main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,

by aru12 on December 26, 2012, 02:00:42 PM
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toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,

phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,

raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,

raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,

na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon

vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,

mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,

aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,

aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,

milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,

manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,

jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,

apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,

daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.

umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2012, 02:11:53 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut sundar rachnaa.. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aru ji... aapka yoindia ke mehfil me bahut bahut swaagat hai.. yunhi aate rahiye aur apni taazgi bhari rachnaaon se is mehfil ko mehkaate rahiye...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2012, 02:12:15 PM »
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waah waah waah .
Main jorh kar chand lafz ek shayari bana leta hun
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2012, 03:04:23 PM »
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Bohat Khub!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2012, 03:18:01 PM »
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aru ji aapka swagat hai shayri ki duniya me, aur kya shaandaar aagaaaz kiya hai aapne wah maza aa gaya saahab... Khaas taur pe ye aashaar, dil ke bahut qareeb se guzraa, yuNhi yahaan bhi apni mehfil sajaate rahiye saahab...


phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2012, 03:33:31 PM »
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Quote from: aru12 on December 26, 2012, 02:00:42 PM
toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,

phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,

raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,

raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,

na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon

vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,

mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,

aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,

aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,

milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,

manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,

jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,

apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,

daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.

umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,


good,sir
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2012, 04:31:24 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2012, 06:04:04 PM »
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Bahut accha likhte hai aap..
Keep it up
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2012, 06:34:11 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob aru ji....har alfaaz behtrin....aapne vyaktitav ki poori jhalak bahut hi umda tarike se pesh ki hai aapne....umda pehkash....likhte rahiye
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 05:21:37 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut khoob....
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2012, 05:32:35 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2012, 06:21:51 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai, behtarin peshkash aap ki...
Wah
Sorry mere pass abhi rau nahi hai dene ke liye, lekin jald jaise aaye ga aap ko zaroor pesh karunga....
Kya baat hai...wallah....wah
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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2012, 12:47:09 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 26, 2012, 02:11:53 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut sundar rachnaa.. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aru ji... aapka yoindia ke mehfil me bahut bahut swaagat hai.. yunhi aate rahiye aur apni taazgi bhari rachnaaon se is mehfil ko mehkaate rahiye...!!!
Thanx hirday jee..aapki ye yoindia pe meri rachna pe pehli reply hai, main ise hamesha yaad rakhunga..
Naya hun isliye site ko samajh raha hun, isliye reply late ho gaya...anyways thanx a lot...
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«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2012, 07:45:39 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on December 26, 2012, 02:12:15 PM
waah waah waah .
Main jorh kar chand lafz ek shayari bana leta hun
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Thanx sahil jee...bahut bahut aabhaar aapka g.
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«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2012, 03:32:55 AM »
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Jaisa ki meinenpehle kahantha, abh mere paas rau tha wo aap ki khidmat mein pesh hai, kabool karein....
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