Magar jiye hue hain !!:Shairi - E

Ricky

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Ankhon hee ankhon mein ro lete hain ..
...........Lage duniya ko k khumaar neend ka hai !!
Sochte sochte kuch lavz kar lete hain ..
...........Lage duniya ko k khumaar mausiki ka hai !!
Yun hee sudh kho jaati hai pal bhar ke liye ..
...........Lage duniya ko k khumaar sukoo.n ka hai !!
Har ek bulave par muskura dete hain ..
...........Lage duniya ko k khumaar zindagi ka hai !!

Log kehte hain k khud mein khoye hue hain ....
Zindagi bhool sapne piroye huye hain ....
Hum khush hain apne haal pe k zindagi akeli .. magar jiye hue hain .!!!


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Shikha12

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #1 on: November 27, 2006, 06:26:15 AM »

Nice one Ricky.... Something Different =D> =D>

My Try... :

Khwabon aur khyaalon ka chaman saara jal gaya,
Zindagi ka nasha mera dhuaa bann kar udd gaya….
Jaane kaise jee rahey hai, kya talaash rahe hai hum,
Aansoo palakon par meri khushion sey ulajh gaya…

Sau Sadiyon ke jaise Lambi lagti hai yeh gum ki raat,
Katra Katra meri zindagii ka issey aa kar judd gaya…
Maut dastak de mujhey tu, ab apni panaah dey dey,
Khatam kar ab silsilaa yeh, dard hadh sey badh gaya…


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Ricky

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #2 on: November 27, 2006, 06:43:01 PM »

.. Nice..
.. Bohot hee jazbaati lavz thae ..

And thank you for your appreciation, I did some typing mistakes last time but now corrected. !


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Shikha12

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2006, 06:56:04 PM »

Thanks a lot for Appreciation....

Ok... One more Try...

Lafzo mey thehraav hai,
Kalam hai yeh ruki ruki…
Har saans mey kuch bojhilapan,
Aur nazar meri jhuki jhuki…

Hansi kahin par kho gayi,
Yeh Zindagi jaise so gayi…
Aankh hai pathharayi sii,
Dil mey bhi kuch berukhi…

Kuch ajeeb si aas hai,
Ek anbujhii si pyaas hai…
Ab bhi dil mey hai chahatein,
Magar ruhh se main thaki thaki…

Kyon ab bhi hai ek intezaar,
Kyon dil chahe kisi ka pyaar…
Phir kadam chaley usi raah…
Jo raah khud ko kho chuki…

Magar jiye hue hai hum,
Khudi ko talashtey hue,
Roz Maut ki raah rokti,
Har kadam par Meri Zindagii….
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Pooja

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2006, 03:32:38 AM »

wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Ricky and Shikha kamal ka likha hai apne,,,, good work.


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Talat

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2006, 12:39:14 PM »

Ricky ..... and Shikha bohot achcha likha hai ..Very nice !!!

I am trying to write down something....

Jo bhar aayi aankhain, hum muskurane lage
Roothi hui zindagi ko gale se lagane lage

Dil to deewana hai, jab machalne laga yunhi
Iske armaan thapak thapak ke sulaane lage

Dunya samjhi hum khush hain apne haal par
Pathrele aangan main phool kagaz ke ugaane lage

Zinda to nahin hain hum, magar jiye hue hain
Saanson ke diye rafta rafta bujhaane lage !!


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Talat

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2006, 05:36:17 PM »

Jiye hue hain is tarah ki dhadkan zindagi ka ehsas dilaati hai
Magar zindagi ye meri, ZINDAGI ko sharmsaar kiye jaati hai


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natural

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2006, 08:54:31 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Thanks a lot for Appreciation....

[you]Ok... One more Try...[/you]

Lafzo mey thehraav hai,
Kalam hai yeh ruki ruki…
Har saans mey kuch bojhilapan,
Aur nazar meri jhuki jhuki…

Hansi kahin par kho gayi,
Yeh Zindagi jaise so gayi…
Aankh hai pathharayi sii,
Dil mey bhi kuch berukhi…

Kuch ajeeb si aas hai,
Ek anbujhii si pyaas hai…
Ab bhi dil mey hai chahatein,
Magar ruhh se main thaki thaki…

Kyon ab bhi hai ek intezaar,
Kyon dil chahe kisi ka pyaar…
Phir kadam chaley usi raah…
Jo raah khud ko kho chuki…

[you]Magar jiye hue hai hum,[/you]
Khudi ko talashtey hue,
Roz Maut ki raah rokti,
Har kadam par Meri Zindagii….
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Wow very nice Shikha.... Usual Smile

Ricky aur Talat tumney bhi kaafi achha likha hai.... Usual Smile


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Talat

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #8 on: December 16, 2006, 09:41:44 AM »

Thank You


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angurana

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #9 on: December 16, 2006, 11:53:11 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Thank You

really good.


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Tosha

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #10 on: December 16, 2006, 01:03:04 PM »

wow ... Ricky Ji cool
Shikha di ur just superb

and Talat ji ... i wonder when do u get so much time !!

well said!!


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Talat

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #11 on: December 16, 2006, 03:43:08 PM »

Thanks Angurana !

Thanks Tosha...Well..Yoindia is an essential part of my life..like we dont have to take out time for eating, driking, sleeping..similar thing goes for Yoindia...I am incomplete with out Yoindia !! Usual Smile


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Tosha

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #12 on: December 16, 2006, 06:13:13 PM »

haai kay baat hai ... mar haava gud kaa ke.!!

for yoindia

zindhi main jeene ke liye wo saas lete hai
hum zindgi main jeene ki liye peete hai
kabhi yuh hi kalam utha ki shabdo se khelte hai
jab haar jaate hai khudse yoindia ka daaman thaam rote hai


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Talat

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #13 on: December 16, 2006, 09:56:01 PM »

Wah wah!!....... for Yoindia !!! Usual Smile


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Tosha

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Magar jiye hue hain !!

«Reply #14 on: December 16, 2006, 10:47:17 PM »

he he hee eehe !!
Cheers!! Yo! India!!


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