Meri Bazam mai Teri Nazam

by Pooja on August 19, 2009, 09:10:56 PM
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«Reply #30 on: September 30, 2009, 05:36:08 AM »
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Mujhe nahi pata tha Pooja ji,, app mujhe itna yaad karte ho, aapke liye ek poem likhne ki koshish ki, umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi,


@Talat : mujhe nahi maloom tha aap bhi mujhe miss karte ho, maine bhi mere  yoindian friends ko miss kiya, bas keh nahi paya. kafi kuch badal gaya hai yahan par.





Jo bi aapki bazm se nikali
woh dil tak pahunch hi jati hai
kaise na phir main ikrar karu
aapki bi mujhe yaad satati hai

woh kisse kabhi tasveerion ke
aaj bhi bina kahe sun jate hain
kuch shikayatein payal, jhumko ki
yoindia ke peechle paane,dohrate hain

kuch baatein ban gayi shikawa aapse
lekin yeh bhi toh dosti hi kehlati hai
chahe dair se hi,lekin pahuncha hai jaroor
Nanmum ko jab bhi aap Pooja ji, dil se bhulati hain


Lo aayein hain hum phir aapki mehfil mein
Sham jala kar parwane ko, Insaf kare !!!



JEET








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«Reply #31 on: October 01, 2009, 02:08:54 PM »
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nikki
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«Reply #32 on: October 02, 2009, 07:26:00 AM »
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superbbb Pooja sis and Jeet...this is the example of true friendship.Dost ne bulaya aur dost hazir

aapki dosti dekh kar mujhe apne doston ki yaad aati hai
woh hassi ke pal woh mazak ki ghadiya aankhon se guzar jaati hai

yeh sab yaad karke dil mein udasi si chaa jaati hai
magar fir bhi honton par hassi rakhte hain hum
na jaane kisse dhokha de rahe hain hum iss hassi se
jabki num aankhein sachayi bayan karti rehti hain

aye kaash woh waqt laot aaye..unn logon ke saath
jinhein hum apna maante hain aur dost kehte hain


stay together friends....aapki poetry padhna bahut hi acha lagta hai...excellent work!!!
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #33 on: October 02, 2009, 08:00:33 AM »
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Nice Applause Applause Applause
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Vikk
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«Reply #34 on: October 02, 2009, 02:11:44 PM »
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Missing one of my Old Yo-Friend!! I use to call him Nanmunh!! Bhoot kuch humne sath sath likha...ab wo Yoindia per nahi hai.. magar uske sath na hone ki aor sath na likhne ki kami bahoot khalati hai...

Meri bazam main, teri nazam ajj bhi chali atti hai
lakh samjhaya dil, Nanmunh teri yaad chali he atti hai

chehakti hai chirriya ajj bhi, baago main gul bhi khilte hai
dil toot kar rota hai mera, jab bahaar main Patjhar chali atti hai

Bajati hai payal, gungunata hai jhumka gaalo per
lehra uthte hai ansoo ankhon main, jab koke ki baat chali atti

Golguppo ke baatein, mehandi ke wadein
Mandir-Gurudaware ki wo yaad chali atti hai
nanmunh teri yaad chali aati hai....

beete panno per, likhi na jaane kitni yaadein maine
her baar ek nai teri  yaad chali atti hai..

Meri bazam main, teri nazam ajj bhi chali atti hai
lakh samjhaya dil, Nanmunh teri yaad chali he atti hai!!





Applause Applause  Applause

To Good Pooja ji...Lagta hai kafii gehra rishta bana diya tha kagaz kalam ne aap dono ka
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«Reply #35 on: October 03, 2009, 09:22:20 PM »
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superbbb Pooja sis and Jeet...this is the example of true friendship.Dost ne bulaya aur dost hazir

aapki dosti dekh kar mujhe apne doston ki yaad aati hai
woh hassi ke pal woh mazak ki ghadiya aankhon se guzar jaati hai

yeh sab yaad karke dil mein udasi si chaa jaati hai
magar fir bhi honton par hassi rakhte hain hum
na jaane kisse dhokha de rahe hain hum iss hassi se
jabki num aankhein sachayi bayan karti rehti hain

aye kaash woh waqt laot aaye..unn logon ke saath
jinhein hum apna maante hain aur dost kehte hain


stay together friends....aapki poetry padhna bahut hi acha lagta hai...excellent work!!!


nikki.. aap ko yahan dekh kar bohat achha laga Usual Smile
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«Reply #36 on: October 03, 2009, 09:22:56 PM »
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Thanks Rishi Usual Smile
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