Life~

by Mansi_d_archi on November 21, 2004, 10:53:24 AM
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #45 on: December 12, 2004, 09:12:06 AM »
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luk how nicely i contributed 2 ur poems.......now u also try writin smthn :twisted:
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«Reply #46 on: December 12, 2004, 09:26:22 AM »
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apne muh miya mitthoo    Puzzled !

ab mujhe koi topic dogi tabhi to help karunga main tumhari kaisi batein karti ho  Shocked
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«Reply #47 on: December 12, 2004, 09:37:19 AM »
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yaar dis is my topic only!! :?

Buddhe ki poem ko thoda abaad kar na
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«Reply #48 on: December 21, 2004, 03:35:02 PM »
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thanx Chimpu ji

kho gaya woh budha shareer anjaan ek mele mein
karta hai baatein bas hawaaon se andere mein
jaane kehta bhi kya hai,kisi ne na suni uski awaaz
daba sa hai khulte ,band hote hothon mein koi raaz


laut rahe hain panchhi ab apne gharo mein
sadak bhi has rahi hai uske soonepan mein
dekh raha hai yu aati-jaati har gaadi ko
jaise ho uski hi hai ye,fir chaahe paas uske koi na savaari ho

Do comment guys...will hardly take 1min or so!thx...
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Talat
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«Reply #49 on: December 21, 2004, 03:46:12 PM »
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Good one Mansi!!
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #50 on: December 21, 2004, 04:01:58 PM »
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Thanx Talat...Well,I thot it didn't get posted so i wrote few lines again.

shor macha rahi hai saamne khadi sadak
aur upse baras rahi hai ab to sardi bhi kadak
shor mein bhi usko milti ajeeb si shaanti
itna sata kar aaj bhi uski kismat jaise kuch nai jaanti
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«Reply #51 on: December 21, 2004, 04:11:16 PM »
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again Good one!!!
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #52 on: December 21, 2004, 07:27:18 PM »
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and again thanx! But no1's givin any damn comment sad5
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lovebites
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«Reply #53 on: December 22, 2004, 07:42:01 AM »
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Gud Wrk Mansi its kwel.....................!
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«Reply #54 on: December 22, 2004, 11:16:32 AM »
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Gud Wrk Mansi its kwel.....................!


Thanx 4 appreciatin Luvbites!
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«Reply #55 on: December 23, 2004, 08:13:55 AM »
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Thanx Talat...Well,I thot it didn't get posted so i wrote few lines again.

shor macha rahi hai saamne khadi sadak
aur upse baras rahi hai ab to sardi bhi kadak
shor mein bhi usko milti ajeeb si shaanti
itna sata kar aaj bhi uski kismat jaise kuch nai jaanti



nice wrk
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«Reply #56 on: December 23, 2004, 08:52:47 AM »
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pathhrayi aankhein uski takti hain sooni raahein
uske hisse bachi bas kuch thandi aahein
likhne se kya lagaoge uski takleef ka andaaza
pooche khud se kab khulega, khushion ka darwaza
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«Reply #57 on: December 23, 2004, 09:50:21 AM »
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pathhrayi aankhein uski takti hain sooni raahein
uske hisse bachi bas kuch thandi aahein
likhne se kya lagaoge uski takleef ka andaaza
pooche khud se kab khulega, khushion ka darwaza


gr81 Amit
but seems like he's so satisfied dat he doesn't wanna ask 4 more...he's habitual 2 lonliness........well trtuly speakin i jus dun hae time ormayb i guess it will alwys b less speakin up at dat man's life....
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«Reply #58 on: December 23, 2004, 10:50:32 AM »
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pathhrayi aankhein uski takti hain sooni raahein
uske hisse bachi bas kuch thandi aahein
likhne se kya lagaoge uski takleef ka andaaza
pooche khud se kab khulega, khushion ka darwaza


gr81 Amit
but seems like he's so satisfied dat he doesn't wanna ask 4 more...he's habitual 2 lonliness........well trtuly speakin i jus dun hae time ormayb i guess it will alwys b less speakin up at dat man's life....


amit? i like the old chimpu  sad5

i dont know much abt him. jo dimag mein aaya likh diya. hamesha ki tareh. waise bhi im not much gud when it comes to writing in hindi.
btw, thnx....
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«Reply #59 on: December 23, 2004, 10:55:53 AM »
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pathhrayi aankhein uski takti hain sooni raahein
uske hisse bachi bas kuch thandi aahein
likhne se kya lagaoge uski takleef ka andaaza
pooche khud se kab khulega, khushion ka darwaza


gr81 Amit
but seems like he's so satisfied dat he doesn't wanna ask 4 more...he's habitual 2 lonliness........well trtuly speakin i jus dun hae time ormayb i guess it will alwys b less speakin up at dat man's life....


amit? i like the old chimpu  sad5

i dont know much abt him. jo dimag mein aaya likh diya. hamesha ki tareh. waise bhi im not much gud when it comes to writing in hindi.
btw, thnx....


Ok..lol...even i didn't want 2 call u 'amit' coz im so familier wid Chimpu glasses2
N u write so gud in hindi also...jus dat u dun believe Puzzled !  me
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