MERA BACHPAN

by reyan KHAN on April 30, 2010, 06:17:58 AM
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Chalte chalte duniya k safar main!
Yaad aaya ek din ek sapna!!
Yun hi dil bechain hua or!
Lagta tha hai koi apna!!
Dhundla dhundla yaad aata tha!
Kya tha wo mera sapna!!

Chala gaya duniya k safar main!
Yaad na aaya apna sapna!!
Dil kehta tha kuch to hai wo!
Jo yaad na aaya tujhko sapna!!
Dhundla dhundla yaad aata tha!
Kya tha wo mera sapna!!

Phir socha kyon chala gaya!
Aaya tha jo mera sapna!!
Jo chuta tha dil ko kuch kuch!
Bhulun kese main wo sapna!!
Dhundla dhundla yaad aata tha!
Kya tha wo mera sapna!!

Jhijak utha is bechaini se!
Kaisa tha wo mera sapna!!
Jatan kiya phir yaad karne ka!
Bhula tha main jo sapna!!
Dhundla dhundla yaad aata tha!
Kya tha wo mera sapna!!

Main chonk gaya,dil dhadak utha!
Yaad aaya apna sapna!!
Aankhon main phir paani aaya!
Haath se haath mala apna!!
Dhundla dhundla yaad jo aata tha!
Wo tha gujra hua BACHPAN apna!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2010, 06:45:29 AM »
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bahoth qoob reyan sahab acha nagma hai aur manzar kashi bhi .. school ki life aur suhane din maazi ke betahasha yaad aagye ankh bus namm ho gayi .. kya din the wo shayad laut aate ,betahsha jagjeet sahab ka eak band yaad gaya ..

kabhi reth ke unche tilon pe jana ,
gharonde banana ,bana ke mitana ,
wo masum chahath ki tasveer apni,
wo qabon qayalon ki jagir apni,
na duniya ka gham tha na rishton ke bandhan,
badi khubsurath thi wo zindagani,,


allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..

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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2010, 06:53:59 AM »
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Wah Reyan ji bahut khoob.ek alag andaaz mein likha aapne.Qadeer ji aapne bhi kamaal ke likha.great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2010, 08:16:14 AM »
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bachpan ki ek baat khas thi...usme sirf Khilone tuta karte the..
aur unhi tute khilone ke liye..hum sabse jhagda karte the..

aaj jab ummedein tut ti hai, bharosa tut ta hai,
aapna daga deta hai koi bandhan jab chhut ta hai..
bachpan yaad aata hai ki kaise dar-roz naye dost bana karte the..
Bachpan ki ek baat khas thi..usme sift khilone tuta karte the..

aaj irade badlte hai har agle pal, har pal mansube badalte hai,
sapne chur chur hote hai..jab sacchai ki aag mein jalte hai..
bachpan yaad aata hai ki kaise dar roz naye sapne buna karte the..
bachpan ki ek baat khas thi..usme sirf Khilone tuta karte the..
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2010, 10:54:45 AM »
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Wah wah Reyan ji bahot achhi poem likhi hai. Bachpan ki yaad sabhi ko aati hai lekin guzra hua zamaana aata nahi dobara.
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2010, 12:33:05 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Reyan ji... bahut hi khoobsurat kavita likhi hai apne... bahut achcha laga aapki is kavita ko padhke... bahut achcha likhte hain aap. yunhi likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2010, 06:08:53 PM »
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Nice poem.....i really miss my BACHPAN.......

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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2010, 09:32:32 PM »
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Bahut khoob Rehan Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2011, 07:12:52 AM »
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bachpan ki zindagi,masum or bohat khubsurat,
shayad wo pal phir se laut aate kash hum bade hi na huwe hote,
na hum bade hote na ghamo mein mubtela hote,
bachpan mein ka kisi ke ghum ki parwa ne khud k ghum ki,
pata hi nahi tha k ghum kis chidiya ka naam tha bus ghum tab hota jab khilone tuta karte the,aaj khilone to nahi laikin dil zaroor tuta karte hai or ghum ka saya to ru ba ru hamara intezar karta hai,pata nahi wo bachpan kyu chala gaya,
agar zindagi ki sari daulat de kar bhi bachpan wapas miljaye
to manzoor hai................!
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2011, 06:00:59 AM »
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Vah sir ji kya likha h apna bahut accha h.sir i am a collage student.sir aaj jab dekta h charo taraf to mahol kuch ajaib sa he h.sach m sir bachpan bahut pyara hota h.thanks sir itana accha likhana k liya.sach m ek pal k liya sochana par majbur karti h aapki ye line.great sir...!!
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2012, 03:12:11 AM »
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 :sunny:Wo Ret ke Mahal,
Wo Kabaddi ka Shor,
Wo kati Patang aur
Haath me Dor,
Wo Ludo me Saapon ka,
Hardum Ghurna apni Oar,
Wo Naani ki Kahani aur ,
Hamara kahna ek aur
Wo Pariksha me Teacher ka dekhna
Aur uff.. wo Sannaton ka Shor

Zindagi O Zindagi
Kyon wo Sub kuchh bhula diya

Poem by:K.Vikas (dearvikas14@gmail.com)
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2012, 03:14:08 AM »
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Quote from: K.Vikas on March 17, 2012, 03:12:11 AM
Wo Ret ke Mahal,
Wo Kabaddi ka Shor,
Wo kati Patang aur
Haath me Dor,
Wo Ludo me Saapon ka,
Hardum Ghurna apni Oar,
Wo Naani ki Kahani aur ,
Hamara kahna ek aur
Wo Pariksha me Teacher ka dekhna
Aur uff.. wo Sannaton ka Shor

Zindagi O Zindagi
Kyon wo Sub kuchh bhula diya

Poem by:K.Vikas (dearvikas14@gmail.com)
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«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2012, 07:07:58 AM »
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bachan vo ret h jo hathon se kab fisal jatee h pata hi nahi lagta,
ehsaas tab hota h jab haath khali aur aankhen bhari hoti h.........
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2012, 04:22:40 AM »
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bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne khan sb  Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 21, 2012, 12:08:18 PM »
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Quote from: K.Vikas on March 17, 2012, 03:12:11 AM
:sunny:Wo Ret ke Mahal,
Wo Kabaddi ka Shor,
Wo kati Patang aur
Haath me Dor,
Wo Ludo me Saapon ka,
Hardum Ghurna apni Oar,
Wo Naani ki Kahani aur ,
Hamara kahna ek aur
Wo Pariksha me Teacher ka dekhna
Aur uff.. wo Sannaton ka Shor

Zindagi O Zindagi
Kyon wo Sub kuchh bhula diya

Poem by:K.Vikas (dearvikas14@gmail.com)
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