Meer ki yaad mein

by Ram Saraswat on August 31, 2012, 02:04:14 PM
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Saadhanaa  nishaanaa  ho tau  aankh ho nishaaney per,
                       thaam  tarqush  kheench  daagh  dejey teer ko.
us key    liye    na   koi    apnaa    parayaa    ab,
                       karani   duaa  hey  sabakey  liye  faqeer  ko.  
janey   nahi  beemaari - e- dil ki  jo  chaaraghari,
                       wo   kyaa  samjhegaa  kishi  dil basi peer ko.
qaid    hey   qafas   mein   sukhan - o -  sukhanwar,
                       chaahiye  koi   jo  taud  daaley  zanzeer  ko.
Hoti   hey   paraai   kahaney   se   muh  aai   baat,
                      khamoshi  hi  deti   hey   waqaar  dil geer ko.
Gor  tau kaheen bhi ho kisi bhi dil jaley ki chaahey,
                      dhuaan  tau  uthegaa  roz  dard-e-  tafseer ko.
Kahaney  ko  kuch   tau  ho  paas gar  poochhey  koi,
                      chaley ho jahaan  mein  chhod kaisi tasveer ko.
Huye  hein  hazaaron  Ram  yoon  tau  yaan  sukhanwar,
                      padhnaa  sukhan  ho  tau  padh  leejey meer ko.

 
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gayi umr dar band e fiqr e ghazal
so is fan ko aisa barhha kar chale
-meer

Waah !! Lajawaab !! Meer ko apki khoobsurat shradhhanjali dil ko chhoo gayi Ram ji. Apko dheron daad aur duaein.
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Saadhanaa  nishaanaa  ho tau  aankh ho nishaaney per,
                       thaam  tarqush  kheench  daagh  dejey teer ko.
us key    liye    na   koi    apnaa    parayaa    ab,
                       karani   duaa  hey  sabakey  liye  faqeer  ko. 
janey   nahi  beemaari - e- dil ki  jo  chaaraghari,
                       wo   kyaa  samjhegaa  kishi  dil basi peer ko.
qaid    hey   qafas   mein   sukhan - o -  sukhanwar,
                       chaahiye  koi   jo  taud  daaley  zanzeer  ko.
Hoti   hey   paraai   kahaney   se   muh  aai   baat,
                      khamoshi  hi  deti   hey   waqaar  dil geer ko.
Gor  tau kaheen bhi ho kisi bhi dil jaley ki chaahey,
                      dhuaan  tau  uthegaa  roz  dard-e-  tafseer ko.
Kahaney  ko  kuch   tau  ho  paas gar  poochhey  koi,
                      chaley ho jahaan  mein  chhod kaisi tasveer ko.
Huye  hein  hazaaron  Ram  yoon  tau  yaan  sukhanwar,
                      padhnaa  sukhan  ho  tau  padh  leejey meer ko.

 

kyaa hi khooob sahab .......................
kyaa hi khoob aapse mil kar acha laga
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2012, 03:38:57 PM »
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Saadhanaa  nishaanaa  ho tau  aankh ho nishaaney per,
                       thaam  tarqush  kheench  daagh  dejey teer ko.
us key    liye    na   koi    apnaa    parayaa    ab,
                       karani   duaa  hey  sabakey  liye  faqeer  ko. 
janey   nahi  beemaari - e- dil ki  jo  chaaraghari,
                       wo   kyaa  samjhegaa  kishi  dil basi peer ko.
qaid    hey   qafas   mein   sukhan - o -  sukhanwar,
                       chaahiye  koi   jo  taud  daaley  zanzeer  ko.
Hoti   hey   paraai   kahaney   se   muh  aai   baat,
                      khamoshi  hi  deti   hey   waqaar  dil geer ko.
Gor  tau kaheen bhi ho kisi bhi dil jaley ki chaahey,
                      dhuaan  tau  uthegaa  roz  dard-e-  tafseer ko.
Kahaney  ko  kuch   tau  ho  paas gar  poochhey  koi,
                      chaley ho jahaan  mein  chhod kaisi tasveer ko.
Huye  hein  hazaaron  Ram  yoon  tau  yaan  sukhanwar,
                      padhnaa  sukhan  ho  tau  padh  leejey meer ko.

 


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so is fan ko aisa barhha kar chale
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