kutchh chuban...Kundaliya chhand

by harashmahajan on September 02, 2005, 06:03:59 PM
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Poonchh kat gayee saanp ki, phir bhi fun failaaye,
kitna dood pilaye lo, phir bhi dansta jaaye
phir bhi dansta jaaye, arey bai kaam hai uska,
tu kaahey gabraaye paker kay ab fun uska,
kahay 'harsh' kaviraaye abhoon toh taan lay moonchh,
ik ik kerkay paker, saanp na jinki poonchh.
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2005, 06:18:34 PM »
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wah harsh ji,as always.........deep and touching....a gr8 piece of shayri.
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2005, 04:58:51 AM »
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waah nidhi ji wah..kya shot diya hai....bahoot khoob...

dost se dushman bhala,Rishta laiyee nibhaaye
jab-jab baan chalaat hai,turant bhaan per jaaye
turant bhaan per jaaye,Rahay koi bhi durandder
mitra baan chal jaaye. jadaan nai kaate ander
kahay 'harsh' kaviraye, kab-hoon na khaana ghost
Aisa dushaman paalio, jo kabhie  raha na dost.
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2005, 07:14:57 AM »
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wow nice one harash ji....!!!bahut khoob likha hai apne
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2005, 06:30:34 AM »
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Bahoot shukriya aapka Salma ji....ye saare kataaksh Dosti main ya...jahaan jiyada pyaar hota hai..wahin jiyaada milta hai....Jara agle per Gour fermaaye ga....Dost kya-kya kerta hai...

Mitra Banata Jab kabhi, chalaaye pahila baan
Saari gagri loot-ta, phir maangat oo daan,
phir maangat oo daan, jo dewe woh pachh-taayee,
Na dewe jajmaan, toh woh peechhay per jaayee.
kahey 'harsh' kaviraaye, Anokha hai woh charitra,
rahina bachh kay bhayi, miliye jo aisa mitra.

Harsh
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2005, 03:41:39 AM »
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apki kavita bahut aachi hai
lekin hum thoda he samje hai
but shayaad bahut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2005, 05:18:16 AM »
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salma ji...hamne yahaan us shaks ka charitra darshaaya hai..jo aapko toh bahoot payaara hai..yaani aapka bahoot achha mitra hai....aap dilo jaan se us per bharosa kerti hain...per woh insaan..bahoot cunning hai..aapki dosti ka najaayaj faayda uthhana chahta hai...aisa kirdaar jab bhi kabhi dosti ka aagaaz kerta hai..toh pahila war uska aapki doulat pe hota hai.....pehley toh tumeh is taraah lootega jaise..aapka bahoot hiteshi hai...uskay baad maang ker lega..kyuinki aapkay aagay uski chhavi bahoot achhi hai,our aap bina hitchkay de denge...ager kisi wajeh se nahi doge..toh woh aapko majboor karega dene ko....
mujhey umeed hai..ki main samjhaane main safal hua hoon...


chor-chor kehne laga, khud hi ghar ka chor
basti saari jagaye li, macha-macha ke shor
macha-macha ke shor, bahutere naam sujhaaye,
rangat uski dekh kisi ke samajh na aaye
kahe 'harsh' kaviraaye, apraadh yu hai ghanghor
aise gharaan se bach, jinha ke ghar main chor.
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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2005, 12:59:39 PM »
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badiya hai harash jee badiya hai aur apka samjhaane ka tarifa bahut khoob hai haan duniya mein aise mathlabhi log bhi mil jate hain

Bahut khoob harash jee
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«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2005, 05:36:35 PM »
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Dhanyawaad salma ji....aapki jarranawazi ka....
Ek aour kundalia chhand dekhiye...kabhi achhay dost ko samajhnae main bhi bhool ho jaati hai...jis se galt fehmi ki dewaar se ..dushmani kaafi hud tak barh jaati hai...

Dushman-dushman kahe ke, dushman lio banaaye
Aisa dushman ban gayo, Dost bane ab naahi
dost bane ab naahi, gale ka ban gaya fanda
De ve garden kaat, mile dushman ka jo banda
kahe 'harsh' kaviraye, mile hain kam hi sajjan
bana ke achhe dost, kabhoon samjho na dushman.
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2005, 06:29:00 PM »
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ur welcome harash jee..haan ye bhi kabhi kabhi hote huve dekha hai hmmm
again gr8 stuff ..badiya hai ...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2005, 04:49:09 AM »
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shukriya salma ji.....bahoot achha laga...ye sochker our dekhker..ki aap aajkal ke halaat ko ba-khoobi samajhtey hain....mujhey umeed hai...aap ke dost bahoot hi umda honge...halaanki is badaltey dour main achhay dost mil pana bahoot hi mushkil hai...kahin na kahain daga dene main achhay dost bhi nahi chooktey....at last woh achhay dost bhi unhi ki category main pahoonch jaate hain...

Aasteen main saanp chhipey na jaane kitne
hum rahey be-khouf yuin be-gaane kitne
Saajishon ko haadsa tha samjha kiye hum
ban gaye yuin anjaane main anjaane kitne.
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2005, 07:06:29 AM »
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well ur welcome harash jee .... u can call me srif salma  "jee" mat lagaye ..hmmm well aaj kal ki halat hum samajte hain ..but hume  apne doston pe naaz hai ..jo iss duniya me itne aache dost mile ..mere har kadam pe saath dene wale allah karne unko sahi salaamt rakhein ameen Usual Smile

wah again badiya hai
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anjane mein hum un doston pe yakeen kar liye
wo humare he peeche hume dhooka dete reh gaye
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2005, 03:30:04 PM »
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Good Work Harsh!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: September 20, 2005, 06:44:25 PM »
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shukriya pooja ji...

bahoot bahoot danyawaad salma!!!!..and I expect same thing from you..of "jee".....barhi hi khushkismat hain aap ki aapko achhi rooh as friens mile....bahoot kam logon ko ye naseeb hota hai...nahi toh sabhi doston ke jakham liye hi goomte hain...

zindagi ne is kader dhokhe diye
umra-bhar rote sisakte hi jiye.

zindagi mein sirf kaante hain mager
ji rahe hain phool ki chat liye

usne bhi kee bewafaayi mere saath
mein sada merta raha jiske liye

yuin toh ab mushkil mein hai kul kaaye-naat
per mein hairaan hoon bas insa ke liye.

prem ras ki jis se bhi umeed kee
usne hi jeher ke pyaale diye.
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«Reply #14 on: September 21, 2005, 06:45:02 PM »
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jee bahut shukriya ........... i think i m lucky every where

hum apne doston me bhi khus rehte hain
aur apne ghar me bhi hardam haste rehte hain




wah again bahut badiya likha hai Usual Smile
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