Life~

by Mansi_d_archi on November 21, 2004, 10:53:24 AM
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«Reply #165 on: January 20, 2005, 08:58:51 AM »
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baarish mein bheeg rahi hai chaadar uski
thithur rahe hain haath-paav bichare budhe ke
ek chaye ki pyaali mein jaise basi hain khushiya uski
koi aas nahi hai aankho mein ,fir bhi sukhi hai zindagi uski
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #166 on: January 20, 2005, 09:01:17 AM »
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baarish mein bheeg rahi hai chaadar uski
thithur rahe hain haath-paav bichare budhe ke
ek chaye ki pyaali mein jaise basi hain khushiya uski
koi aas nahi hai aankho mein ,fir bhi sukhi hai zindagi uski



very nice!!!!!!

Aisa lagta hai zindagi....
tum ho Ajnabee, kaise ajnabee tum ho?
   Main zameen par ghana andhera hoon...
   Aasmaanon-ki chandni tum ho
Ab koi aarzoo nahin baaki.........
justajoo meri aakhri tum ho
   Doston-se wafa ki ummeeden!........
   Kis zamaane ke aadmi tum ho?
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«Reply #167 on: January 20, 2005, 10:12:03 AM »
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Aisa lagta hai zindagi....
tum ho Ajnabee, kaise ajnabee tum ho?
   Main zameen par ghana andhera hoon...
   Aasmaanon-ki chandni tum ho
Ab koi aarzoo nahin baaki.........
justajoo meri aakhri tum ho
   Doston-se wafa ki ummeeden!........
   Kis zamaane ke aadmi tum ho?


* not mine

add please..... if this is not ur creation !!!!!
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«Reply #168 on: January 20, 2005, 10:17:54 AM »
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Some call it bed of roses,
Some feel its cruel
But the irony is dat it is dual.
The former is just a myth
Comes in d wee hours,
Deserts our souls behind d bars.
D latter depicts its true sense
For which courage acts as d incense

For so long I’ve been wondering
Lookin forward 2 d upcoming
Wud there be an end 2 my mood swing?
Will I get 2 c my desires dance and hopes sing?
Lets keep fingers crossed & c wat does fortune bring.

At times, I pray if a friend cud ring
Life sounds still widout a li’l zing
School time was my best tune sung
Old friends r where my heart is clung

Viewing my life through n through.
Wud you say its jus a season of blue?
Having seen so much I feel its really tough
Now you people won’t ever say “The World is not Enough”!
 :wink:



nice one mansi ji
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«Reply #169 on: January 20, 2005, 10:37:37 AM »
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thanx Amit
& nice 1 Tanha......though it was copied,jus be careful 2 write (nm*=not mine)
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«Reply #170 on: January 20, 2005, 10:43:24 AM »
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"ONE DAY U WILL ASK ME WHAT MORE IMPORTANT TO ME "YOU" OR "MY LIFE" I WILL SAY "MY LIFE" AND U WILL LEAVE ME WITHOUT REALIZING THAT U R "MY LIFE"

nm
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«Reply #171 on: January 20, 2005, 10:46:16 AM »
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wow! great thought!
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #172 on: January 20, 2005, 10:47:26 AM »
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i always write nm which is not my creation
but right now i am in very hurry that is why i forgot to mention that.


& both of u r right that & i also like to give the credit to the creator.

thanks.



Waqt ke seenein pe bas yeh ghav, hare ke hare raih jayenge.
Kallam utha ke kya karenge, dil ki baat kaih kar kya karenge.
Kuchh dard zubaan pe aane se paihle,
ye to Ankhiyon se neer ban baih jayenge.
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«Reply #173 on: January 20, 2005, 10:47:32 AM »
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thnx mansi ji
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«Reply #174 on: January 20, 2005, 10:53:14 AM »
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nice1  Tanha

uske zakhm shayad aaj bhi hare ke hare hi hain
muh sil rakha hai aaj bhi,dard andar hi andar uske karah rahe hain
isiliye shayad kisi se dil ki baat kehna theek wo nahi samajhta hai
inhi ghaavo ke dard ko seh kar woh kam  nahi balka badha raha hai.
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«Reply #175 on: January 20, 2005, 10:54:58 AM »
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aahha nice both of u !!!!!!1
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #176 on: January 20, 2005, 10:58:38 AM »
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thanx Amit
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #177 on: January 20, 2005, 11:07:29 AM »
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nice1  Tanha

uske zakhm shayad aaj bhi hare ke hare hi hain
muh sil rakha hai aaj bhi,dard andar hi andar uske karah rahe hain
isiliye shayad kisi se dil ki baat kehna theek wo nahi samajhta hai
inhi ghaavo ke dard ko seh kar woh kam  nahi balka badha raha hai.


superb mansi!!!!!!!!!!!!
excellent

kya karoon jo nahi hai koi ab woh mere paas
sirf dard he dard hai iss seene mein ab to
jaanta hai ke nahi hai woh iss duniya mein teri
phir bhi pagal nahi chhodta uske aane ki aas.
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«Reply #178 on: January 20, 2005, 11:15:13 AM »
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THANX & GUD1 AGAIN

jeene ki taakat  uske seene mein aaj bhi hai
afsos nahi hai usko jo kal tha or aaj nahi hai
duniya to jeena isi ko kehti hai,chahe us gareeb ke dard ki awaaz nahi hai
jaane kaise zinda hai,bhale hi uske paas shareer hai par saans nahi hai
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«Reply #179 on: January 20, 2005, 11:27:37 AM »
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THANX & GUD1 AGAIN

jeene ki taakat  uske seene mein aaj bhi hai
afsos nahi hai usko jo kal tha or aaj nahi hai
duniya to jeena isi ko kehti hai,chahe us gareeb ke dard ki awaaz nahi hai
jaane kaise zinda hai,bhale hi uske paas shareer hai par saans nahi hai


superb mansi superb !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


dil kar raha hai  :cry:
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