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by Mansi_d_archi on November 21, 2004, 10:53:24 AM
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«Reply #135 on: January 07, 2005, 03:25:42 AM »
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delhi mein zindagi ladko ki beet-ti hai paan/chaye ki dukaan pe
ya fir raatein kaat-te hai ladki k ghar k saamne road kisi sunsaan pe :wink:
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«Reply #136 on: January 07, 2005, 04:44:05 AM »
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dis is 4 you Deep  :oops:

rehti hai kolkata mein
khaati hai rasgulle
kuch humein bhi de ja
baithe rehte hai saare din velle
arz hai-dard hoga magar dil to behal jaega,kuch apki sunega dil kuch apni sunaega,        yun muh chhipakar mehfilon me nahi baitha karte, khamosh chehra khud-ba-khud dastan bataega...


ye sab mere liye tha kya?
aapne to mere dil mein hi jhaank liya

neways nice :wink:
ya....ab kuchh delhi ke bare mein...na puchho hal bekhabar is shehar ka,na jaane kis jamane se soya hai;karo na koshishen jagane ki behaya ko,jagta hai bas bahane se soya hai....


na poocho haal is shaher k anjaane ladko ka
din raat sote hain or kehte hain shaher hai sota :wink:
sota to hoon lekin....vo raat aisi beeti jis raat tum na aae,kabhi need dagmagai kabhi khvab sakpakae....
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«Reply #137 on: January 07, 2005, 05:00:26 AM »
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lol nice1 !!

hairaan hu main ki kyo aap us raat itne sakpakaaye
lagta hai macchro se ghire the or keedo se the aap ghabraaye
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«Reply #138 on: January 07, 2005, 05:10:03 AM »
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lol nice1 !!

hairaan hu main ki kyo aap us raat itne sakpakaaye
lagta hai macchro se ghire the or keedo se the aap ghabraaye
i feel baffled wether u r a poetess in making or a born one???anyws...utara nahi hai sar se sharafat ka junoon,..dhad par apne abhi apna hi sar liye firte hain....
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«Reply #139 on: January 07, 2005, 05:18:40 AM »
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ye baat aapki kuch sir ke upar se nikli
zara simple hindi mein boliye ,meri hindi hai thodi si nakli :wink:
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«Reply #140 on: January 07, 2005, 05:25:47 AM »
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ye baat aapki kuch sir ke upar se nikli
zara simple hindi mein boliye ,meri hindi hai thodi si nakli :wink:
ye sharafat hi meri jindagi ka sarmaya<collection>hai..                         fir apki samajh kyon nahi aaya hai..                                                     dhad ka matlab dictionary ne trunk bataya hai....                                   baki to sab simple shabd hi lagaya hai...
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«Reply #141 on: January 07, 2005, 05:43:14 AM »
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ye baat aapki kuch sir ke upar se nikli
zara simple hindi mein boliye ,meri hindi hai thodi si nakli :wink:
ye sharafat hi meri jindagi ka sarmaya<collection>hai..                         fir apki samajh kyon nahi aaya hai..                                                     dhad ka matlab dictionary ne trunk bataya hai....                                   baki to sab simple shabd hi lagaya hai...


wah wah..cool!!

isi tareh kuch na kuch aap sunatei rahie
sabka man yuhi har pal behlaate rahie
shabd chaahe doosro ke samajh na aye par aap chalte rahie
yuhi meri posts badhaate rahie or comments paate rahie :wink:
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«Reply #142 on: January 07, 2005, 06:06:55 AM »
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ye baat aapki kuch sir ke upar se nikli
zara simple hindi mein boliye ,meri hindi hai thodi si nakli :wink:
ye sharafat hi meri jindagi ka sarmaya<collection>hai..                         fir apki samajh kyon nahi aaya hai..                                                     dhad ka matlab dictionary ne trunk bataya hai....                                   baki to sab simple shabd hi lagaya hai...


wah wah..cool!!

isi tareh kuch na kuch aap sunatei rahie
sabka man yuhi har pal behlaate rahie
shabd chaahe doosro ke samajh na aye par aap chalte rahie
yuhi meri posts badhaate rahie or comments paate rahie :wink:
ik na ik shama andhere me jalaate rahie....jawab deejie aur jawaab paate rahie....khushion me to hansate sabhi hain......dard jajb kar dil mein, aansuon me bhi muskurate rahie...
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«Reply #143 on: January 07, 2005, 06:18:24 AM »
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awesome!!!!!!!

is tareh zindagi se har baar muh na chhupaate rahie
ek na ek din jo kaam karna hai wo abhi se nibtaate chaliye
ab time ho raha hai chalne ka par aap likhte rahie
kahi yahi 12 na baj jaaye or coll mein mam kahe"ab kya karne aaye aap kahiye?"
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«Reply #144 on: January 07, 2005, 06:21:09 AM »
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lolz..................

well tarav ji nice work
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«Reply #145 on: January 07, 2005, 07:56:57 AM »
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lolz..................

well tarav ji nice work
thanx...abhi abhi suna ek sher arj hai..tujhe bhoolne ki koshishen kabhi kamyaab naa ho saki ,..teri yaad shakhe gulaab hai jo hava chali to lachak gai....<not mine>
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«Reply #146 on: January 07, 2005, 08:31:06 AM »
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ya nice Tarav....u r really a gr8 poet tho d last one was copied.
Do continue wiritn ....ur words r really beautiful.
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«Reply #147 on: January 07, 2005, 08:43:26 AM »
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ya nice Tarav....you r really a gr8 poet tho d last one was copied.
Do continue wiritn ....ur words r really beautiful.
kisi ko itna chadhana chidhane ke baraabar hota hai aur vaise bhi mai to..... shabd bunta rahaa..arth khota rahaa, mai sadion tak jeevan ko dhotaa raha....
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«Reply #148 on: January 07, 2005, 08:55:15 AM »
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mujhko  yaaro maaf karna main neend mein thi
aapko laga maine to seriously tareef kar di thi   :wink: lol
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«Reply #149 on: January 07, 2005, 09:04:23 AM »
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mujhko  yaaro maaf karna main neend mein thi
aapko laga maine to seriously tareef kar di thi   :wink: lol
nasha mujhe bhi hai..jindagi ka nasha...lahoo ban ke bahta hai jindagi ka nasha...abhi naraaj thodi thi mujh hi se jindagi..palak ki larjishon ke saath baha jindagi ka nasha
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