Ladkiya kya kam hai!

by salma786 on January 14, 2009, 02:38:44 PM
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salma786
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«Reply #15 on: January 15, 2009, 09:13:56 AM »
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Its all depend how we r pronouncing d terms/words....like u said
ladko space se kya kam hai...its not sounding in same beat wen ull read d poem....
Widout using ne space b/w ladko and se v have to read it out....den it will sound good!!
But I thank you for ur suggestion from next time ill do it Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: January 15, 2009, 09:51:01 AM »
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Anyway thank u for the great explanation u have given. And plz dont follow whatever i say, infact i wont be commenting on any of your work and you can do the same for my post if you wish.

Well could you plz comment on the follwing also.....

ladkiYoindia Shayariadabe
mamase
dadase
chachase
mase
pitajise
unclese
auntyse
tayase
aadmise
aurtose well i can go on but its better to say one thing u are right i am wrong.

God bless u
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salma786
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«Reply #17 on: January 15, 2009, 10:02:07 AM »
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Y u taking it persnally ghayel ji? I hav the right to clarify maself.....
I appreciate ur suggesion but its always good to give tym to oders to clarify themselves...
I still dont find ne difference in :ladkiYoindia Shayariadabe
mamase
dadase
chachase
mase
pitajise
unclese
auntyse
tayase
aadmise
aurtose
I feel if u can understand wat i want to convey from ma poetry thats enough....But i too want to thank u for ur concern Usual Smile
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salma786
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«Reply #18 on: January 15, 2009, 10:03:09 AM »
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God bless u too
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #19 on: January 15, 2009, 10:18:03 AM »
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ufffffffffff .... yeh post koh sach meh sahi naam dia aap neh SALMA...

LADKIYA KYA KAM HAI .....

SALMA AUR GHAYEL MEH NOK JHOK HO GAYI HAI
AISEY TOPIC MEH KUCH ROMANCHAK BAAT HO GAYI HAI

GHAYEL NEH SAWAAL KIA, TOH SALMA NEH BHI JAWAAB DIA
GHAYEL NEH FIR TEER CHODA, SALMA NEY BHI KYA SAHI MODA
TABHI TOH SALMA NEY KAHA HAI ITNEY PYAR SEY
LADKIYA KYA KAM HAI KISI BHI HISAAB SEY ...  Giggle


HUM TOH BAS NARAD KA KAAM KAR RAHEY HAI
MOOH SEY RAM, BAGAL SEY BOMB PHEK RAHEY HAI  Laughing hard

JASBIR SINGH
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salma786
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«Reply #20 on: January 15, 2009, 10:20:42 AM »
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Jasbir ji   Is it SO!
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #21 on: January 15, 2009, 10:24:05 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on January 15, 2009, 10:20:42 AM
Jasbir ji   Is it SO!


 Giggle Giggle
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salma786
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«Reply #22 on: January 15, 2009, 10:34:21 AM »
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Tere haste huye chehre pe nur barse,
Tu duniya me har gam panese tarse,
Tere chehre me muskaan lane ko hi,
Laya hume khuda zameen pe falakse!
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«Reply #23 on: January 15, 2009, 10:47:05 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on January 15, 2009, 10:34:21 AM
Tere haste huye chehre pe nur barse,
Tu duniya me har gam panese tarse,
Tere chehre me muskaan lane ko hi,
Laya hume khuda zameen pe falakse!

WAH WAH WAH WAH SALMA


AAP KI DUAO SEY HI HUM MEHAKTEY HAI
AAP KI DUAO SEY HI HUM CHEHAKTEY HAI
KHUDA AAP KOH SALAMAT RAKHEY SALMA
AAP KI DUAO SEY HI HUM HASTEY HAI


YEH NOOR JOH AAP NEH HUMPAR BARSAYA
YEH GAM JOH AAP NEH HAMARA DOOR BHAGAYA
HAMARI MUSKAAN KEY LIYE JOH AAP HO KARTEY
AAP KEY LIYE APNI JAAN KHUDA KOH GIRVI DEH AAYA


JASBIR SINGH
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salma786
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«Reply #24 on: January 15, 2009, 10:54:51 AM »
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Shukr hai khuda ka,
Akhir Topic to change hua,
Kar rahe the jo khichai hamari,
Ab wo dua o me convert hua!!!
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«Reply #25 on: January 15, 2009, 11:04:03 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on January 15, 2009, 10:54:51 AM
Shukr hai khuda ka,
Akhir Topic to change hua,
Kar rahe the jo khichai hamari,
Ab wo dua o me convert hua!!!


HAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAA


YEH TOH AAP KA KAMAAL HAI SALMA
HUM TOH AAINA HAI, DEKH LOH CHEHRA APNA

PYAR SEY HAMEY JAB KOI BULATA HAI
YEH DIL KHUSHI SEY BHAR AATA HAI

JARA SA BHI KOI NAKHREY DIKHATA HAI
KOSO DOOR YEH DIL WAHA SEY JATA HAI

KHICHAI TUMHARI HUM KU KARENGEY
TUM TOH ITNEY PYAREY HO, TUMSEY KU LADENGEY



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com
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«Reply #26 on: January 15, 2009, 11:09:08 AM »
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Khuda ki kasam hai hume,
Khuda se puchlo,
Jitna yaha sukun mila hai,
Utna kaha sochlo,
Jo dhundenge aap apni tasveer,
Hume hi paenge,
Jab bhi mud k piche dekhenge,
Hum hi nazar aenge!!!
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«Reply #27 on: January 15, 2009, 11:17:55 AM »
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YEHI PYAR HAMEY YAHA KHEECH LATA HAI
AAP SEY MILNEY KOH DIL TARAS JATA HAI
YU HI TANHAYI MEH HUM RAHA KARTEY THEY
MEHFILOH MEH BHI NA SAKOON HAMEY NAZAR AATA HAI


TASVIR ABB TUMHARI DIL MEH RAKHTEY HAI
SAATH RAHOGEY HAMAREY, ABB YEH SAMAJTEY HAI
JANEY WALEY TOH JA CHUKEY HAMEY CHODD KAR
TASAVAR MEH BUSS ABB TUMHEY HI DEKHA KARTEY HAI




JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #28 on: January 15, 2009, 06:00:04 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 15, 2009, 06:07:04 AM
Bahut hi pyara likha hai aap neh SALMA ....
I am sure, everybody agrees with you.


PHOOLOH NEH KHUSHBOO MEHKA RAKHI HAI
LADKIYOH NEY HI DUNIYA SAJA RAKHI HAI

SUNA SUNA EH SARA JAHAAN LAGEGA
LADKIYOH KEY BINA YEH GULISTAAN VIRAAN LAGEGA

SOORAJ KIRAN SEY DHARTI KA ANDHERA DOOR HOTA HAI
MAA SEY HI HAR BACCHEY KA JIWAN SHURU HOTA HAI

NADAAN HAI LOG JOH LADKI KOH BOZZ SAMAJTEY HAI
BINA LADKI KEY KAHA KOI GHAR BASTEY HAI

LADKIYOH KOH TUM KABHI KAM NA SAMAJNA DOSTOH
WAQT AANEY PEH LADKIYA BANI HAI LAXMI BAI DOSTOH

GHAR KA AANGAN HO, YA DAFTAR KA KAAM
LADKIYA HI KARTI HAI, SAB KAAM ASAAN

LADKIYA NAHI ISS YUG MEH LADKOH SEY KAM HAI
MAANTEY HAI SAB, LADKIYOH MEH BHI DAM HAI



jasbir singh
Nice presentation Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #29 on: January 15, 2009, 06:45:47 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 15, 2009, 06:00:04 PM
Nice presentation Jasbir Ji

Thanks Rajesh

Jasbir Singh
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