Log jab Chalte Hai Girte Hai "Khwaish"

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Waqt Ki Aandhiyon Mein Kuch Khwaishe Pigal Jaate Hai
Tamanayen Ashq Bankar Aankhon Se Nikal Jaate Hai

Maayusi Ka Sehra Pehne Kyon Phirte Rehte Hai Hum Dar-badar!!
Suna Hai Pal-Pal mein Yahan Taqdeerein Badal Jaate Hai

Hausle Dam Tod Bhi De To Manzil Ko Paana Na-Mumkin Nahi!!
Kehte Hai Ke Bhigde Hue Halaat Bhi Aksar Sawar Jaate Hai

 Jinse Bhi Milo,Bas Muksurakar Milo Umar Bhar!!!!
Pareshaniyon Mein Aksar Apno ke Chehre Badal Jaate Hai

Kabhi Jahan Bhar Ki Cheezein Paas Ho To Bhi Koi Sukoon Nahi!!
To Kabhi Bacho Ko Muskurate Dekhkar Hi Dil Behal Jaate Hai
 
 Palkon Par Ashq Ka Qatra Aakhir Kab Tak Tehrega!!!!
Waqt Ke mutaabik Hum Khud Hi Apni Palkon Ko Masal Jaate Hai

"Khwaish" Itna Asaan Nahi Hai Yuhi Manzil Ko Paa lena!!
Log Jab Chalte Hai, Girte Hai Par Phir Sambhal Jaate Hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2011, 12:58:07 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2011, 01:06:42 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2011, 01:13:54 PM »
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Inn Beshumaar Taaliyon Ke Liye Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Qalbji..Par Kaash Aap Kuch Keh Bhi Dete Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2011, 01:15:25 PM »
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Khawahish jee Aadaab!

Behad khoob khayaal hai aur kafe gehre ashaar kahe hai
aapne ... humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaaroN ke khayaal behad khoob hai... Usual Smile
Kuch khamiyaaN nazar aayi hai jiss ko ruberu karna zaruri
samjh rahe hai hum isliye bataa raheN hai.. Usual Smile Ummid hai
aap is gustaqui ko dil se nahi lagayeNge aur humari baat ko
samjheNge.. Usual Smile

          

Waqt Ki Aandhiyon Mein Kuch Khwaishe Pigal Jaate Hai
Tamanayen Ashq Bankar Aankhon Se Nikal Jaate Hai

Pahele misre meiN khawahishe " Female gender word hai... jo jaate kahne se munaseeb nahi ban rahi hai.. " KhawahisheN pighal jati hai"

Wohi dusre misre meiN TamannayeN bhi femal gender word hai..
Jiske liye aapko "jaati hai" ka istemaal karna padeNga..          

Maayusi Ka Sehra Pehne Kyon Phirte Rehte Hai Hum Dar-badar!!
Suna Hai Pal-Pal mein Yahan Taqdeerein Badal Jaate Hai

Achcha khayaal hai daad par yahaaN bhi taqdeer female gender word hai so TaqdeereN badal jaati hai"          

Hausle Dam Tod Bhi De To Manzil Ko Paana Na-Mumkin Nahi!!
Kehte Hai Ke Bhigde Hue Halaat Bhi Aksar Sawar Jaate Hai

Achcha khayaal hai janab .. daad ..
Par aapne kafiyaa hi badal diyaa is sher meiN ?          

 Jinse Bhi Milo,Bas Muksurakar Milo Umar Bhar!!!!
Pareshaniyon Mein Aksar Apno ke Chehre Badal Jaate Hai

Waah janab bahut khoob achcha sher hai aur puri tarhaa sahiN Usual Smile          

Kabhi Jahan Bhar Ki Cheezein Paas Ho To Bhi Koi Sukoon Nahi!!
To Kabhi Bacho Ko Muskurate Dekhkar Hi Dil Behal Jaate Hai
 
Bahut khoob daad Usual Smile          

 Palkon Par Ashq Ka Qatra Aakhir Kab Tak Tehrega!!!!
Waqt Ke mutaabik Hum Khud Hi Apni Palkon Ko Masal Jaate Hai

Achcha hai daad Usual Smile          

"Khwaish" Itna Asaan Nahi Hai Yuhi Manzil Ko Paa lena!!
Log Jab Chalte Hai, Girte Hai Par Phir Sambhal Jaate Hai

Bahut khoob daad Usual Smile          
    

Khawahish jee aap bahut unique likhate hai..
behad achche khayaal bayaaN karte hai par kuch aik khamiyaaN
shayari ki rangat ko kam kar deti hai... Usual Smile

Jisse shayari padhne meiN aur use kahne meiN mazaa kam ho
jataa hai... isliye hume jo choti si khamiyaaN nazar aayi
humne apna farz samajh kar aapko dikha dii... Usual Smile aap isse
agar kuch lete haiN to hume bahut khushi hoNgi.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2011, 01:18:02 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 30, 2011, 12:55:16 PM
Waqt Ki Aandhiyon Mein Kuch Khwaishe Pigal Jaate Hai
Tamanayen Ashq Bankar Aankhon Se Nikal Jaate Hai

Maayusi Ka Sehra Pehne Kyon Phirte Rehte Hai Hum Dar-badar!!
Suna Hai Pal-Pal mein Yahan Taqdeerein Badal Jaate Hai

Hausle Dam Tod Bhi De To Manzil Ko Paana Na-Mumkin Nahi!!
Kehte Hai Ke Bhigde Hue Halaat Bhi Aksar Sawar Jaate Hai

 Jinse Bhi Milo,Bas Muksurakar Milo Umar Bhar!!!!
Pareshaniyon Mein Aksar Apno ke Chehre Badal Jaate Hai

Kabhi Jahan Bhar Ki Cheezein Paas Ho To Bhi Koi Sukoon Nahi!!
To Kabhi Bacho Ko Muskurate Dekhkar Hi Dil Behal Jaate Hai
 
 Palkon Par Ashq Ka Qatra Aakhir Kab Tak Tehrega!!!!
Waqt Ke mutaabik Hum Khud Hi Apni Palkon Ko Masal Jaate Hai

"Khwaish" Itna Asaan Nahi Hai Yuhi Manzil Ko Paa lena!!
Log Jab Chalte Hai, Girte Hai Par Phir Sambhal Jaate Hai


pareshanoyon mein aksar apno ke chehre badaljaate hain  waah bahut khoob.

                karzdaar jo hain unka kya kahna,
                chupke se meri gali se nikal jaate hain
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2011, 01:26:27 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 30, 2011, 01:15:25 PM
Khawahish jee Aadaab!

Behad khoob khayaal hai aur kafe gehre ashaar kahe hai
aapne ... humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaaroN ke khayaal behad khoob hai... Usual Smile
Kuch khamiyaaN nazar aayi hai jiss ko ruberu karna zaruri
samjh rahe hai hum isliye bataa raheN hai.. Usual Smile Ummid hai
aap is gustaqui ko dil se nahi lagayeNge aur humari baat ko
samjheNge.. Usual Smile

          

Waqt Ki Aandhiyon Mein Kuch Khwaishe Pigal Jaate Hai
Tamanayen Ashq Bankar Aankhon Se Nikal Jaate Hai

Pahele misre meiN khawahishe " Female gender word hai... jo jaate kahne se munaseeb nahi ban rahi hai.. " KhawahisheN pighal jati hai"

Wohi dusre misre meiN TamannayeN bhi femal gender word hai..
Jiske liye aapko "jaati hai" ka istemaal karna padeNga..          

Maayusi Ka Sehra Pehne Kyon Phirte Rehte Hai Hum Dar-badar!!
Suna Hai Pal-Pal mein Yahan Taqdeerein Badal Jaate Hai

Achcha khayaal hai daad par yahaaN bhi taqdeer female gender word hai so TaqdeereN badal jaati hai"          

Hausle Dam Tod Bhi De To Manzil Ko Paana Na-Mumkin Nahi!!
Kehte Hai Ke Bhigde Hue Halaat Bhi Aksar Sawar Jaate Hai

Achcha khayaal hai janab .. daad ..
Par aapne kafiyaa hi badal diyaa is sher meiN ?          

 Jinse Bhi Milo,Bas Muksurakar Milo Umar Bhar!!!!
Pareshaniyon Mein Aksar Apno ke Chehre Badal Jaate Hai

Waah janab bahut khoob achcha sher hai aur puri tarhaa sahiN Usual Smile          

Kabhi Jahan Bhar Ki Cheezein Paas Ho To Bhi Koi Sukoon Nahi!!
To Kabhi Bacho Ko Muskurate Dekhkar Hi Dil Behal Jaate Hai
 
Bahut khoob daad Usual Smile          

 Palkon Par Ashq Ka Qatra Aakhir Kab Tak Tehrega!!!!
Waqt Ke mutaabik Hum Khud Hi Apni Palkon Ko Masal Jaate Hai

Achcha hai daad Usual Smile          

"Khwaish" Itna Asaan Nahi Hai Yuhi Manzil Ko Paa lena!!
Log Jab Chalte Hai, Girte Hai Par Phir Sambhal Jaate Hai

Bahut khoob daad Usual Smile          
    

Khawahish jee aap bahut unique likhate hai..
behad achche khayaal bayaaN karte hai par kuch aik khamiyaaN
shayari ki rangat ko kam kar deti hai... Usual Smile

Jisse shayari padhne meiN aur use kahne meiN mazaa kam ho
jataa hai... isliye hume jo choti si khamiyaaN nazar aayi
humne apna farz samajh kar aapko dikha dii... Usual Smile aap isse
agar kuch lete haiN to hume bahut khushi hoNgi.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          



parwaaz Ji, Aapne Apna Keemti waqt Diya, Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya..Jaise Ki Aapne Kaha, maine Bhi uss Baat Par Gaur Kiya Ke Kayi Shabd Aise Hote Hai Jo "Female Gender" Sound Karte Hai, Uss Shabd Ke Aage "Jaati Hai,Nikal jaati hai" Hi Likhna Sahi hoga..koshish zaroor hogi Ke Iss Baat Par Khayal Rakha Jaaye..Apna Waqt dene Ke liye Phir Se Bahut Bahut Shukriya..
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2011, 01:35:21 PM »
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Kuch Khwaishe jaane Mujhse Kya Kehti Hai
Aakhein Meri Yuhi Kyon Behti hai

Naa Paas Koi manzil,naa Koi Manzil Ka Suraag!!
 Zindagi Apni Ajeeb Sa Dard Sehti Hai

 Tammanayen To bahut Si Thi Dil Mein!!
Par Tammanayen Aksar Meri Tanha Hi Rehti Hai

"Khwaish" Dil Ki Baaton Ko Sahi Dhang Se Likhna Seekho
  Shayari Bhi Aksar Shayar Se Yehi Kehti Hai!!!!
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Bahut Kamal Khwaish ji Baki Sab to mujh se pehle sab ne keh diya hai Mujhy Bahut Pasand aaya app ka likha hua Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2011, 03:08:20 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on July 30, 2011, 01:18:02 PM

pareshanoyon mein aksar apno ke chehre badaljaate hain  waah bahut khoob.

                karzdaar jo hain unka kya kahna,
                chupke se meri gali se nikal jaate hain

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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2011, 03:18:56 PM »
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Khwais ji.. isse jyada kaya kahu..  speechless..

dil ko chhu gayi sahab..

shukriya aapka ki hume aap jaisa umda shayar mila..
 jo zazbaat ke lafzo ko itni behtar tarike se sazakar pesh karna janta hai..
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Sanjeev ji, aapne apna waqt diya..aapka Tehhhhhh dil se shukriya mere bhai..Yuhi Humesha saath Dete Rahieyga icon_flower
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khwaishji bahut khoob likha hai..
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khwaishji-----------------par ek baat muhje thoda akharti hai
khwaishe aandhiyon mein pighalti nahin udd jaya karti hain.
tamannayen ashq bankar aanhko se pighal jaya karti hain.
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