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pyar ki bheekh hum maanga nahi karte
bujdilon ke aage gidgidaya nahi karte
naumeedi me jeete hain jo
udne ki baate krate hain wo
josh me hos hum gawaya nhi karte
farebiyon ke dil me samaya nahi karte
reth se mahal bnate hain jo
fulti saanso se daud lagate hain wo
dard ko aankho se hum chlkaya nahi krte
ladkdate kadmon se jaam uthaya nahi krte
tukdo par auron ki palte hai jo
nasukri me jite hain wo
Raakh se dil hum lagaya nhi krte
mohabbat me KB dil ko samjhaya nahi karte
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2011, 08:06:16 AM » |
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bahut umda kbji... khub..
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2011, 12:28:01 PM » |
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oye hoyeeeeeeee KB ji......
maja aa gaya ji.....umda peshkash he ye to.....
badhaiya sahab badhaiya.........bahot khub
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2011, 01:22:43 PM » |
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Manju ji aur Matrix ji---
aap dono ka behad sukriya
aapne meri kosis ko padha pasand kiya aur daad bhi di.
bas saath rahiye.
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2011, 03:13:05 PM » |
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Bahaut bahaut khoob mere dost.. Kya baat hai..Bahaut acha likha hai.. Maza gaya parr kar..  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #5 on: January 15, 2011, 03:22:09 PM » |
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ohh Rahim bhai--aapne parr liya bas yahi bahut hai mere liye  bas saath dete raho dost aur hausala badhate raho. aapka behad sukriya sarahne ke liye khus rahen ji dil se dua deta hu aapko sukriya |
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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2011, 07:30:08 AM » |
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nice lines kb......
bht bht khoob....
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«Reply #7 on: January 16, 2011, 01:37:11 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Kb JI
Yuhi Likhte Rahiye
God Bless u
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«Reply #9 on: January 16, 2011, 05:53:53 PM » |
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Priya ji aur Rishi ji
aap dono ka bahut sukriya sarahne ke liye.
khus rahen
sukriya
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«Reply #10 on: January 16, 2011, 06:12:43 PM » |
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Parwaaz sahab--pranaam.
aapki nazren inayat hui badi khusi hui hame.
hausala afjai ka sukriya.
khus rahen
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«Reply #11 on: January 16, 2011, 07:14:09 PM » |
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parwaaz sahab aapki 2 lines kamaal ki hain.
bahut saara pyar srf 2 line me. kamaal hai
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2011, 04:05:17 AM » |
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ufffffffffffff KB.........kya baat hai yaar.......mastammmmmmmmm mast post.....
bilkul alag andaaz aur shabd....jaise kisipe teer chala rahe ho gusse me....kisspe bhadaas nikali re....
bht mast likha hai ....
teri baaton ko samjhte hain jo
teri tareef karte hain wo
befizul ki baat hum kiya nahin karte
yunhi dil rakhne ko tareef kiya nahin karte...
samjhe dear...KB ji |
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2011, 04:18:26 AM » |
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bahut saara dhanyabaad re. hmm wese bhadas wali baat nhi thi... lekin tumhara wo tareeef bhare line Achhe lahga  apni tareef Gadho ko b achha lagta hai re. |
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2011, 04:29:13 AM » |
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to tum maante ho na KB.... |
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