Meri Bazam mai Teri Nazam

by Pooja on August 19, 2009, 09:10:56 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 20, 2009, 08:34:39 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 19, 2009, 09:10:56 PM
Missing one of my Old Yo-Friend!! I use to call him Nanmunh!! Bhoot kuch humne sath sath likha...ab wo Yoindia per nahi hai.. magar uske sath na hone ki aor sath na likhne ki kami bahoot khalati hai...

Meri bazam main, teri nazam ajj bhi chali atti hai
lakh samjhaya dil, Nanmunh teri yaad chali he atti hai

chehakti hai chirriya ajj bhi, baago main gul bhi khilte hai
dil toot kar rota hai mera, jab bahaar main Patjhar chali atti hai

Bajati hai payal, gungunata hai jhumka gaalo per
lehra uthte hai ansoo ankhon main, jab koke ki baat chali atti

Golguppo ke baatein, mehandi ke wadein
Mandir-Gurudaware ki wo yaad chali atti hai
nanmunh teri yaad chali aati hai....

beete panno per, likhi na jaane kitni yaadein maine
her baar ek nai teri  yaad chali atti hai..

Meri bazam main, teri nazam ajj bhi chali atti hai
lakh samjhaya dil, Nanmunh teri yaad chali he atti hai!!




dost ko yaad karne ka aapka tareeka dil ko bha gaya pooja ji... Applause Applause
aap jaise dost khushkismat ko hi naseeb hote hain
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«Reply #16 on: August 20, 2009, 08:36:20 PM »
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raha nahi gaya pooja ji isliye likh raha hun

dost kuch humne bhi khoye hain aapne bhi
chale unke saath hum bhi aur aap bhi
dooriyan kab faasle ban gaye
ya na samajh paaye hum bhi aur aap bhi
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«Reply #17 on: August 20, 2009, 08:40:09 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 20, 2009, 08:34:39 PM
dost ko yaad karne ka aapka tareeka dil ko bha gaya pooja ji... Applause Applause
aap jaise dost khushkismat ko hi naseeb hote hain

bahoot bahoot shukaria Sanjeev ji!!!
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«Reply #18 on: August 20, 2009, 08:42:31 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 20, 2009, 08:36:20 PM
raha nahi gaya pooja ji isliye likh raha hun

dost kuch humne bhi khoye hainaapne bhi
chale unke saath hum bhi aur aap bhi
dooriyan kab faasle ban gaye
ya na samajh paaye hum bhi aur aap bhi

Nice lines thegrimreaper!!

koi doori nahi, koi fasla bhi nahi
shabd khatam hai aor dil main armaan bahoot

kuch zindagi ka fareb raha, kuch samjhne mai hum chuke
aor kuch khushio ke piche, chipe rahte hai dard bahoot....
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«Reply #19 on: August 20, 2009, 08:50:09 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 20, 2009, 08:42:31 PM
Nice lines thegrimreaper!!

koi doori nahi, koi fasla bhi nahi
shabd khatam hai aor dil main armaan bahoot

kuch zindagi ka fareb raha, kuch samjhne mai hum chuke
aor kuch khushio ke piche, chipe rahte hai dard bahoot....

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: August 20, 2009, 11:30:35 PM »
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Shukaria TGR JI!!
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«Reply #21 on: August 22, 2009, 09:13:52 AM »
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Bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne Pooja ji....Dil se ek hi dua nikal rahi hai k aapka dost phr se aapki dosti k jhaan mein apni dosti ka rang bikhere.....
bahut khub likha aapne...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: August 22, 2009, 09:17:10 AM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 20, 2009, 08:36:20 PM
raha nahi gaya pooja ji isliye likh raha hun

dost kuch humne bhi khoye hain aapne bhi
chale unke saath hum bhi aur aap bhi
dooriyan kab faasle ban gaye
ya na samajh paaye hum bhi aur aap bhi
khub kha aapne reaper ji
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«Reply #23 on: August 22, 2009, 09:19:16 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 20, 2009, 08:42:31 PM
Nice lines thegrimreaper!!

koi doori nahi, koi fasla bhi nahi
shabd khatam hai aor dil main armaan bahoot

kuch zindagi ka fareb raha, kuch samjhne mai hum chuke
aor kuch khushio ke piche, chipe rahte hai dard bahoot....
sach kha aapne Pooja ji.....
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«Reply #24 on: August 22, 2009, 01:34:48 PM »
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kya baat hai  pooja ji.....

JAB BHI MAIN LIKHNE BAITHTI HUN,
KHAYALON MEIN GUM HO JAATI HUN.
KALAM SHURU KARNE SE PAHELE HI,
TERI YAAD CHALI AATI HAI.

LIKH TOH LETI HUN AAJ BHI,
PAR TERE SAATH LIKHNE KA MAZAA KUCH AUR THA.
KYA PATA TU FIR SEY AAYEGA KI NAHIN AAYEGA,
KI TERE SAATH HAR LAMHA JO GUJRAA,IK HASEEN DAUR THA.

BHAAG TOH AAJ BHI HAI,
GUL BHI KHILTE HAI,YAAR BHI MILTE HAI.
JAB BHI WAHAN JAATI HUN,
TERI KAMI KHAL JAATI HAI.

YEH PAYAL KI JANKAR,CHURION KI KANAK,
JAB BHI DIL KUCH GUNGUNANA CHAHAEY,
MERI DIL KI BAZAM MAIN,
TERI HI NAZAM CHALI AATI HAI.
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«Reply #25 on: August 22, 2009, 03:43:29 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on August 22, 2009, 09:17:10 AM
khub kha aapne reaper ji

shukriya Giggle
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«Reply #26 on: August 28, 2009, 11:03:18 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 22, 2009, 01:34:48 PM
kya baat hai  pooja ji.....

JAB BHI MAIN LIKHNE BAITHTI HUN,
KHAYALON MEIN GUM HO JAATI HUN.
KALAM SHURU KARNE SE PAHELE HI,
TERI YAAD CHALI AATI HAI.

LIKH TOH LETI HUN AAJ BHI,
PAR TERE SAATH LIKHNE KA MAZAA KUCH AUR THA.
KYA PATA TU FIR SEY AAYEGA KI NAHIN AAYEGA,
KI TERE SAATH HAR LAMHA JO GUJRAA,IK HASEEN DAUR THA.

BHAAG TOH AAJ BHI HAI,
GUL BHI KHILTE HAI,YAAR BHI MILTE HAI.
JAB BHI WAHAN JAATI HUN,
TERI KAMI KHAL JAATI HAI.

YEH PAYAL KI JANKAR,CHURION KI KANAK,
JAB BHI DIL KUCH GUNGUNANA CHAHAEY,
MERI DIL KI BAZAM MAIN,
TERI HI NAZAM CHALI AATI HAI.

bahoot khoob cara ji...

Jaane wale shayad lout nahi paate hai
kar lo kitna bhi yaad, wo apne jeevan mai kho jaate hai

yaadein rahti hai bas dil main, beete panno ki tarah
padte hai jjinhe dil se, ankho se ansoo beh jaate hai

shayad dukha hoga uska dil bhi achanak bin baat ke waha
dost ki ahhein kuch is kadar dil per dastak de jaate hai

ho jahan bhi wo dil se dua hai ki khush rahe hamesha
hum to waqat- be waqat bas unhi yaad kiye jaate hai!!!
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«Reply #27 on: August 29, 2009, 07:07:28 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 28, 2009, 11:03:18 PM
bahoot khoob cara ji...

Jaane wale shayad lout nahi paate hai
kar lo kitna bhi yaad, wo apne jeevan mai kho jaate hai

yaadein rahti hai bas dil main, beete panno ki tarah
padte hai jjinhe dil se, ankho se ansoo beh jaate hai

shayad dukha hoga uska dil bhi achanak bin baat ke waha
dost ki ahhein kuch is kadar dil per dastak de jaate hai

ho jahan bhi wo dil se dua hai ki khush rahe hamesha
hum to waqat- be waqat bas unhi yaad kiye jaate hai!!!

apke shabdon ne aankhein nam kar di pooja ji
aise hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #28 on: August 31, 2009, 12:40:48 AM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 29, 2009, 07:07:28 AM
apke shabdon ne aankhein nam kar di pooja ji
aise hi likhte rahiye

maafi chahti hu ki apki ankhein num kar di... dost ki judai ka dard he kuch aisa hota hai....
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«Reply #29 on: September 29, 2009, 06:24:05 PM »
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Mujhe nahi pata tha Pooja ji,, app mujhe itna yaad karte ho, aapke liye ek poem likhne ki koshish ki, umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi,


@Talat : mujhe nahi maloom tha aap bhi mujhe miss karte ho, maine bhi mere  yoindian friends ko miss kiya, bas keh nahi paya. kafi kuch badal gaya hai yahan par.



Quote from: Pooja on August 19, 2009, 09:10:56 PM
Missing one of my Old Yo-Friend!! I use to call him Nanmunh!! Bhoot kuch humne sath sath likha...ab wo Yoindia per nahi hai.. magar uske sath na hone ki aor sath na likhne ki kami bahoot khalati hai...

Meri bazam main, teri nazam ajj bhi chali atti hai
lakh samjhaya dil, Nanmunh teri yaad chali he atti hai

chehakti hai chirriya ajj bhi, baago main gul bhi khilte hai
dil toot kar rota hai mera, jab bahaar main Patjhar chali atti hai

Bajati hai payal, gungunata hai jhumka gaalo per
lehra uthte hai ansoo ankhon main, jab koke ki baat chali atti

Golguppo ke baatein, mehandi ke wadein
Mandir-Gurudaware ki wo yaad chali atti hai
nanmunh teri yaad chali aati hai....

beete panno per, likhi na jaane kitni yaadein maine
her baar ek nai teri  yaad chali atti hai..

Meri bazam main, teri nazam ajj bhi chali atti hai
lakh samjhaya dil, Nanmunh teri yaad chali he atti hai!!






Jo bi aapki bazm se nikali
woh dil tak pahunch hi jati hai
kaise na phir main ikrar karu
aapki bi mujhe yaad satati hai

woh kisse kabhi tasveerion ke
aaj bhi bina kahe sun jate hain
kuch shikayatein payal, jhumko ki
yoindia ke peechle paane,dohrate hain

kuch baatein ban gayi shikawa aapse
lekin yeh bhi toh dosti hi kehlati hai
chahe dair se hi,lekin pahuncha hai jaroor
Nanmum ko jab bhi aap Pooja ji, dil se bhulati hain


Lo aayein hain hum phir aapki mehfil mein
Sham jala kar parwane ko, Insaf kare !!!


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