Main Koi Waqt To Nahi "Khwaish"

by khwaish on January 11, 2011, 10:10:18 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 13, 2011, 08:34:10 AM »
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hmmm thx.... khwasih ji.......jo apne discribe kiya me shayad kafi aas paas hi tha but ya not 100%........apne jo bataya wo accha laga....thx again for clearing it......and once more congrats for this wonderful poetry.....
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«Reply #16 on: January 15, 2011, 10:55:44 AM »
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Ki gal hai ji tusi chha gye bahut wadiya likheya hai tuadi es nazm nu mein gungunande hoye pad'di gyi...bahut wadiya ji...

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Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Ji..
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«Reply #17 on: January 16, 2011, 02:09:20 PM »
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bht khoob khwaish ji....
specially 2nd last....
superb.....

Aapka teh Dil Se Shukriya Manzil-e-ishq Ji.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: January 16, 2011, 02:19:04 PM »
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Wah Khwaish Bhai.. Pahale Sher ne Hi Aisa Baandha Ki Aakhiri Lafz tak se nigaah Nahi hati.. Bahut Gehare Jazzbaat Likhe hain aapne.. Bahut Hi umda Peshkash hai.... Applause Applause

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«Reply #19 on: January 29, 2011, 12:41:12 PM »
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   Nice song Khwaish ji, padh kar maza aaya. Thumbs UP

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«Reply #20 on: February 02, 2011, 09:23:47 AM »
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Main Tere Rang Mein,
Kuch Yuh Dhal Jaaunga!!!
Pathar Hi Sahi Par,
Chukar Dekh Nikhar Jaaunga

Main To Ashq Ka Katra Hoon,
Palkon par kab Tak Thaamkar Rakhoge Mujhe!!
Inn Palkon  Ko Band Karoge
To Main Zameen Par Bikhar Jaaunga

Rasm-e-Ulfat Ko  Naa Nibha Sako
To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
main Koi Waqt To Nahi!!
Jo Pal-Pal Mein Badal Jaaunga

Chalte-chalte Agar Hum Yuhi Bichad Jaaye,
to Itna Mujhpar Yakeen Rakhna!!!
Humesha Tere Aas-Paas Hi Hoon,
Main Tujhse Door Kidhar Jaaunga

Waqt Ka Taakaza kaho Yaa Kaho
Isse Koi Khel Haathon Ke lakeeron Ka
Aaj Jaam Haath mein Hai!!!!
Bas pee lene Do, Main kal Sudhar Jaaunga

"Khwaish" Chot Agar Raaston Ke
Patharo Ne Di Hai To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
Main Phir Se Chalna Seekhunga
Aur Yakeenan Main Sambhal Jaaunga

Main Tere Rang Mein
Kuch Yuh Dhal Jaaunga
Pathar Hi Sahi Par,
Chuu Kar Dekh Nikhar Jaaunga

           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



BAHUT HI KHOOB KHAWAISH JI BEHTREEN ANDAZ-E-BAYAN HAI
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«Reply #21 on: February 02, 2011, 09:32:53 AM »
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bht khoob khwaish ji....
specially 2nd last....
superb.....

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«Reply #22 on: May 14, 2011, 12:59:01 PM »
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   Nice song Khwaish ji, padh kar maza aaya. Thumbs UP

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«Reply #23 on: September 13, 2011, 12:41:44 PM »
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khwaish bro.....aapki lekhni nit nayi unchaiyon ko choo rahi hai...jaisa KDK ji ne likha aapki behtreen rachnaon me se ek....dhero daad

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«Reply #24 on: December 09, 2011, 02:20:57 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

behad khoob ahsaas o khayaal kahe hai janab..
Daad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         




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«Reply #25 on: December 09, 2011, 03:35:17 PM »
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Khoobsurat peshkash hai,Khwaish ji.mubarak ho.Hasan
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«Reply #26 on: September 12, 2012, 08:04:20 AM »
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Main Tere Rang Mein,
Kuch Yuh Dhal Jaaunga!!!
Pathar Hi Sahi Par,
Chukar Dekh Nikhar Jaaunga                                Applause Applause Applause

Main To Ashq Ka Katra Hoon,
Palkon par kab Tak Thaamkar Rakhoge Mujhe!!
Inn Palkon  Ko Band Karoge
To Main Zameen Par Bikhar Jaaunga

Rasm-e-Ulfat Ko  Naa Nibha Sako
To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
main Koi Waqt To Nahi!!
Jo Pal-Pal Mein Badal Jaaunga        Wah!!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP

Chalte-chalte Agar Hum Yuhi Bichad Jaaye,
to Itna Mujhpar Yakeen Rakhna!!!
Humesha Tere Aas-Paas Hi Hoon,
Main Tujhse Door Kidhar Jaaunga      Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Waqt Ka Taakaza kaho Yaa Kaho
Isse Koi Khel Haathon Ke lakeeron Ka
Aaj Jaam Haath mein Hai!!!!
Bas pee lene Do, Main kal Sudhar Jaaunga

"Khwaish" Chot Agar Raaston Ke
Patharo Ne Di Hai To Koi Baat Nahi!!!
Main Phir Se Chalna Seekhunga
Aur Yakeenan Main Sambhal Jaaunga

Main Tere Rang Mein
Kuch Yuh Dhal Jaaunga
Pathar Hi Sahi Par,
Chuu Kar Dekh Nikhar Jaaun

           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



Bohat Khub!  Applause Applause Applause
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