kyu ......pahlee baar.............

by akela on September 24, 2005, 09:04:38 AM
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aaj bahar khub paani baras raha hai.......
jaane kyu dil fhir taras raha hai
dekh raha hu un girti boondo ko
jo paani ab aankho se baras raha hai

jindagi kab jaane fhool se dhool hui,
jane kab kaise ye kiski bhool hui
bahar ab kyu 'akela'ye badal garaj raha hai,
kyu pahlee baar subah ko dil taras raha hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2005, 09:25:59 AM »
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wah akela ji.........
naaam k anusaaar hi aapki shayari bhi hai.................
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2005, 01:47:41 PM »
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Wah Akela jee nice n gr8 likha aapne
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2005, 08:32:14 AM »
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shukariya dosto.................................. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2005, 02:31:49 PM »
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Wah akela ji,bohat hi khoob.....!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2005, 09:36:05 PM »
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lajawaab likhte hain aap Akela ji....very nice.

Zindagi humein yeh kahan le aayi hai
har pal akelapan aur tanhai hai

har lamha guzarta hai sadiyon ke samaan
baras beet gaye ho jaise inmein..raat ke baad subah jab aayi hai

zindagi ke karwan mein sab peeche reh gaye hon jaise
humne chalte-2 pehli baar yeh sunsaan si rah paayi hai

na manzil ka pata hai na khabar-e-rah hai
jo beet gaya usse bhool nahi payi main
jo aane wala hai, usse to rab ka vaasta hai
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2005, 11:00:37 PM »
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bohot achhe akela and nikki!!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 02, 2005, 05:21:56 PM »
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aaj bahar khub paani baras raha hai.......
jaane kyu dil fhir taras raha hai
dekh raha hu un girti boondo ko
jo paani ab aankho se baras raha hai

jindagi kab jaane fhool se dhool hui,
jane kab kaise ye kiski bhool hui
bahar ab kyu 'akela'ye badal garaj raha hai,
kyu pahlee baar subah ko dil taras raha hai



too good Akela ji.
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akela
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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2005, 03:09:17 PM »
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shukariya dosto Usual Smile
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akela
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2008, 11:28:07 PM »
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dosto bahar tez baarish ho rahi hai.....isslie yeh sher phir padhne ko ji chaha.....
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«Reply #10 on: August 10, 2011, 06:15:11 PM »
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wah bhai…
kamaal ki shayri karte ho
barish ki anginat boondo me beth khud ko akela kahte ho tongue3
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