mahanga khilouna -Panna 2:Shairi - E

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«Reply #15 on: August 05, 2008, 03:27:10 PM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 11, 2008, 06:40:56 AM

bekarar ji bohut hi sundar rachna hai aapki

gar waqt har maa baap bachon ko dei paayeinge
to wahi kal ek ujla suraj ban chamak paayeinge

thanks bhawna ji.....
do lines me aapne bahoot achchi baat kah di...

Quote from: khwaish on July 31, 2008, 05:59:35 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!
aapne har ek baat itni khoobsurti se kahi ki baar-baar padhne ko jee karta hai..bahut khoob likha hai aapne...
maafi chahunga ke bahut der baad aapki is khoobsurat kavita par nazar padhi..

khwaish ji humare liye to bas itna hi bahoot hai ki aap aye apne padha.....aapke comments humesha kuch behtar likhne ko prerit karte hain.....


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Re: mahanga khilouna

«Reply #16 on: August 27, 2008, 09:04:32 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on July 06, 2008, 01:04:55 PM

Ek mahnga khilouna, kharida tha maine,

Socha tha machlega ise dekhkar wo,
Socha tha rakhega ise sahejkar wo,
Socha tha bahlega, khelega isase,
Socha tha hans dega ise chinkar wo,

Mujhe usne dekha zara muskaraya,
Fir mere pass jaise wo douda sa aaya,
Nanhe se hathon ko mujhko thamaya,
Godi me meri aake khud ko chupaya,

Wo mahnga khilouna, sisak sa raha tha,
Usne “usase” pahle mujhko chuna tha,
Bana mera seena fir uska bichouna,
Wo bhi bhula khiloune, mai bhi bhula khilouna,

Unkahe usane mujhko sabak ye sikhaya,

Gar de sako to use waqt dena, use pyaar dena,
Wo bhar dega khushiyon se badle me tumko,
kabhi uski anboli bhasha samjhna,
Wo shabdon se bheetar taq bhar dega tumko

wo ruthega tumse, mana lega khud ko,
tasalli se azab si wo bhar dega tumko,
khuda khud hi aaya hai aangan tumhaare
apne haathon se anmol kar dega tumko

khiloune ki dookan par fir se khada hun,
kya doon ab use, kash-makash me pada hun

Bohot sharminda hoon Sanjeev ki aapki is anmol peshkash pe meri nazar aaj gayi...maafi chahti hoon sad7

Ek anoothi anmol rachna...bohot bohot bohot khoob.


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Re: mahanga khilouna

«Reply #17 on: August 28, 2008, 03:21:56 AM »

aapko yahan dekh-kar bahho khushi hui aur isase bhi jyada hua aashchary..ki itne dino baad aapne is thread ko dhundh nikala......aur saraha......hum to kayal ho gaye........shukriya talat


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Re: mahanga khilouna

«Reply #18 on: August 28, 2008, 03:23:58 AM »

Hum ko yeh Manhinga Khilona pahle kyun nahin mila bhaya.
Kitni haqeeqat se bhari yeh nazm aapne sunaayi.
Sach kaha bilkul sach kaha.

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