------ /// Mere khushiyon ki qurbaani maange /// ------

by klaskar on September 05, 2010, 08:49:17 AM
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mere bachche mere wafaa ki nishaani maange,
kaagaz pe apne naam meri har kahaani maange,

paseene se joda har wo cheez unke liye hi hai,
par wo apne naam meri har cheez puraani maange,

khud ko jalaake jinke sapne roshan kiye hain,
jigar ke tukde mere khushiyon ki qurbaani maange,

ab nahi jhel sakta is umar me itna dard main,
zindagi doobne ke liye dariya ka paani maange,

jinko apna sahaara samjha wo apne na rahe,
mera khoon firse apne liye wo rawaani maange,

ab nahi chal sakta main bina kisi sahaare ke,
ye haalat mere liye waapas meri jawaani maange...


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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2010, 09:21:58 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 05, 2010, 08:49:17 AM

mere bachche mere wafaa ki nishaani maange,
kaagaz pe apne naam meri har kahaani maange,

paseene se joda har wo cheez unke liye hi hai,
par wo apne naam meri har cheez puraani maange,

khud ko jalaake jinke sapne roshan kiye hain,
jigar ke tukde mere khushiyon ki qurbaani maange,

ab nahi jhel sakta is umar me itna dard main,
zindagi doobne ke liye dariya ka paani maange,

jinko apna sahaara samjha wo apne na rahe,
mera khoon firse apne liye wo rawaani maange,

ab nahi chal sakta main bina kisi sahaare ke,
ye haalat mere liye waapas meri jawaani maange...


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Aur Aakhri sher padhkar Aankhein Nam Si Ho gayi..
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2010, 06:38:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji kavita pasand karne ke liye... maafi chahunga... mera aisa koi maksad nahi tha ki aapka dil dukhaun ... maaf kijiyega ki meri wajah se aapki aankhen nam ho gayi...!!!

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Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob kapilji..har Lafz Ek kadwe Sach ka aaena.

Aur Aakhri sher padhkar Aankhein Nam Si Ho gayi..
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2010, 07:51:28 PM »
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Klaskar Jee Aadaab!

kia baat hai sahab ...... Aap ne to kamaal hi kar dikhaya... Behad achchi kalaam kahi hai..... Sabhi sher achch rahe.... Aur bayaaNi bhi ekdum fit......

Is khub koshish per dil se daad janab.....

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda hafez...... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2010, 07:56:36 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2010, 08:53:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji... mujhe sikhna hai... aur mujhe pata nahi kyun aapme ek guru dikhayi diya... aapke likhe poems ab main bahut dhyaan se padhta hoon... kuch kuch nichod lene ki koshish karta hoon unme se... main aapke kuch baaton se bahut jyaada impressed hoon...!!!

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Klaskar Jee Aadaab!

kia baat hai sahab ...... Aap ne to kamaal hi kar dikhaya... Behad achchi kalaam kahi hai..... Sabhi sher achch rahe.... Aur bayaaNi bhi ekdum fit......

Is khub koshish per dil se daad janab.....

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda hafez...... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2010, 08:53:52 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2010, 09:42:26 PM »
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kudh ko jala ke jine sapne roshan kiye....bahot khob janaab ..ek achhi paishkash pe daad...
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2010, 09:44:48 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Nazar ji...!!!

Quote from: nazar ghouri on September 05, 2010, 09:42:26 PM
kudh ko jala ke jine sapne roshan kiye....bahot khob janaab ..ek achhi paishkash pe daad...
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2010, 01:30:34 PM »
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   Waah waah Kapil ji bahut sachha or achha likha hai aapne,bahut khoob. hello2
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2010, 01:33:24 PM »
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main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon Tamanna ji.... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

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   Waah waah Kapil ji bahut sachha or achha likha hai aapne,bahut khoob. hello2
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«Reply #11 on: September 08, 2010, 01:15:11 AM »
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YUN TO KALAM KE CHALE KO JAMANA PAGALPAN SAMJHTA HAI MAGAR IS DUNIYA ME KAUN PAGAL NAHI ?
SHAYAD YE APNE HI LIKHA HAI AUR YAHAN MUJHE LIKHNE SE ROK NAHI PAAYE

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bahut bahut shukriya Pritam ji... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon....!!!

Quote from: pritam tripathi on September 08, 2010, 01:15:11 AM
YUN TO KALAM KE CHALE KO JAMANA PAGALPAN SAMJHTA HAI MAGAR IS DUNIYA ME KAUN PAGAL NAHI ?
SHAYAD YE APNE HI LIKHA HAI AUR YAHAN MUJHE LIKHNE SE ROK NAHI PAAYE

BAHUT HI UMDA SHAYRE LIKHE HAIN AAPNE

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«Reply #13 on: September 13, 2010, 02:59:02 PM »
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Kapil sahab bhut khoob........likhte rahiye


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bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji...!!!

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Kapil sahab bhut khoob........likhte rahiye


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