LafzoN MeN Zindagi Ki Tasvir Bana Dena "Khwaish"

by khwaish on August 18, 2012, 09:36:12 AM
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Kisse Fursat Hai Koi Kissi Ke Dil MeN Jhaank Kar Dekhe
Yahaan To Log Sirf Chehre Padha Karte Hai...!!!!!!!!!


Yaad Rakhna Aur Phir Bhoola Dena
Uss  Kee Aadat Si Hai Yuh Saza Dena

Mohabbat Mein Aisi Bhi Saadgi Kahaa
Jo Chorr Jaaye Usse Bhi Dua Dena

Kisse maalum Kaun Kahaa Jaayega
Eh Rabb Bichadne WaloN Ko Mila Dena

Yeh Ganimat Ke Usne Pehchaana Humein
Asaan Hota Hai Kamzor Dil Ko Rulaa Dena

Duniya Kehti Hai Jinse Bhi Milo Faasle Rakho
Humein Aata hai Auron Ke Liye Khud Ko Luta Dena

Jab Bhi Likhta Hai,  Dil Se Likhta Hai "Khwaish"!!!!
Mushkil Hai LafzoN MeN Zindagi Ki Tasvir Bana Dena

         
           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2012, 09:52:28 AM »
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khwaish ji,

Lafzon men zindagee kee tasveer...waah waah
bahut khoob..

Achchhee koshish...just keep it on..
all the best..

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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2012, 10:19:47 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai khwaish ji.bilkul rawayati ghazal ke andaz mein. bahut mubarak ho.
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2012, 10:31:11 AM »
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bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2012, 11:40:04 AM »
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Very Nice!!! Jo Chhod Jaye Use Bhi Dua Dena..!! Lovely line!

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2012, 11:47:21 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat bahut umda bahut hi pyari rachna hai sir...... Dhero daad aur mubarakbaad.....
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2012, 11:51:53 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai apne .beautiful
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2012, 12:50:52 PM »
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very nice Khwaish ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2012, 01:22:40 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 18, 2012, 09:36:12 AM
Kisse Fursat Hai Koi Kissi Ke Dil MeN Jhaank Kar Dekhe
Yahaan To Log Sirf Chehre Padha Karte Hai...!!!!!!!!!


Yaad Rakhna Aur Phir Bhoola Dena
Uss  Kee Aadat Si Hai Yuh Saza Dena

Mohabbat Mein Aisi Bhi Saadgi Kahaa
Jo Chorr Jaaye Usse Bhi Dua Dena

Kisse maalum Kaun Kahaa Jaayega
Eh Rabb Bichadne WaloN Ko Mila Dena

Yeh Ganimat Ke Usne Pehchaana Humein
Asaan Hota Hai Kamzor Dil Ko Rulaa Dena

Duniya Kehti Hai Jinse Bhi Milo Faasle Rakho
Humein Aata hai Auron Ke Liye Khud Ko Luta Dena

Jab Bhi Likhta Hai,  Dil Se Likhta Hai "Khwaish"!!!!
Mushkil Hai LafzoN MeN Zindagi Ki Tasvir Bana Dena

        
           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

main taarif nahin karoon gaa --- khamoshi sey 1-rau deta hoon iss azeem kavish pey Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2012, 02:24:54 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 18, 2012, 09:36:12 AM
Kisse Fursat Hai Koi Kissi Ke Dil MeN Jhaank Kar Dekhe
Yahaan To Log Sirf Chehre Padha Karte Hai...!!!!!!!!!


Yaad Rakhna Aur Phir Bhoola Dena
Uss  Kee Aadat Si Hai Yuh Saza Dena

Mohabbat Mein Aisi Bhi Saadgi Kahaa
Jo Chorr Jaaye Usse Bhi Dua Dena

Kisse maalum Kaun Kahaa Jaayega
Eh Rabb Bichadne WaloN Ko Mila Dena

Yeh Ganimat Ke Usne Pehchaana Humein
Asaan Hota Hai Kamzor Dil Ko Rulaa Dena

Duniya Kehti Hai Jinse Bhi Milo Faasle Rakho
Humein Aata hai Auron Ke Liye Khud Ko Luta Dena

Jab Bhi Likhta Hai,  Dil Se Likhta Hai "Khwaish"!!!!
Mushkil Hai LafzoN MeN Zindagi Ki Tasvir Bana Dena

         
           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

vadhiya bahut vadiya
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2012, 04:30:05 PM »
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Bahut khoob Khwaish jee

har line aapke andar chipe khayaalo ko bakhoobi darsha rahi hai. ek aaina dikhata hua .Us dil kee saadgi pe kurbaan jaaun jisne aise shaandaar ehsaaso ko jabt kiya hua hai.
behad umda kalaam Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2012, 05:08:15 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 18, 2012, 09:36:12 AM
Kisse Fursat Hai Koi Kissi Ke Dil MeN Jhaank Kar Dekhe
Yahaan To Log Sirf Chehre Padha Karte Hai...!!!!!!!!!


Yaad Rakhna Aur Phir Bhoola Dena
Uss  Kee Aadat Si Hai Yuh Saza Dena

Mohabbat Mein Aisi Bhi Saadgi Kahaa
Jo Chorr Jaaye Usse Bhi Dua Dena

Kisse maalum Kaun Kahaa Jaayega
Eh Rabb Bichadne WaloN Ko Mila Dena

Yeh Ganimat Ke Usne Pehchaana Humein
Asaan Hota Hai Kamzor Dil Ko Rulaa Dena

Duniya Kehti Hai Jinse Bhi Milo Faasle Rakho
Humein Aata hai Auron Ke Liye Khud Ko Luta Dena

Jab Bhi Likhta Hai,  Dil Se Likhta Hai "Khwaish"!!!!
Mushkil Hai LafzoN MeN Zindagi Ki Tasvir Bana Dena

         
           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
waah bohat piari ghazal bohat bohat c daad....
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2012, 08:25:29 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 18, 2012, 09:36:12 AM
Kisse Fursat Hai Koi Kissi Ke Dil MeN Jhaank Kar Dekhe
Yahaan To Log Sirf Chehre Padha Karte Hai...!!!!!!!!!


Yaad Rakhna Aur Phir Bhoola Dena
Uss  Kee Aadat Si Hai Yuh Saza Dena
deko mujhe badnaam na karo. aur kaun si saza di hai ...kaale paani ki Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Mohabbat Mein Aisi Bhi Saadgi Kahaa
Jo Chorr Jaaye Usse Bhi Dua Dena
kyaa doobe hue alfaaz hain khawaish .khairiyat to hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kisse maalum Kaun Kahaa Jaayega
Eh Rabb Bichadne WaloN Ko Mila Dena naik doa hai bahut khoob
 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Yeh Ganimat Ke Usne Pehchaana Humein
Asaan Hota Hai Kamzor Dil Ko Rulaa Dena main kabhi nahin bhoolti ji aur isme rone wali kya baat hai Applause Applause Applause Applause

Duniya Kehti Hai Jinse Bhi Milo Faasle Rakho
Humein Aata hai Auron Ke Liye Khud Ko Luta Dena Applause Applause Applause

Jab Bhi Likhta Hai,  Dil Se Likhta Hai "Khwaish"!!!!
Mushkil Hai LafzoN MeN Zindagi Ki Tasvir Bana Dena

loot liya khawaish aaj tumne yaar iss sher pe . ye sher aaj se mera hua aur main apne takallus lagaa kar likoon gi. samjhe tum. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

        
           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

a deep feeelings indeed chupke se rau deti hoon kisi se kahna nahin Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: August 19, 2012, 02:14:39 AM »
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Bahut umda, dhero dad
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«Reply #14 on: August 19, 2012, 02:17:07 AM »
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waah waah waah waah waah waah

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