Ladki!

by salma786 on March 13, 2009, 06:25:48 AM
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Aaj bhi samaj me Ladki hokar Janam lena apradh hai mano... to ise ko dhyan me rakh kar ek koshish!


Maa tune bachpan se hi,
Mujhse Nafrat kiya hai,
Jab bhi maine kuch bhi chaha,
Bhaiyya ko tune diya hai!

Jab bhi tere pyar ko,
Mai tarasti rehti thi,
Mere Ansu dekh dekh barkha,
Barasti rehti thi!

Jab bhi maine padna chaha,
Tune mujh pe hath uthaya,
Bhaiyya ko har baar tune,
Pyar ke sath padhaya!

Aaj mai samjhi ladki hona,
Bahot bada gunaah hai,
Ladki ki kismat samaj ne,
Annyay se buna hai!
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2009, 06:29:45 AM »
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Bahut khoob Ji
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2009, 06:51:19 AM »
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Shukriya!
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2009, 10:32:07 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on March 13, 2009, 06:25:48 AM
Aaj bhi samaj me Ladki hokar Janam lena apradh hai mano... to ise ko dhyan me rakh kar ek koshish!


Maa tune bachpan se hi,
Mujhse Nafrat kiya hai,
Jab bhi maine kuch bhi chaha,
Bhaiyya ko tune diya hai!

Jab bhi tere pyar ko,
Mai tarasti rehti thi,
Mere Ansu dekh dekh barkha,
Barasti rehti thi!

Jab bhi maine padna chaha,
Tune mujh pe hath uthaya,
Bhaiyya ko har baar tune,
Pyar ke sath padhaya!

Aaj mai samjhi ladki hona,
Bahot bada gunaah hai,
Ladki ki kismat samaj ne,
Annyay se buna hai!





Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne, And Nice One,.


Beton Se Zyada Betiyaan Hi Maa Ka Khayaal Rakhti Hain,.
Beton se Zyada Betiyaan Hi Maa Ko Samajhti Hain,.

Tujhe Galat Fehmi Hui Hai "Salma, Maa Kabhi Aisa Nahi Karti,.
Maa To Apne Bachchon Se behad Mohabbat Karti Hai,.

Bhale Wo, Larka Ho Ya Lardki,.

Shayad Sirf Tumne Maa Ki daant Ko Dekha Hoga,.
Uski Mohabbat Ko Dekha Nahi,.

Maa To ma Hoti hai Mere Dost,.
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2009, 12:09:57 PM »
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Its too close to my heart and life
very nice salma jee
Bachpan se maine ek sapna dekha hai nahi janti sach hoga ya nahi sayad nahi
phir bhi aapke sath share karna chahti hoon,kisi ke dil ko thes lage to plz mujhe maaf karein..................
Ek din aisa aayega jarur jab aurat hogi jannat ka phul
samajhegi sabko paanv ka dhul
jab aurat banegi daftar mein boss aur mard karenge chauka bartan
jab aurat dikhaegi rob mardo par mardo ka jiyra karega jhan jhan
Ek din aisa aayega jarur jab janmengi sirf ladkiyan
aur ladkon ko paida karna hogi ek bhul
aayega jamana jab bhrun hatya ladko ki hogi
aur kisi kanun ko paas nahi hone degi aurat
janm jaayein bhi gar ikke dukke
tab bhi aurat ke paanv ki juti honge har mard
ek din aisa aayega jarur jab aaj ki kaliyan aur phul
ban jayengi kal ka dehakta hua shul.
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2009, 12:13:45 PM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on March 13, 2009, 12:09:57 PM
Its too close to my heart and life
very nice salma jee
Bachpan se maine ek sapna dekha hai nahi janti sach hoga ya nahi sayad nahi
phir bhi aapke sath share karna chahti hoon,kisi ke dil ko thes lage to plz mujhe maaf karein..................
Ek din aisa aayega jarur jab aurat hogi jannat ka phul
samajhegi sabko paanv ka dhul
jab aurat banegi daftar mein boss aur mard karenge chauka bartan
jab aurat dikhaegi rob mardo par mardo ka jiyra karega jhan jhan
Ek din aisa aayega jarur jab janmengi sirf ladkiyan
aur ladkon ko paida karna hogi ek bhul
aayega jamana jab bhrun hatya ladko ki hogi
aur kisi kanun ko paas nahi hone degi aurat
janm jaayein bhi gar ikke dukke
tab bhi aurat ke paanv ki juti honge har mard
ek din aisa aayega jarur jab aaj ki kaliyan aur phul
ban jayengi kal ka dehakta hua shul.

Bohat Achche Nice One Jannat ji,.

Allah Aapke Har Sapne Ko saakar kare Aameen,.
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2009, 12:34:19 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 13, 2009, 12:13:45 PM
Bohat Achche Nice One Jannat ji,.

Allah Aapke Har Sapne Ko saakar kare Aameen,.
Shukriya sheen ji
ye mere dard se ubhara hua ek sapna tha, janti hun kabhi saakar nahi hoga, phir bhi aapki is nek dua ke liye ek aur baar shukriyaa, khuda kare aapki dua kubul ho. Aameen.
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2009, 03:07:25 PM »
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nice work... but zara zyada angaar waali nahi hai? i agree with Jaanasheen ji, k maan tho maa hoti hai...
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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2009, 03:08:22 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on March 13, 2009, 06:25:48 AM
Aaj bhi samaj me Ladki hokar Janam lena apradh hai mano... to ise ko dhyan me rakh kar ek koshish!


Maa tune bachpan se hi,
Mujhse Nafrat kiya hai,
Jab bhi maine kuch bhi chaha,
Bhaiyya ko tune diya hai!

Jab bhi tere pyar ko,
Mai tarasti rehti thi,
Mere Ansu dekh dekh barkha,
Barasti rehti thi!

Jab bhi maine padna chaha,
Tune mujh pe hath uthaya,
Bhaiyya ko har baar tune,
Pyar ke sath padhaya!

Aaj mai samjhi ladki hona,
Bahot bada gunaah hai,
Ladki ki kismat samaj ne,
Annyay se buna hai!





salma ji kya aapko maloom hai k jannati hoti hai wo awlaad jissne maa kee maar kaahee, ya usska ghussa chahkka...

waise nice post...
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«Reply #9 on: March 15, 2009, 07:18:51 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne Salma dear...
Sahi likha hai. Aaj b kahi jagah mein larki hona gunah aur bhoj
samajte hai sad7
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«Reply #10 on: March 15, 2009, 07:23:51 AM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on March 13, 2009, 12:09:57 PM
Its too close to my heart and life
very nice salma jee
Bachpan se maine ek sapna dekha hai nahi janti sach hoga ya nahi sayad nahi
phir bhi aapke sath share karna chahti hoon,kisi ke dil ko thes lage to plz mujhe maaf karein..................
Ek din aisa aayega jarur jab aurat hogi jannat ka phul
samajhegi sabko paanv ka dhul
jab aurat banegi daftar mein boss aur mard karenge chauka bartan
jab aurat dikhaegi rob mardo par mardo ka jiyra karega jhan jhan
Ek din aisa aayega jarur jab janmengi sirf ladkiyan
aur ladkon ko paida karna hogi ek bhul
aayega jamana jab bhrun hatya ladko ki hogi
aur kisi kanun ko paas nahi hone degi aurat
janm jaayein bhi gar ikke dukke
tab bhi aurat ke paanv ki juti honge har mard
ek din aisa aayega jarur jab aaj ki kaliyan aur phul
ban jayengi kal ka dehakta hua shul.

Haan aayega aisa b zamana .... Jannat Jahan sis... Usual Smile
Nice post  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: March 15, 2009, 01:36:14 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 13, 2009, 10:32:07 AM
Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne, And Nice One,.


Beton Se Zyada Betiyaan Hi Maa Ka Khayaal Rakhti Hain,.
Beton se Zyada Betiyaan Hi Maa Ko Samajhti Hain,.

Tujhe Galat Fehmi Hui Hai "Salma, Maa Kabhi Aisa Nahi Karti,.
Maa To Apne Bachchon Se behad Mohabbat Karti Hai,.

Bhale Wo, Larka Ho Ya Lardki,.

Shayad Sirf Tumne Maa Ki daant Ko Dekha Hoga,.
Uski Mohabbat Ko Dekha Nahi,.

Maa To ma Hoti hai Mere Dost,.



Quote from: anjaan dharkan on March 13, 2009, 03:07:25 PM
nice work... but zara zyada angaar waali nahi hai? i agree with Jaanasheen ji, k maan tho maa hoti hai...

Quote from: anjaan dharkan on March 13, 2009, 03:08:22 PM
salma ji kya aapko maloom hai k jannati hoti hai wo awlaad jissne maa kee maar kaahee, ya usska ghussa chahkka...

waise nice post...
Thanks n nice one Janasheen ji!

Meri poem unke liye hai jaha aisi problem hoti hai... M d luckiest girl in ths whole world that ma family loves me lot!
Ths poem dsnt relate with me FRNZ Thumbs UP
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«Reply #12 on: March 15, 2009, 01:39:38 PM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on March 13, 2009, 12:09:57 PM
Its too close to my heart and life
very nice salma jee
Bachpan se maine ek sapna dekha hai nahi janti sach hoga ya nahi sayad nahi
phir bhi aapke sath share karna chahti hoon,kisi ke dil ko thes lage to plz mujhe maaf karein..................
Ek din aisa aayega jarur jab aurat hogi jannat ka phul
samajhegi sabko paanv ka dhul
jab aurat banegi daftar mein boss aur mard karenge chauka bartan
jab aurat dikhaegi rob mardo par mardo ka jiyra karega jhan jhan
Ek din aisa aayega jarur jab janmengi sirf ladkiyan
aur ladkon ko paida karna hogi ek bhul
aayega jamana jab bhrun hatya ladko ki hogi
aur kisi kanun ko paas nahi hone degi aurat
janm jaayein bhi gar ikke dukke
tab bhi aurat ke paanv ki juti honge har mard
ek din aisa aayega jarur jab aaj ki kaliyan aur phul
ban jayengi kal ka dehakta hua shul.

Thanks n very nice Jannat ji!
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«Reply #13 on: March 15, 2009, 01:44:19 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 15, 2009, 07:18:51 AM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Salma dear...
Sahi likha hai. Aaj b kahi jagah mein larki hona gunah aur bhoj
samajte hai sad7


Thanks Roja sis... n u r right Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: March 15, 2009, 01:44:42 PM »
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nice lines salma...
But ya this is also true, ke ab bahut kam jagah aise hota hia ke ladkiyo ko ladko sa darja nai milta hai.
but samay jaate, aankhon se parda uthta hi hia..
achhi koshish ki aapne aur jannat jahan ne... and azeem as usual wonderful... sachhi lines Usual Smile

Maa to maa hoti hia ye kyun kare bhed apne jism ke hisson mein,
aulaad, chahe ladki ya ladka, hoti hai maa ke aankhke sitaron mein,
bilakhta hia jab bhi uska bachha to ro padti hia rooh uski,
bhed kya jaane wo maa bete ya beti ki wo dard bhari chikhon mein...
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