kya ye kar paaungi main...????

by Amarjeet Kaur on August 24, 2012, 08:01:12 AM
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zindgi tinkon ki tarah bikhri padi hai meri..
jaane kab in tinkon ko sanjo, ek gharonda bana paaungi  main...

pyaar ke pakke dhaago se ise baandh kar...
kab sapno ki daali par julaaungi main....

kab subah ka sooraj apne parivaar ke saath dekhungi...
kab raat apno ko baahon main lie bitaaoongi main..

ek patni, ek maa banna to koi badi baat nahi...
mazaa to tab hai..jab in zimmedaarion ko bakhubi nibha ke dikhaungi main..

tune bahut madad ki hai, aage bhi sahaara dena ai khuda...
dar lagta hai ke kahi phir se to nahi ladkhada jaaungi main...
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2012, 08:12:39 AM »
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Bahut khoob bahut badhiya
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2012, 08:13:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob bahut badhiya..... Aap jaurur kar payengi
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2012, 08:16:21 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya saudagar ji....
sach main aapke jawaab ne ek positiveness di hai...thankyou vry much
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2012, 08:34:44 AM »
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bahut bahut khoobsurat rachna .. badi khoobsurti se aapne apni mushkilon aur soch ke baare me bataayaa hai... bas bharosa rakhiye khud pe.. koi kaam mushkil nahi hai.. sab sahi hoga .. hamaari shubhkaamnaayein aapke saath hain... All the Very best... take care...!!! Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

karo bharosaa khud pe to mushkilein aasaan nazar aayengi
raah ki saari rukaawatein khud ba khud duur ho jaayengi

waqt ke saath, zindagi ke har ek gunn ko sikh jaaoge tum
bahut jald khushiyaan bhi tumhaare sangh muskuraayengi

raah-e-zindagi me kai baar hum tut ke bikhar jaate hain magar
saath sahi humsafar kaa mil jaaye to raahen aasaan ho jaayengi

na daro aane waale waqt se mere dost, himmat rakho
dekhna saari mushkilein chutkiyon me hal ho jaayengi.....

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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2012, 09:51:38 AM »
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bahut khoob amarjeet ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2012, 10:00:13 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2012, 10:18:49 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Shihab ji...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on August 24, 2012, 10:14:13 AM
Bahut Bahut Khub Hriday Ji Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2012, 10:58:26 AM »
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Quote from: Amarjeet Kaur on August 24, 2012, 08:01:12 AM
zindgi tinkon ki tarah bikhri padi hai meri..
jaane kab in tinkon ko sanjo, ek gharonda bana paaungi  main...

pyaar ke pakke dhaago se ise baandh kar...
kab sapno ki daali par julaaungi main....

kab subah ka sooraj apne parivaar ke saath dekhungi...
kab raat apno ko baahon main lie bitaaoongi main..

ek patni, ek maa banna to koi badi baat nahi...
mazaa to tab hai..jab in zimmedaarion ko bakhubi nibha ke dikhaungi main..

tune bahut madad ki hai, aage bhi sahaara dena ai khuda...
dar lagta hai ke kahi phir se to nahi ladkhada jaaungi main...
Clapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping Smiley BAhut khubsoorat masoom khayalaat pesh kiye hain apne AMarjeet ji May god bless you for all your kind dreams & thoughts... Nice creation...
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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2012, 12:50:14 PM »
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Quote from: Amarjeet Kaur on August 24, 2012, 08:01:12 AM
zindgi tinkon ki tarah bikhri padi hai meri..
jaane kab in tinkon ko sanjo, ek gharonda bana paaungi  main...

pyaar ke pakke dhaago se ise baandh kar...
kab sapno ki daali par julaaungi main....

kab subah ka sooraj apne parivaar ke saath dekhungi...
kab raat apno ko baahon main lie bitaaoongi main..

ek patni, ek maa banna to koi badi baat nahi...
mazaa to tab hai..jab in zimmedaarion ko bakhubi nibha ke dikhaungi main..

tune bahut madad ki hai, aage bhi sahaara dena ai khuda...
dar lagta hai ke kahi phir se to nahi ladkhada jaaungi main...


bahut bahut aur bahut khoooob amarji

Har ek lafz Sachai da Aaena hai..

""Ek patni Ek Maa Banna to koi badi baat nahi
mazaa to tab hai jab inn zimmedariyon ko bakhoobi nibha ke dikhaungi main"

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Bahut bahut Wadhiyan
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«Reply #10 on: August 24, 2012, 12:58:50 PM »
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BAhut Bahut Khub Amarjeet Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2012, 01:04:33 PM »
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Aapki hausla afjaai ke lie bahut bahut shukriya...Hriday ji
Aapki creation to bahut zyaada inspiring hai.....sur sach main ye ek mare hue insaan main bhi rooh phoonkne ka maadda rakhti hai.....
sir aisi positive creation kai baar maans :notworthy:ik roop se toot chuke insaan ko nai zindgi de sakti hain .....
Thankyou sooooooo much.......
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2012, 01:12:07 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya is hausla afjaai ke lie....SK Saini ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 24, 2012, 01:19:20 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya .....nandbahu ji, khwahish ji, pankaj ji, Sanjeev kaash ji....
Aap sab ki taraf se kahe gaye itne acche alfaaj dil ko bahut hi tasalli
pahuchaane waale hain....
I m really thankfull to u all.....
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«Reply #14 on: August 24, 2012, 01:34:19 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on August 24, 2012, 10:07:53 AM
Bahut Bahut Khub Amarjeet Ji Applause
Waise Main Koi Shayar To Nahi Phir Bhi Aapko Parhke Do Line Likhne Ka Mann Kiya So Likh Diya
Umeed Karta Hun Aapko Pasand Aayengi...!

Sambhal Ke Rakh Jo Bhi Tere Dil Ke Khwab Hain
Kyon Ki Roz Subah Nikal Ta Ik Naya Aaftaab Hai.

Q Uljhaate Ho Khud Ko Aisi Baato,n Mein-e-Dost
Jinka Nahi Laga Saka Ab Tak Koi Bhi Hisaab Hai.


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Shad o ABbaad Rahiye...

Shihab

Bahut bahut shukriya is hausla afjaai ke lie....Shihab ji
Aapke alfaaj bahut hi inspiring hain....
I m highly thankfull ke aapne mujhe is laayak samjha....
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