kotaahii.............(K_A):Shairi - E

khamosh_aawaaz

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   khudgarzi mein aisii behayaai rahi.!
   ke wafaa mein zaraa si bewafaai rahi.!!

   kirdaar kaun dekhe abb ameero.n kaa.!
   ke haisiyat se zayaada kamaai rahi.!

   dikhaa dey andhere ko bhi raasta wo.!
   uss naabine mein ghazab ki binaai rahi.!

   hai fiza pyaar ki maujood chaar su lakin!
   kya karein jo kismat hii harjaai rahi.!

   usne iqraar kiya na main kah sakaa uss se.!
   taa umr 'khamosh' magar shanaasaai rahi.!!



   shanaasaai- jaan pahchaan.



   chaar-su --- all direction

   nabinaa---- andha , blind.

   binaai- eye sight


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thorat anish

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Re: kotaahii.............(K_A)

«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2012, 08:11:04 PM »

aaj na jane kyo ye dil iss sine me chubhta he,
ye wahi dil tha jo kabhi apna sa lagta tha!!
kyo isse kisi ne purani yado ko yad dila diya,
jo kabhi ye hasta or kabhi rota tha!!
man ka manzar to bhatakta raha,
par ye dil hi to he jo iss man ko kabhi sambhale tha!!
aaj to man ne bhi ummra k sath dhoka de diya,
par ye dil wahi he jo bachpan se jawani or jawani se meri shaiyya ka sathi tha!!
ab to meri bate na sune ye bhi ki,
ye kehta he jab husn e nur ka sath chhoda wahi tera aakhri pal tha!!!!


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soudagar

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Re: kotaahii.............(K_A)

«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2012, 02:53:13 AM »

bahut khub..... Clapping Smiley


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Re: kotaahii.............(K_A)

«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2012, 04:27:59 AM »

bahut khoob dheron daad


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manzil-e-ishq

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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2012, 07:59:02 AM »

bht bht khoob khamosh ji...
Sply last one..


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: kotaahii.............(K_A)

«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2012, 10:03:02 AM »

Waah waah , khamoh aawaaz ji.kya khubsurat ghazal
kahi hai.3rd sher aur maqta ka jawaab nahin.


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mkv

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Re: kotaahii.............(K_A)

«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2012, 04:22:45 PM »

Bahut khoob khamosh jee
bahut umda kalaam..maqte laajavaab..
dhero daad haajir hai.


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suman59

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Re: kotaahii.............(K_A)

«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2012, 04:33:11 PM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 23, 2012, 07:03:30 PM

khudgarzi mein aisii behayaai rahi.!
ke wafaa mein zaraa si bewafaai rahi.!!

kirdaar kaun dekhe abb ameero.n kaa.!
ke haisiyat se zayaada kamaai rahi.!

dikhaa dey andhere ko bhi raasta wo.!
uss naabine mein ghazab ki binaai rahi.!

hai fiza pyaar ki maujood chaar su lakin!
kya karein jo kismat hii harjaai rahi.!

usne iqraar kiya na main kah sakaa uss se.!
taa umr 'khamosh' magar shanaasaai rahi.!!

shanaasaai- jaan pahchaan.

chaar-su --- all direction

nabinaa---- andha , blind.

binaai- eye sight

bahut khoob likha hai aapne KA jee Applause