Life~

by Mansi_d_archi on November 21, 2004, 10:53:24 AM
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immi
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«Reply #30 on: December 09, 2004, 03:49:11 PM »
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Nice postings Mansi !!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #31 on: December 09, 2004, 03:56:57 PM »
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Some call it bed of roses,
Some feel its cruel
But the irony is dat it is dual.
The former is just a myth
Comes in d wee hours,
Deserts our souls behind d bars.
D latter depicts its true sense
For which courage acts as d incense

For so long I’ve been wondering
Lookin forward 2 d upcoming
Wud there be an end 2 my mood swing?
Will I get 2 c my desires dance and hopes sing?
Lets keep fingers crossed & c wat does fortune bring.

At times, I pray if a friend cud ring
Life sounds still widout a li’l zing
School time was my best tune sung
Old friends r where my heart is clung

Viewing my life through n through.
Wud you say its jus a season of blue?
Having seen so much I feel its really tough
Now you people won’t ever say “The World is not Enough”!
 :wink:



gud vvrk...
some call it bed of roses,
some feel its cruel Huh?
jumping frm call to feel...Huh??

better if it vvas "some say its cruel"


but anyvvays, poem vvas nice. true.
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #32 on: December 09, 2004, 04:28:10 PM »
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hmmmm better

sum call it bed of roses'
sum say its cruel :evil:
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akela
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«Reply #33 on: December 10, 2004, 09:41:42 AM »
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hmmmm nice
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #34 on: December 10, 2004, 01:01:17 PM »
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ok chupppp!

Lemme continue wid my 'old man' wali poem ppl :evil:
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Pooja
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«Reply #35 on: December 10, 2004, 05:42:38 PM »
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very nice Mansi!!!!!! Good work!!!!
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«Reply #36 on: December 10, 2004, 07:35:40 PM »
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very nice Mansi!!!!!! Good work!!!!


 :wink: fans se anurodh hai ki itni taareef na kare,i dun like 2 say 'thanx' again n again :evil:  glasses2
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«Reply #37 on: December 10, 2004, 07:47:19 PM »
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kya kahen jab koi nahin paas gum bhi sunaane ko
us raat ke baad yaaden hi bachi,koi na raha subeh uthaane ko
na koi kuch kehta hai usse,na koi bacha apna kehlaane ko
laga hai apna ateet baaki kuch yaadon ko jhuthlaane ko

......dedicated 2 d old man who's daily sittin on d footpath, makin tea 4 himself,tryin 2 hum a song ,playin wid a box ........nthn 2 do....no1 2 talk 2.....no hopes.no desires.....jus breathin  n pacin up on life's cruel roads (lukin at d traffic )


khaa gaya hai aashaao ko nichod kar akelapan
sadak hi aaj ban gayi hai uske jeevan ka darpan
dekhta hai sadak ki or ,khoe hue kuch khayalo mein
maano soch raha ho maut kyo na aayi itne saalo mein
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #38 on: December 10, 2004, 08:24:50 PM »
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very impressive
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #39 on: December 10, 2004, 08:44:43 PM »
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thanx Chimpu ji

kho gaya woh budha shareer anjaan ek mele mein
karta hai baatein bas hawaaon se andere mein
jaane kehta bhi kya hai,kisi ne na suni uski awaaz
daba sa hai khulte ,band hote hothon mein koi raaz
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«Reply #40 on: December 11, 2004, 07:58:05 PM »
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nice u vvrite very vvell mansi
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #41 on: December 11, 2004, 08:21:56 PM »
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oh thanx Usual Smile
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«Reply #42 on: December 11, 2004, 08:28:35 PM »
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oh thanx Usual Smile



ur vvelcome!!! now continue vvriting


 Puzzled !
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«Reply #43 on: December 11, 2004, 08:37:19 PM »
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i'll write it later...coz im gonna write smthn in english as u asked me 2...Jus now i've writeen 4-5 paragraphs...im sure u'll find it weird..ALL ABOUT LUV..lol :evil: :wink: check it out!

Its also v close 2 my heart...coz im celebrating 2 months of happiness wid some1 really spl :oops:
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«Reply #44 on: December 11, 2004, 08:46:59 PM »
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i'll write it later...coz im gonna write smthn in english as you asked me 2...Jus now i've writeen 4-5 paragraphs...im sure you'll find it weird..ALL ABOUT LUV..lol :evil: :wink: check it out!

Its also v close 2 my heart...coz im celebrating 2 months of happiness wid some1 really spl :oops:




thts gr8 mansi !! hope c ur postings soon. i'd luv to read them  Puzzled !
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