Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal:Shairi - E

KOYAL46

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Kya mein galat thee !

Hum ghanto saath- saath baithte
Bollte kam jayaada maun rehte
Nayan Ek dusre mai khoye rehte
Mein ese chahat samajh baithee

Kya mein galat thee !

Uski har muskuraahat mujhe khushi deti
Meri har baat wo khush ho kar maanta
College me sab hume achha sathee jaante
Mein ese pyaar ki shuruaat samajh baithee

Kya mein galat thee !

Usne mujhe zayada ehmiyat di aur dosto se
Mein usse apne par fida samajh baithee
Usne kha tha koi hai meri zindagi mein
Main khud ko uski zindzgi samajh baithee

Kya mein galat thee !

Ab wo kehta ussne mujhe chaha he nahi
Wo tou ek sannyog tha k hum saath they
Achhe dost ek-dusre ki madad karte they
Zindagi saath jeeyenge hum socha he nahi

Kya wo galat tha !

Ye prashn reh reh mujhe kachot-ta hai…..
Kya sach-much itnee nasamajh thee mein…


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2010, 10:15:48 AM »

bahut khoob koyal ji dil ki baate hamesha dil se hoker gujer jaati hai kuch aisa hi mahsoos hua hume aaj Applause

verry touching lines,

Na tum galat ho na tumhari soch,
Nakabo ka hai ye sehar isse tu jannat na soch.....


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KOYAL46

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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2010, 12:05:35 PM »

Thanks a lot Baadal-ji......
Es mausam me bhi kam aate ho....kya iraada hai....?
Mansoon achha ho chhaye raho...

Quote from: baadal102 on July 27, 2010, 10:15:48 AM

bahut khoob koyal ji dil ki baate hamesha dil se hoker gujer jaati hai kuch aisa hi mahsoos hua hume aaj Applause

verry touching lines,

Na tum galat ho na tumhari soch,
Nakabo ka hai ye sehar isse tu jannat na soch.....


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2010, 12:29:26 PM »

bahut khhob sweetu...lovely..

Nasamjh tu nhi merre dost vo pal tha,
jisme tune uske jazbaato ko kuch aur samjha,
vo tou tha hi apni adat se majbur..
aur tune uske sang bitaye palo ko ashiqui ka daur samjha..........


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2010, 01:19:31 PM »

BAhaut khoob Koyal di...bahaut acha likha hai apne..!

Badaal jee, kya kehne...do lines main kafi kuch kehgaye app...


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2010, 01:38:00 PM »

Bahut Khoob Koyal Ji..

Dilchasp Kavita Hai Yeh


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #6 on: July 27, 2010, 03:32:47 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 27, 2010, 01:19:31 PM

Badaal jee, kya kehne...do lines main kafi kuch kehgaye app...

bahut bahut sukria rahim ji notworthy


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #7 on: July 27, 2010, 10:00:00 PM »

BAHUT HI ACCHI KAVITA LIKHI HAI
AAPSE BAS ITNA KEH SAKTA HOON

ALFAS THE RUKE HUE MAGAR SAANSE CHALTI RAHI
JAB SAANSE RUK GAYI TO ALFAZON NE KEHNA CHOD DIYA


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2010, 01:08:25 AM »

Wah Koyal ji Wah... jawaab nahi aapke bhi lekhni ke.... bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... bahut khoob...!!!


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #10 on: July 28, 2010, 06:03:59 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 27, 2010, 10:08:12 AM

bht hi lubhavni kavita koyal ....dil ko chhu gaya tumhara har bar ye kehna "kya main galat thi.."...


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2010, 08:21:24 AM »

galat koi nhi h..... na tum na woh... galat to waqt tha ki tum uski dosti ko nhi samjh payi or wo tumhare pyar ko........... tearyeyed


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #12 on: July 28, 2010, 08:27:43 AM »

Wah wah koyal ji,, wah wah... bahut hi khoob wah

jasbir singh


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KOYAL46

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«Reply #13 on: July 28, 2010, 11:35:49 AM »

Thanks a lot Geet-di you are encouraging as usual.... icon_flower

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 27, 2010, 12:29:26 PM


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Re: Kya mein galat thee !.....koyal

«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2010, 01:11:57 PM »

Very well written...Brilliant.

Jo aake rooke daaman pe 'Saba', woh anskh nahin hain paani hain,
Jo anskh naa chalke aankhon se, uun anskhon ki keemat hoti hain,

- Saba Afghani


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