****mein kya karti****

by kaushikbhawna008 on January 07, 2009, 06:38:10 AM
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Sunne wala jab koi na tha
To lab na silti to kya karti

Saamne ek dard ka dariya tha
To apne aansu na chupati to kya karti

Raat akeli taiyaar thi khadi
To gale tanhaai na lagati to kya karti

Jab raah mei  biche sirf kaante the
To paanv chalni na karti to kya karti

Khamoshi jab lagi thi chubhne
To dil mei pyaar dafn na karti to kya karti

Kaun apna bacha tha ab yahaan
To tanha na chalti to kya karti

Har rehgujar ne bas dhoke the diye
To manzil na badalti to mein kya karti

Mujhe ilzaam dene waale tu hi bata
Tujh bin jeeti na to mein kya karti


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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2009, 07:40:36 AM »
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 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob bhawna...
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2009, 07:57:43 AM »
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thnk u honey ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2009, 10:14:25 AM »
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Marhaba bhavna bohat khoobsurat kalam likha hain tumne ek ek lafz dard me dooba hua  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2009, 10:18:21 AM »
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Bhawna,

Fantastic work ! Applause Applause Applause

Really enjoyed reading it Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2009, 09:52:26 PM »
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bahoot khoob bhawna
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2009, 05:06:56 AM »
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sajid ji
rajbir ji
pooja ji aap sabka bohut bohut shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2009, 05:51:33 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhawna.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2009, 05:58:17 AM »
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thnk u khwaish ji
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