kya khoob haqq-e-bandegi.....(nazar ghouri)

by nazar ghouri on May 06, 2010, 03:35:38 PM
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Adaab
aaj ek tanzziya ghazal leke haazir hua hoon..


Kya khoob haqq-e-bandegi adaa kar raha hoon..!
dil kaheen aur maanoos hai,sajda kar raha hoon..!

qaul aur amal main taghafull hai to kya........!
yeh kaafi nahien ke Allah Allah kar raha hoon...!

yeh tariq-e-zindegi yeh andaz-e-musalmani hai...?
sazaa se waqif hoon ,gunaah kar raha hoon......,!

gheebatein karta hoon,tohmatein lagata phirta hoon..!
tum hi bataao mein, kis se wafaa kar raha hoon.......!

koi sachh keh de to,bura maan jaata hoon mein.....!
woh bura keh raha hai ya ,mein bura kar raha hoon...?

kar ke maslaki baatein, aksar sochtaa hoon yehi...!
haqq se jaise baatil ko judaa kar rahaa hoon.......!

chandd waqiyaat chandd ahadees kar ke yaad.........!
ahl-e-ilm se aaj kal, munazara kar rahaa hoon.......!

                                                     
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2010, 04:46:37 PM »
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Wah ! Wah! Wah! bohat bohat bohat khoob kah diya aapne nazar ji....ek behtareen peshkash hai aapki taraf se.
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2010, 07:40:16 PM »
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Wahhhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Ghouri saheb kash mere pass alfaaz hote is Azeem kalam ki shaan me kehne ke liye. Matla aur Makhte me aapne bohat badi baat keh di..........Allah aapko hamesha apni hifazat me rakhe...AAMEEN
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2010, 09:01:51 PM »
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Wah WAh Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
WahhHHHhhhhhhhh.................

BHut hi ache!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kuch words samz nahi aaye bt no prob kmal likha aapne
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2010, 09:16:09 PM »
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Wah wah Nazar ji bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.kamaal ke likha.keep it up.bahut pasand aayi aapke gazal.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2010, 10:26:05 PM »
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bahot bahot shukriya hausla afzai ka..na cheez ne ek koshish ki aur aap ne usko itna saraha ke dil khosh hogaya.
Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on May 06, 2010, 04:46:37 PM
Wah ! Wah! Wah! bohat bohat bohat khoob kah diya aapne nazar ji....ek behtareen peshkash hai aapki taraf se.
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2010, 10:32:03 PM »
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sajid saheb aapne mujhe main itna hausla bakhsha hai ke usko bayan karne ke liye mere pass lafz nahi hain.mere mobile pe aapka msg jab recieve howa meri khushi ki inteha nahi rahi.aur isi bahane aapka contact number bhi mujhe milgaya.insha Allah kisi roz aap se baat hogi.aap ka teh dil se shukr guzaar hoon aapki dua ka mutmani bhi hoon Allah aap ko har musibat se bachae
ameen
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2010, 10:37:58 PM »
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thanks 4 compliment.i am really grateful to u coz u r unfamiliar by some difficult words of my ghazal but u read n understood.jst i 4got to mention the meaning of difficult words.insha Allah next time shikayat door hojaegi
Quote from: neelgold on May 06, 2010, 09:01:51 PM
Wah WAh Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
WahhHHHhhhhhhhh.................

BHut hi ache!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kuch words samz nahi aaye bt no prob kmal likha aapne
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2010, 10:41:14 PM »
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shukriya aapka .aap ne hamesha meri hausla afzai ki.kabhi fone kar ke to kabhi yo main msgs kar ke .aapka behad mashkoor hoon
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 06, 2010, 09:16:09 PM
Wah wah Nazar ji bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.kamaal ke likha.keep it up.bahut pasand aayi aapke gazal.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2010, 11:01:19 PM »
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nazar saheb , kya kahene bhaijaan apki is taqleeq ko shayad tareef ke alfaz pahenana mushkil ho chala hai ,apki tareef karna to suraj diya dikhane wali baath hogi, har ashar apni wazha me , kya qoob kaha hai,bahoth khuch sikhne ko mila apki is nayab taqleeq se ,, yunhi bazm ko raushan afroz karte rahen , dad hazir hai ba awaz a buland qobool karen..allah apko khuch rakhe..waise mai bhi deccan se taluq rakhta hon,,gulbarga shareef ka naam shayad apne sun rakha ho ,,


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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2010, 11:13:18 PM »
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abdul qadeer saheb mein aapka bahot mashkoor hoon aur alfaaz saath de nahi paarahe hain ke aapka shukriya kaise ada karoon.be had khushi horahi hai ke aap jaise iss bazm ke qabil-e-taqleed shora se daad milrahi hai.aapka teh dil se shukr guzaar hoon.gulbarga shareef jaanta hoon mein.masha Allah aap bhi hamare deccan se taluq rakhte hain jaan kar be hadd khushi hoi.aapka dua go
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2010, 06:11:27 AM »
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bahut khub nazar sahab.....
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2010, 06:45:12 AM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on May 06, 2010, 03:35:38 PM
Adaab
aaj ek tanzziya ghazal leke haazir hua hoon..


Kya khoob haqq-e-bandegi adaa kar raha hoon..!
dil kaheen aur maanoos hai,sajda kar raha hoon..!

qaul aur amal main taghafull hai to kya........!
yeh kaafi nahien ke Allah Allah kar raha hoon...!

yeh tariq-e-zindegi yeh andaz-e-musalmani hai...?
sazaa se waqif hoon ,gunaah kar raha hoon......,!

gheebatein karta hoon,tohmatein lagata phirta hoon..!
tum hi bataao mein, kis se wafaa kar raha hoon.......!

koi sachh keh de to,bura maan jaata hoon mein.....!
woh bura keh raha hai ya ,mein bura kar raha hoon...?

kar ke maslaki baatein, aksar sochtaa hoon yehi...!
haqq se jaise baatil ko judaa kar rahaa hoon.......!

chandd waqiyaat chandd ahadees kar ke yaad.........!
ahl-e-ilm se aaj kal, munazara kar rahaa hoon.......!

                                                     
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Nazar saheb!!!!

Har ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!Bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur Seekh dene wale Jazbaat!!!

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Kuch Waqt Pehle ek ghazal likhi Thi, uske Kuch Sher Yaad Aa Rahe Hai..Uss Ghazal Ka Dusra Sher Iss Topic se Taaluuk Rakhta Hai..

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«Reply #13 on: May 07, 2010, 11:31:31 AM »
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Nazar sahab, bahot imandaari aur tafseel se aapne dil, zehn, mizaaj aur kirdaar ki kaifiyaat ko zahir kiya hai. Ghaflat ki wajah se ye batein bahot se logon mein paai jaati hain. Inhi ka nateeja hai ke insaan ibaadaat ke favaid aur muaashre mein meyari waqaar se mahroom hain. Aapne in uyoob ka badi bebaki se aitraaf to kiya hai lekin baat adhuri rah gai. In baaton par agar nadaamat, sharmindgi aur inke hal ki kisi tajveez par bhi 2-4 lines likh dete to aapki takhleeq mukammal ho jaati. Bina iske aisa lagta hai ke apni kamiyon ka aitraaf to hai lekin malaal nahin. Rabb-ul-aalameen hum sab ko us raah pe chalaaye jis par chalne walon ko usne duniya aur aakhirat ki kaamyaabi di hai. Allah Hafiz.
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«Reply #14 on: May 07, 2010, 12:41:19 PM »
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saza se waqif hu phir bhi saza kar raha hu............
bahot achchi lagi aap ki gazal manna pade ga? icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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