LIKHTE HAIN QALAM KI PYAAS BUJHANE KE LIE

by @kaash on April 30, 2009, 08:19:08 PM
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LIKHTE NAHI HUM CHAAK-E-JIGAR JALANE KE LIE,
HUM TO LIKHTE HAIN QALAM KI PYAAS BUJHANE KE LIE
                                                                              


VO AUR HONGE JO ZARIA-E-SHAYARI DHOONDHE,
HAR SHAY HI BANI HAI YAHAN LIKHNE KE LIE
                                                                              


NAGMON KI AHMIYAT MAHAJ LIKHNE TAK NAHI,
HUM TO LIKHTE HAIN UNHE GUNGUNANE KE LIE
                                                                              


BHALA KYUN AUR KAISE DAFN KAR DE IN PAAK EHSASAAT KO,
YEHI TO RAH JAENGE MERE BAAD ZAMANE KE LIE
                                          



YE DHARTI YE SABA YE AASMAAN HI TO SHAYAR KA SAAMAAN,
HUM TO LIKHENGE INSE BHI DUA PAANE KE LIE                                   



           -KAASH-
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2009, 08:22:11 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wah kay abaat hai kash ji ... bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2009, 08:37:07 PM »
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LIKHTE NAHI HUM CHAAK-E-JIGAR JALANE KE LIE,
HUM TO LIKHTE HAIN QALAM KI PYAAS BUJHANE KE LIE         
                                                                                 
 VO AUR HONGE JO ZARIA-E-SHAYARI DHOONDHE,
HUM TYAAR RAHTE HAIN BEGUNAAH HOKE BHI SAZA PANE KE LIE         
                                                                                                 
NAGMON KI AHMIYAT MAHAJ LIKHNE TAK NAHI,
HUM TO LIKHTE HAIN UNHE GUNGUNANE KE LIE       
                                                                           
 BHALA KYUN AUR KAISE DAFN KAR DE IN PAAK EHSASAAT KO,
YEHI TO RAH JAENGE MERE BAAD ZAMANE KE LIE   
                                                                             
 YE DHARTI YE SABA YE   YE AASMAAN HI TO SHAYAR KA SAAMAAN,
HUM TO LIKHENGE INSE BHI DUA PAANE KE LIE                                                                                   
                                                                                     -KAASH-

App hi ki kavita ko najar main rakhte hue kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai:

Kabhi socha hi nahi likhte hai kyun, bas aise he likh jaate hai
Kabhi khushi banati hai shabd, kabhi dard shabdo main bikhar jaate hai

Dhoondna hai kaya, yaha to khud ka khud ko hosh nahi
Hum to likhte hai bas aor bin soche likhe jaate hai

Shabdo ki ahmiyat samjhte hai sirf wo he insaan dunia main
Jo humari rahgujar se hokar, zindagi ke samunder main mil jaate hai

Likha aor likh kar bhool jaati hai khud he Pooja
Kon karega yaad, yaha to apne he apno ko bhool jaate hai

Kabhi socha hi nahi likhte hai kyun, bas aise he likh jaate hai
Kabhi khushi banti hai shabd, kabhi dard shabdo main bikhar jaate hai

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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2009, 11:14:19 PM »
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very very nice kaash ji.bahut dil se likha aap ne.
keep writting.
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2009, 03:08:52 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kaashji..Bahut Hi khoobsurat Kalam.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut khoob Pooja,aap ne Bhi Khoob Likha. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2009, 04:24:27 AM »
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Clapping Smiley waah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Pooja ji..kitni achi poem likhi hai aapne aur kitni jaldi n so natural n feelngful.har lafz apni bhavna lie hai..thanks..it's too inspiring..bus yehi kahenge                                                                              uparwala aisa hi paqeezgi se bhara rishta har shayar..shayara ko uski qalam ke saath bakhshe                                                                   

Tahe dil se shukaria Kash ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2009, 04:24:57 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kaashji..Bahut Hi khoobsurat Kalam.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut khoob Pooja,aap ne Bhi Khoob Likha. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thanks Khwaish ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2009, 07:45:27 PM »
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LIKHTE NAHI HUM CHAAK-E-JIGAR JALANE KE LIE,
HUM TO LIKHTE HAIN QALAM KI PYAAS BUJHANE KE LIE
                                                                              


VO AUR HONGE JO ZARIA-E-SHAYARI DHOONDHE,
HAR SHAY HI BANI HAI YAHAN LIKHNE KE LIE
                                                                              


NAGMON KI AHMIYAT MAHAJ LIKHNE TAK NAHI,
HUM TO LIKHTE HAIN UNHE GUNGUNANE KE LIE
                                                                              


BHALA KYUN AUR KAISE DAFN KAR DE IN PAAK EHSASAAT KO,
YEHI TO RAH JAENGE MERE BAAD ZAMANE KE LIE
                                          



YE DHARTI YE SABA YE AASMAAN HI TO SHAYAR KA SAAMAAN,
HUM TO LIKHENGE INSE BHI DUA PAANE KE LIE                                   



           -KAASH-

bahoot sunder kaash ji...bahooooooooot khoooooooooooooooooob janab daad kabool karen  Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2009, 07:47:40 PM »
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App hi ki kavita ko najar main rakhte hue kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai:

Kabhi socha hi nahi likhte hai kyun, bas aise he likh jaate hai
Kabhi khushi banati hai shabd, kabhi dard shabdo main bikhar jaate hai

Dhoondna hai kaya, yaha to khud ka khud ko hosh nahi
Hum to likhte hai bas aor bin soche likhe jaate hai

Shabdo ki ahmiyat samjhte hai sirf wo he insaan dunia main
Jo humari rahgujar se hokar, zindagi ke samunder main mil jaate hai

Likha aor likh kar bhool jaati hai khud he Pooja
Kon karega yaad, yaha to apne he apno ko bhool jaate hai

Kabhi socha hi nahi likhte hai kyun, bas aise he likh jaate hai
Kabhi khushi banti hai shabd, kabhi dard shabdo main bikhar jaate hai



bahoooooot khoob pooja ji waqai hazirjawabi me koi aapke aas paas to kya door door tak nahi  Applause Applause
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bahoooooot khoob pooja ji waqai hazirjawabi me koi aapke aas paas to kya door door tak nahi  Applause Applause

Tahe dil se apki parshnsa ka shukaria Bekarar ji!!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2009, 08:11:30 AM »
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LIKHTE NAHI HUM CHAAK-E-JIGAR JALANE KE LIE,
HUM TO LIKHTE HAIN QALAM KI PYAAS BUJHANE KE LIE
                                                                              


VO AUR HONGE JO ZARIA-E-SHAYARI DHOONDHE,
HAR SHAY HI BANI HAI YAHAN LIKHNE KE LIE
                                                                              


NAGMON KI AHMIYAT MAHAJ LIKHNE TAK NAHI,
HUM TO LIKHTE HAIN UNHE GUNGUNANE KE LIE
                                                                              


BHALA KYUN AUR KAISE DAFN KAR DE IN PAAK EHSASAAT KO,
YEHI TO RAH JAENGE MERE BAAD ZAMANE KE LIE
                                          



YE DHARTI YE SABA YE AASMAAN HI TO SHAYAR KA SAAMAAN,
HUM TO LIKHENGE INSE BHI DUA PAANE KE LIE                                   



           -KAASH-



BAHUT KHOOB KAASH JI
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