Mera khuda tera khuda ek kahan

by Khurmi on December 09, 2011, 10:44:02 AM
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Saron ka khuda ek hai ye baat bhala
Jo log kahain shayad vo ye bhol gaye
Hurr ek apne such ko hi maane yahan
Aur vakt laaye saath apne such bhi naye

*Moosa aur Essa ka fark bhi tum bhule
Veda ke such hon ya phir kuran ke such
ghaur se agar inko dekha jaye tau
Phir nahi lagte ye ik bhagvan ke such

Sub se bada such hai ke kuch such nahi
Ye theek hi kaha tha kissi ne yahan
Itna zyada fasla hai hum main tau phir
Mera khuda tera khuda ek kahan


*(old testemant: eye for an eye)
(new testemant : turn the other cheek)
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«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2011, 11:20:19 AM »
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Khurmi Jee Aadaab!

YeH aapki dusri kalaam hai jise humne padha..
Aur shayad yeH bhi kalaam aapki usi kalaam ke
khayaaloN par base haiN..

Janab aapse guzarish kareNge ke yeH aik social
site hai... yahaaN kisi bhi mazhab aur dharmik
baatoN ke subject ko negetive thought's ke saath
post na kiya kijiye.. Usual Smile

Ummid hai aap humari baat samjh gaye hoNge..
Aate rahiye.. Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad ..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2011, 12:44:53 PM »
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Janaab parwaaz saab adaab
Hairan hon ke ap ne nazm ko negative sense main liya. Agar aap kissi baat se itifaak nahi karte ya koi cheez apko 'hazam' na ho tau vo negativity nahi kehlati. Aur social sites per kafi cheezain discuss hoti hain, after all we are social animals. Brahe karam baat sunne ka hausla rakhiye. Shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2011, 11:23:14 AM »
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Saron ka khuda ek hai ye baat bhala
Jo log kahain shayad vo ye bhol gaye
Hurr ek apne such ko hi maane yahan
Aur vakt laaye saath apne such bhi naye

*Moosa aur Essa ka fark bhi tum bhule
Veda ke such hon ya phir kuran ke such
ghaur se agar inko dekha jaye tau
Phir nahi lagte ye ik bhagvan ke such

Sub se bada such hai ke kuch such nahi
Ye theek hi kaha tha kissi ne yahan
Itna zyada fasla hai hum main tau phir
Mera khuda tera khuda ek kahan


*(old testemant: eye for an eye)
(new testemant : turn the other cheek)


Khurmi Ji..

Aap Beshak Kuch Bhi Likh Sakte hai, yeh Apni-Apni Sensiblities Ki Baat hai Par yahan iss Site Par Aap Religious issues par naa Likhiye To Behtar hai,Yeh Fellow Member Ke Naate Nahi Balki Ek Iss Site Ke Monitor Hone Ke naate keh raha Hoon..Kahin Aur Shayad Yeh Sab Social issue ke naam Se Log likhte Honge Par Duniya mein Aise Bahut Se Social Issues Hai Jispar Likha Jaa Sakta Hai Iss Vishey Ko Chodkar..Umeed Karta Hoon Aap Meri Aur parwaaz Ji ki Darkhwaast Ko Samjhe Aur Amal Kare...Aapka Shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2011, 12:59:28 PM »
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Khurmi saheb , Nazm mein aap ke pahlu ka isteqbaal karte huay eik doosra pahlu pesh kar raha hoon  shaayad zyada rational ho :

   Saare  ausaaf se , seerat  se ,Khuda  eik  hi hai
   Samjho  ahkaam o naseehat se,Khuda  eik  hi hai
   Dekhne  ke   usay   andaaz   juda   hoN  chaahay
   Dekho  gar  chashm e baseerat se, khuda eik hi hai

                                                -Hasan

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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2011, 01:04:39 PM »
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Khurmi saheb , Nazm mein aap ke pahlu ka isteqbaal karte huay eik doosra pahlu pesh kar raha hoon  shaayad zyada rational ho :

   Saare  ausaaf se , seerat  se ,Khuda  eik  hi hai
   Samjho  ahkaam se, naseehat se,Khuda  eik  hi hai
   Dekhne  ke   usay   andaaz   juda   hoN  chaahay
   Dekho  gar  chashm e baseerat se, khuda eik hi hai

                                                -Hasan



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Bahut bahut Khoob Hasan Saheb!!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2011, 01:25:56 PM »
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Hasan Saab adab,
Pehle tau apka mere kyalat ke istaqbal karne ka shukria. Apke point of view ki main kaddar karta hoon, kiss zamana main ittifak bhi karta tha per ab nahi. Adab. Khurmi
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