|| Koi Humse Bhi Dil ||

by Matrix Guy on February 10, 2011, 06:55:10 AM
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|| Koi Humse Bhi Dil ||

Raahe Ho Jati Asaan Koi Sath To Aataa
Ya Khuda Mere Dil Ki Sunne Koi Baat To Aataa

Har Mod Par Dekha Kiye Hum To Mud Mud Kar
Apna  Saya Hi Sahi Koi Mere Baad To Aataa

Tapti Dhoop Me Chala Ja Raha Hu Ek Arse Se
Ee Malik  Tu Hi Kabhi Rahmat Ki Bar-saat To Lataa

Ye Kesa Nasib Diya Tune Muje Parwar-Digar
Dil Todne Ko Hi Sahi Koi Sode-baaj To Aataa

Sab Karte Rahe Waar Meri Peeth Par Bujdilo Ki Tarah
Tamaanaa Hi Rahi Samne Koi Raqib Jabaaj To Aataa


Thankyou !
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2011, 07:10:52 AM »
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mast mast---
ye poem to jabardast hai.
fariyaad hai ya duhai hai ya dard hai sab kuch to hai
aur yaara kamaal hai kamaal.
mene samjh liya iska ek theme aur tumhare sochne ka andaaz.
daad hai ji daad
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2011, 08:07:20 AM »
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Waah ji waah utkarsh ji padhakr yu laga bade jasb-e-junoon se likha ho ye kalaam bahut khoob ji..
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2011, 08:37:37 AM »
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kya kahun ji.....
bas padha ..fir padha fir wapas padha..
.aur jo feel kiya wo kehna yahan possible nahin....
well i dont think k aapko batana pade k kya feel hua hai...
u knw me better thn any1 else...or even me...... icon_king

aankhein num hain meri kuch yaadon me khokar
kaash koi inn palkon se aansun ponchh jata

lekar uska naam jeete rahe hain hum sari umra
ye baat jaakar koi uss humdum ko to samjhata

lakeerein nahin hain uske naam ki mere hathon me
koi ye kehta to mere tute dil ko sukun to mil jata

kaise bhulun unn haseen lamhon ko main ee jaan
tu aakar ek baar mujhe itna hi tarika  bata jata

nahin jee sakti iss tarah har pal marte hue main
chain se palkein mund jati jo ekbar tu surat dikha jata....!!!
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2011, 02:30:52 PM »
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Nice Creation Uttkarsh JI
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2011, 05:23:20 AM »
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wowwwwww.............

anamika ji kya baat he bahot time baad apka esa jawab dekhne ko mila he......well u know i already told u that u r best replier at yo......bahot hi khubsurat jawab.........and ya i know u more than urself.........god bless u dear....

nirali batoo wale nirala ji, geet ji and rishi bro......thx a lot u all ........wese rishi ji apka naam padte hi (sahnata bai) yaad aa gayi........dekho abhi bhi hasi aa gayi..........thx dear
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2011, 06:28:44 AM »
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oyee hoyeeee....kya khoob lihah ereee...


khade he usi chaurahe par aaj bhi tere liye
sanam dil dene na sahi meri jaan lene to ataa~
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2011, 05:50:14 PM »
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|| Koi Humse Bhi Dil ||

Raahe Ho Jati Asaan Koi Sath To Aataa
Ya Khuda Mere Dil Ki Sunne Koi Baat To Aataa

Har Mod Par Dekha Kiye Hum To Mud Mud Kar
Apna  Saya Hi Sahi Koi Mere Baad To Aataa

Tapti Dhoop Me Chala Ja Raha Hu Ek Arse Se
Ee Malik  Tu Hi Kabhi Rahmat Ki Bar-saat To Lataa

Ye Kesa Nasib Diya Tune Muje Parwar-Digar
Dil Todne Ko Hi Sahi Koi Sode-baaj To Aataa

Sab Karte Rahe Waar Meri Peeth Par Bujdilo Ki Tarah
Tamaanaa Hi Rahi Samne Koi Raqib Jabaaj To Aataa


Thankyou !

bahut khoob matrix ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2011, 01:11:09 AM »
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|| Koi Humse Bhi Dil ||

Raahe Ho Jati Asaan Koi Sath To Aataa
Ya Khuda Mere Dil Ki Sunne Koi Baat To Aataa

Har Mod Par Dekha Kiye Hum To Mud Mud Kar
Apna  Saya Hi Sahi Koi Mere Baad To Aataa

Tapti Dhoop Me Chala Ja Raha Hu Ek Arse Se
Ee Malik  Tu Hi Kabhi Rahmat Ki Bar-saat To Lataa

Ye Kesa Nasib Diya Tune Muje Parwar-Digar
Dil Todne Ko Hi Sahi Koi Sode-baaj To Aataa

Sab Karte Rahe Waar Meri Peeth Par Bujdilo Ki Tarah
Tamaanaa Hi Rahi Samne Koi Raqib Jabaaj To Aataa


Thankyou !

Too Good ....... Matrix Ji !

dil se daad !
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«Reply #9 on: February 18, 2011, 09:00:05 PM »
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|| Koi Humse Bhi Dil ||

Raahe Ho Jati Asaan Koi Sath To Aataa
Ya Khuda Mere Dil Ki Sunne Koi Baat To Aataa

Har Mod Par Dekha Kiye Hum To Mud Mud Kar
Apna  Saya Hi Sahi Koi Mere Baad To Aataa

Tapti Dhoop Me Chala Ja Raha Hu Ek Arse Se
Ee Malik  Tu Hi Kabhi Rahmat Ki Bar-saat To Lataa

Ye Kesa Nasib Diya Tune Muje Parwar-Digar
Dil Todne Ko Hi Sahi Koi Sode-baaj To Aataa

Sab Karte Rahe Waar Meri Peeth Par Bujdilo Ki Tarah
Tamaanaa Hi Rahi Samne Koi Raqib Jabaaj To Aataa


Thankyou !


NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAICE M.G
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«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2011, 05:34:10 AM »
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arree maine to ye post aaj dekhi.....
jabardast likha hai mg.....
tooooooooo... goooood...
i lyk 2 & 4 one alot.....
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