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KOYAL46
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Maut Ka Bulaava...
Ye kaisi ghadi aa gayee hai
Jism se ruh ki veedayee hai
Ab naa yahaan roshni hai
Naa koi diya. Naa baati hai
Bataao Ye kis anjaan ka saaya hai
Kaun yahaan bin bulaaye aaya hai
Kya kaha ye kaun… Yam Raaj hai
Mujh ko lene swarg se aaye hain
Beethaao inhe,Koi kuchh khilao inhe
Bas Kuchh deir ke liye rouk lo inhe
Intezaar hai mujhe mere piya ka
Bas Wo aajaayen tou mein chalu
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2010, 01:42:21 PM » |
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dar lag raha tumhari poem pdhke koyal......
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2010, 05:51:52 PM » |
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Kya kahu Geet-di....kuchh aysa hi daur chal raha hai......
Aaj ek aur khabar ne dil mai halchal machadi.....
mere dad k cousin mere chchere uncle ki wife meri aunti ki death ho gayee....
Haan wo kaffi arse se beemaar thee.....aAur roj maut ko bulaati thee....dard se karhaati thee....
Aur aaj aa hi gaya....Yamraj......tab likhne ka dil ho aaya.....
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2010, 11:11:55 PM » |
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Maut Ka Bulaava...
Ye kaisi ghadi aa gayee hai
Jism se ruh ki veedayee hai
Ab naa yahaan roshni hai
Naa koi diya. Naa baati hai
Bataao Ye kis anjaan ka saaya hai
Kaun yahaan bin bulaaye aaya hai
Kya kaha ye kaun… Yam Raaj hai
Mujh ko lene swarg se aaye hain
Beethaao inhe,Koi kuchh khilao inhe
Bas Kuchh deir ke liye rouk lo inhe
Intezaar hai mujhe mere piya ka
Bas Wo aajaayen tou mein chalu
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2010, 11:53:21 PM » |
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Bhagwaan tumhari Aunty ki aatma ko shanti de.......achcha hai jab depress hua karo to shayri ka sahara le liya karo ulta seedha jo man me aaye likho bina parwah kiye ke achcha likha hai ya bura isse man halka ho jata hai.
Lekin ek baat kehna chahuga agar shero shayri se sach me pyaar aur lagaav hai to ise thoda sa aur seriously lena hoga taki aur khoobsurti se apne jazbaat bayaan kar sako.
Take care.
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2010, 12:56:48 AM » |
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Maut Ka Bulaava...
Ye kaisi ghadi aa gayee hai
Jism se ruh ki veedayee hai
Ab naa yahaan roshni hai
Naa koi diya. Naa baati hai
Bataao Ye kis anjaan ka saaya hai
Kaun yahaan bin bulaaye aaya hai
Kya kaha ye kaun… Yam Raaj hai
Mujh ko lene swarg se aaye hain
Beethaao inhe,Koi kuchh khilao inhe
Bas Kuchh deir ke liye rouk lo inhe
Intezaar hai mujhe mere piya ka
Bas Wo aajaayen tou mein chalu
Good one Koyal Ji Dil ki pee.da ko is lekhni ke saath bida kiya aap ne kuchh hud tak |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2010, 05:50:59 AM » |
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Aapki chuppi he sab kuchh keh gayee......  Thanks Kapil
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2010, 06:00:06 AM » |
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I am sorry... main kuch nahi keh paaya....  Aapki chuppi he sab kuchh keh gayee...... Thanks Kapil |
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2010, 06:32:45 AM » |
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Sajid-bhai aapki santvanaa k liye khoob khoob aabhaar....  Aapka kehna ek dam sahi hai ji...likhne se dard kam hota hai.... Aur jahaan tak shabdo k shringaar ki baat hai....ye itni jaldi mai hote hain ki turant baahar aa jaate hain...makeup k bina.... Planning se likho tou hi dulhan ki tarah saja sakte ho...aaj-kal yo par aapko fashion tou nazar aa hi rahi hai.... I will definitely try to improve.... Bhagwaan tumhari Aunty ki aatma ko shanti de.......achcha hai jab depress hua karo to shayri ka sahara le liya karo ulta seedha jo man me aaye likho bina parwah kiye ke achcha likha hai ya bura isse man halka ho jata hai.
Lekin ek baat kehna chahuga agar shero shayri se sach me pyaar aur lagaav hai to ise thoda sa aur seriously lena hoga taki aur khoobsurti se apne jazbaat bayaan kar sako.
Take care.
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2010, 06:34:25 AM » |
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Aapka dil se dhanaywaad...Rajeshji... Good one Koyal Ji
Dil ki pee.da ko is lekhni ke saath bida kiya aap ne kuchh hud tak
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2010, 06:43:04 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2010, 07:11:16 AM » |
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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2010, 07:15:35 AM » |
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bilkul... aapne hamaari dil ki baat keh di ....!!! |
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2010, 11:29:34 AM » |
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Kya kahu Geet-di....kuchh aysa hi daur chal raha hai......
Aaj ek aur khabar ne dil mai halchal machadi.....
mere dad k cousin mere chchere uncle ki wife meri aunti ki death ho gayee....
Haan wo kaffi arse se beemaar thee.....aAur roj maut ko bulaati thee....dard se karhaati thee....
Aur aaj aa hi gaya....Yamraj......tab likhne ka dil ho aaya.....
I m sorry sweetu i didnt knw tht..bhagwan tumhari aunty ko jannat bakshe...main samjh sakti hu aaj kal har jagah negitivity itni hai ki aam insaan darr hi jata hai...but still hamein healthy spirit se jina chahiye..take care n god bless u... |
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