Meri Bazam mai Teri Nazam

by Pooja on August 19, 2009, 09:10:56 PM
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Missing one of my Old Yo-Friend!! I use to call him Nanmunh!! Bhoot kuch humne sath sath likha...ab wo Yoindia per nahi hai.. magar uske sath na hone ki aor sath na likhne ki kami bahoot khalati hai...

Meri bazam main, teri nazam ajj bhi chali atti hai
lakh samjhaya dil, Nanmunh teri yaad chali he atti hai

chehakti hai chirriya ajj bhi, baago main gul bhi khilte hai
dil toot kar rota hai mera, jab bahaar main Patjhar chali atti hai

Bajati hai payal, gungunata hai jhumka gaalo per
lehra uthte hai ansoo ankhon main, jab koke ki baat chali atti

Golguppo ke baatein, mehandi ke wadein
Mandir-Gurudaware ki wo yaad chali atti hai
nanmunh teri yaad chali aati hai....

beete panno per, likhi na jaane kitni yaadein maine
her baar ek nai teri  yaad chali atti hai..

Meri bazam main, teri nazam ajj bhi chali atti hai
lakh samjhaya dil, Nanmunh teri yaad chali he atti hai!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2009, 09:40:19 PM »
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mazaa aa gaaye padkar
heartfelt
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«Reply #2 on: August 20, 2009, 02:52:49 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2009, 04:23:55 AM »
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Bahut dard hai aapki kavita mein Pooja ji,dil ko chu gayee,wonderful creation.
bahut bahut acha likhti hai aap. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2009, 01:07:12 PM »
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Awesome , Lovely , superb , excellent.. Sach mea bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai .. ak Dost ki yaad mea ak bahoot hi behtareen Peshkash... bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja Di.. Sach mea bahoot gehre ehsaas ko samete hue hai aapki yea rachna.. Bahoot Khoob!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Sorry di.. sayad jaldi jaldi mea gadbad ho gaya.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2009, 03:55:40 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Apane Jis Dost Ki Yaad mein Yeh likha,kaash Woh dost Yehj padhe To Phir Yoindia Se Kabhi Vaapas Naa Jaaye.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2009, 03:59:32 PM »
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mazaa aa gaaye padkar
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Thanks Thegrimreaper ji!!!
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Thanks Roja!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 20, 2009, 04:23:55 AM
Bahut dard hai aapki kavita mein Pooja ji,dil ko chu gayee,wonderful creation.
bahut bahut acha likhti hai aap. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Thank you so much Madhu ji!!
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Quote from: Sophi on August 20, 2009, 01:07:12 PM
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Awesome , Lovely , superb , excellent.. Sach mea bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai .. ak Dost ki yaad mea ak bahoot hi behtareen Peshkash... bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja Di.. Sach mea bahoot gehre ehsaas ko samete hue hai aapki yea rachna.. Bahoot Khoob!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Sorry di.. sayad jaldi jaldi mea gadbad ho gaya.. Usual Smile

Dekha didi nwe pehchan liya na ki kon likh kar gaya tha... Thank you so much dear!!! bahoot dil se likhi hai Nanmunh ke liye.. kash wapis aa jaaye aor hum mil kar phir ek sath likhe....
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Apane Jis Dost Ki Yaad mein Yeh likha,kaash Woh dost Yehj padhe To Phir Yoindia Se Kabhi Vaapas Naa Jaaye.. Usual Smile

Khwaish ji apke comments dekh kar dil ko bahoot khushi hui hai.... Apki taraf se bhi agar yaha kuch padne ko mil jaata to acha lagta!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 20, 2009, 04:09:29 PM »
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Khwaish ji apke comments dekh kar dil ko bahoot khushi hui hai.... Apki taraf se bhi agar yaha kuch padne ko mil jaata to acha lagta!!!

Pooja,Aap Jahan Bole,Waha Likh Doon par Yahan Par Aapne Ek Aise Dost Ke liye Likha Hai Jisse Main Bhi Nahi Jaanta..Shayad Yahan Par Likhna Mushkil ho..Aapko Mere Comments Dekh kar Khushi Hui..Yeh Jaankar Mujhe Behad Khushi Hui hai..Thankyou Soooooo Much Pooja.. Usual Smile
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Quote from: khwaish on August 20, 2009, 04:09:29 PM
Pooja,Aap Jahan Bole,Waha Likh Doon par Yahan Par Aapne Ek Aise Dost Ke liye Likha Hai Jisse Main Bhi Nahi Jaanta..Shayad Yahan Par Likhna Mushkil ho..Aapko Mere Comments Dekh kar Khushi Hui..Yeh Jaankar Mujhe Behad Khushi Hui hai..Thankyou Soooooo Much Pooja.. Usual Smile

App apne kis bichde dost ke liye likh de.. baat bhawnao ko shabdo mai likhne ki hai.. agge jaise app thik samjhe!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2009, 08:24:12 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 19, 2009, 09:10:56 PM
Missing one of my Old Yo-Friend!! I use to call him Nanmunh!! Bhoot kuch humne sath sath likha...ab wo Yoindia per nahi hai.. magar uske sath na hone ki aor sath na likhne ki kami bahoot khalati hai...

Meri bazam main, teri nazam ajj bhi chali atti hai
lakh samjhaya dil, Nanmunh teri yaad chali he atti hai

chehakti hai chirriya ajj bhi, baago main gul bhi khilte hai
dil toot kar rota hai mera, jab bahaar main Patjhar chali atti hai

Bajati hai payal, gungunata hai jhumka gaalo per
lehra uthte hai ansoo ankhon main, jab koke ki baat chali atti

Golguppo ke baatein, mehandi ke wadein
Mandir-Gurudaware ki wo yaad chali atti hai
nanmunh teri yaad chali aati hai....

beete panno per, likhi na jaane kitni yaadein maine
her baar ek nai teri  yaad chali atti hai..

Meri bazam main, teri nazam ajj bhi chali atti hai
lakh samjhaya dil, Nanmunh teri yaad chali he atti hai!!




Really very touching.... Hope he reads it and comes back to Yoindia. Bohot Khoob Pooja Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 20, 2009, 08:26:06 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 20, 2009, 08:24:12 PM
Really very touching.... Hope he reads it and comes back to Yoindia. Bohot Khoob Pooja Applause Applause Applause

thank you so much Celmira... shayad app sab ki dua he use wapis le ayye....
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«Reply #14 on: August 20, 2009, 08:32:10 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 20, 2009, 08:26:06 PM
thank you so much Celmira... shayad app sab ki dua he use wapis le ayye....

Zaroor  aa jayenge Inshallah.....I also miss his poetry.
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