Kyun is dil main pyar rahta hai

by Pooja on August 27, 2008, 04:14:07 PM
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Ajj man kuch ajeeb sa hai.. shayad ajj meri likhi baatein bhi ajeeb se ho, jo shayad kisi ko samjh na ayye.. phir bhi likh rahi hu.. jo bhi man mai aa raha hai..

Dil ka dil per aitbaar rahta hai
Phir kyun is dil main pyar rahta hai
Kabhi pyar main to kabhi nafrato main
Yah dil taar taar rahta hai
Kyun is dil main pyar rahta hai…

Zajbaato ke ghaire main yah jeevan
Aasha - nirasha main jakra yah man
Kabhi inkaar to kabhi ijhaar main
Yah jeena dushwaar rahta hai
Kyun is dil main pyar rahta hai...

Kahin karm to kahin dharm rahta hai
Kabhi such to kabhi jhooth kahta hai
Aitbaar ka baar baar yah parivartan
Na jaane kaya kaya Pooja se kahta hai
Kyun is dil main pyar rahta hai............
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2008, 04:38:31 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 27, 2008, 04:14:07 PM
Ajj man kuch ajeeb sa hai.. shayad ajj meri likhi baatein bhi ajeeb se ho, jo shayad kisi ko samjh na ayye.. phir bhi likh rahi hu.. jo bhi man mai aa raha hai..

Dil ka dil per aitbaar rahta hai
Phir kyun is dil main pyar rahta hai

Poori poem bohot achchi hai Pooja...lekin in pehle do sher ka aapas main connection nahin dikha... !!

Overall poori kavita dil ki bechaini si dikhla rahi hai ...!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2008, 04:56:18 PM »
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Celmira...
Quote from: Celmira on August 27, 2008, 04:38:31 PM
Poori poem bohot achchi hai Pooja...lekin in pehle do sher ka aapas main connection nahin dikha... !!

Overall poori kavita dil ki bechaini si dikhla rahi hai ...!!
Quote from: Pooja on August 27, 2008, 04:14:07 PM
Dil ka dil per aitbaar rahta hai
Phir kyun is dil main pyar rahta hai

Dil ka dil per aitbaar rahta hai... iska arth yah ayah hai ki khud ke dil per mera aitbaar rahta hai ki jo main kahugi wp yah dil sunega.. magar na chahte hue bhi is dil main pyar rahta hai..

shayad ab apko yah line samjh mai aa jaaye..

janati hu shabdo kop apne khayalo ki tarah ajj uljha rahi hu...sad5

Apko yah kavita pasand aai.. bahoot bahoot shukaria!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2008, 05:04:38 PM »
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Super creation Pooja sis buhat khoob likha hai aapne... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2008, 05:10:29 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 27, 2008, 04:56:18 PM
Celmira...
Dil ka dil per aitbaar rahta hai... iska arth yah ayah hai ki khud ke dil per mera aitbaar rahta hai ki jo main kahugi wp yah dil sunega.. magar na chahte hue bhi is dil main pyar rahta hai..

shayad ab apko yah line samjh mai aa jaaye..

janati hu shabdo kop apne khayalo ki tarah ajj uljha rahi hu...sad5


Apko yah kavita pasand aai.. bahoot bahoot shukaria!!


Haan..ab clear ho gaya hai....Sorry main pehle samajh nahin paayi... DOH

Thanks for explaining it to me  icon_thumleft

Par itni maayoosi aur beqarari kyun...please cheer up  icon_flower
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2008, 05:29:05 PM »
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bujhaye hai ajj bhir chirag,
dhua dhua se khayal hue
zakhmo ko sulaya tha badi mehnat se
Ajj bhir zakhamo ke waar hue
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2008, 06:06:19 PM »
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Jo beet gaya na wo laut paayega
Jo toot gaya na wo jud paayega
Zindagi rulaayegi har qadam pe
Hara de ghum ko, ab muskura de
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2008, 06:15:36 PM »
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muskurahat bhi rulane lagi
her gali(rasta) uski yaad dilane lagi
badi hasrato se sajaya tha ek ashiana
her sajawat ajj dil jalane lagi
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2008, 06:20:57 PM »
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Pooja nice lines..

Celmira nice lines..
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2008, 06:21:54 PM »
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Thanks Honey....

Bada mushkil hai iss dil ko samjhana,
Yaad aati hai le ke rulane ka bahana,
Lekin sach to hai yahi ki wo guzar gaya
Beeti baaton pe na khud ko tadpaana
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2008, 06:27:55 PM »
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Thanks Honey!!

bahoot he achi lines likhi hai celmira...

Beeta hua pal, ankhon mai aa jaata hai
leta hai ashko ka sahara, beh jaata hai
ek ghootan, ek bebasi ka alam tadpaata hai
"kayun" ke sawal per, her pal attak jaata hai
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2008, 06:37:28 PM »
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Thank You Pooja Usual Smile

Sawaal aise hain ki jawaab nahin milte
Itne gehre hue hain, zakhm nahin bharte
Saans lena bhi ek jurm sa lagta hai
Laakh mana len, dil kahan behelta hai
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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2008, 06:48:25 PM »
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khud ke sawal zakham bharne nahi dete
mehfil main bhi dil ko behalne nahi dete
aa jaati hai chupke se yaadein unki
jeene bhi nahi dete aor marne bhi nahi dete
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2008, 06:53:21 PM »
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Mehfil main reh kar bhi tanhaayi na jaaye,
Har hansi, muskaan beeta pal yaad dilaye
Ghut ghut ke ye jeena naseeb ho gaya hai,
Kaise naadaan dil ko bhala koi samjhaaye
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«Reply #14 on: August 29, 2008, 04:29:52 PM »
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dil ki tanhaai dil dukhati hai
ghar ki tanhaai, yaad dilaati hai
kuch khawab jo poore na ho sake
her roj yahi baat, khoon ke ansoo rulati hai
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