kyu badal jaate hain


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abdbundeli

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«Reply #10 on: October 07, 2008, 07:16:20 AM »

"UMR BHAR AAKHO ME USKI UDASI THI
JAB BHI POOCHA HAS KE KAHA KOI GILA NAHI"
'Meethhee-see bheegee-bheegee antah weidanaa ki kalpnaa ka sunder shabdaankan' kiyaa gayaa hai, sajid_ghayel ji!
Applause

Waisey to zindagee yun hi hans key guzaar dee:
Aankhoun mein eik qatarah-e-aansoon bhi rahaa roz!
Jeenaa thaa us key waasitey, woh khush rahey, 'abd',
Itnee hi aarzoo thee; aur, yoon hi rahaa roz!!
- abd bundeli


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sajid_ghayel

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«Reply #11 on: October 07, 2008, 07:20:18 AM »

HUM TERI DAD KO ITNA TADPE HAIN ABD
AAJ TU BURA BHI KEHTA TO ACHCHA LAGTA

-SG-

Quote from: abdbundeli on October 07, 2008, 07:16:20 AM


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abdbundeli

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Re: KOI GILA NAHI......(GHAYEL)

«Reply #12 on: October 07, 2008, 08:07:42 AM »

Bhaley ko, koun buraa kahtaa hai? Sajid_Ghayel!
Mujh ko to koyee bhi insaan buraa naheen lagtaa!!
Ham wahee kartey hain, hotaa hai HUKM jo ham ko;
Choon ki, woh achchhaa hai, hukmaat burey kyoun deygaa?
- abd bundeli