Meri Jaise Ek Manzil Hai Tu "Khwaish"

by khwaish on October 09, 2010, 10:52:35 AM
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Gham hai yaa khushi hai tu.
 meri Zindagi hai Tu

Jisse Paana Na-mumkin Hi sahi!!
Par Ek Lauti Aarzoo Hai Tu..

Main To Khud Ek Bhatakta Hua Musfir hoon
 Meri Jaise Ek Aakhri Manzil Hai Tu..

Kaun Jaane kab Tham jaaye yeh safar!!
 meri ek Lauti  justujoo hai Tu..

Zakhmo se mila Dard ko hum Sehte hi rehte hai
par dil ko jo Raahat de ek aisi Dawa hai Tu..

Hasratein Dil ki Waise To Hazaaro Hai
Par Dil Se Jo Nikli Ek Dua hai Tu...

"khwaish" Kaash Kabhi Koi samjhe Khamoshiyan Ki Zubaan
Dil Se Jo nikli Ek sada hai Tu...

                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2010, 11:13:12 AM »
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mastaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmm post khwaish ji...jo instantly likh diya aapka reply wo ye raha aapke samne..dekhiye kaisa laga....

Aankhon me palta ek sach na hone wala khwab hai tu
Tujhe kya pata maere liye kitna khaas hai tu

Mujhse dur hokar bhi jo mujhse dur nahin
Wo hi mere andar basta mera humsaaya hai tu

Ujaalon me dikhe mujhe sath chalta hua
Andhere me jo mujhme  sama jaye wo mera saaya hai tu

Kho na dun tujhe pake main kisi roz sanam
Wo ek tujhe khudme chhupaye rakhen ka dar hai tu

Mere sheron me jo tujhe dekhte hain wo hi
Mere dil ka ehsaas.. mera junuun hai tu

Kya kahe kasak k kya hai tu oo mere humdum
Mere jine ki ikloauti khwaish meri muskaan hai tu…!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2010, 11:21:52 AM »
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very nice khawish ji....
ek koshish hamari taraf se bhi...

Meri har subah har shaam hai tu..
dard hai tu hi.. aaram hai tu...
zindagi ka har ek armaan hai tu
meri to jaise pechaan hai tu..
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2010, 02:13:29 PM »
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Khwaish Dost bahaut khubsoorat peshkash..
Akhri shaer ki pehli line bahaut hi zadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa achi hai..Bahaut khoob..!
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2010, 02:23:28 PM »
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Anamika di bahaut khoob.!
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2010, 02:24:40 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Manzil-e-ishq jee..!
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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2010, 04:24:36 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 09, 2010, 11:13:12 AM
mastaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmm post khwaish ji...jo instantly likh diya aapka reply wo ye raha aapke samne..dekhiye kaisa laga....

Aankhon me palta ek sach na hone wala khwab hai tu
Tujhe kya pata maere liye kitna khaas hai tu

Mujhse dur hokar bhi jo mujhse dur nahin
Wo hi mere andar basta mera humsaaya hai tu

Ujaalon me dikhe mujhe sath chalta hua
Andhere me jo mujhme  sama jaye wo mera saaya hai tu

Kho na dun tujhe pake main kisi roz sanam
Wo ek tujhe khudme chhupaye rakhen ka dar hai tu

Mere sheron me jo tujhe dekhte hain wo hi
Mere dil ka ehsaas.. mera junuun hai tu

Kya kahe kasak k kya hai tu oo mere humdum
Mere jine ki ikloauti khwaish meri muskaan hai tu…!!!!

 notworthy notworthy notworthy Waah Anuji..Aap Hi bata Do Ke taarif Ke Liye Main Akhir Lafz Kaha Se Laau..Toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Goooooooooooooooooooooood Ji..


Iss Khwaab ko Khwaab Hi Rehne Dete hai
kyon naa ek tujhe ki palkon pe apna ghar basa lete hai

jab bhi tanha rahe hum kabhi ,do boond ashq Saath Mein baha lenge
hum Woh Hai Jo ek duje ke ashkon pe Muskura lete Hai

Tera Hum saaya Main banun,mera Humsaaya Tu!!!
kuch iss tarah ek duje ke dil mein jagah bana lete hai

humein waqt ke kisi faisle ka intezaar hi nahi!!!
yeh bahut hai ke hum saath Hai,yeh faisla ek duje ko suna lete hai

zindagi ki har gham,har khushi mein shaamil ho,
ek duje ke gham mein royenge,ek duje ki khushi Ko saath mana lete hai

majbooriyan aur dooriyan Dono kismat mein likha ke aaye hai
Kyon Naa  ek duje ko yeh Saza Suuna lete hai!!!!

Mere Lafzon Mein Teri Mehak Ho,Tere lafzon mein meri
Kuch Iss Tarah Zindagi ka Yeh Saath Nibha Lete Hai

"Khwaish" Pyaar Karne ke liye Kya Kisi Ka saath rehna Zaroori hai!!!
Saath Naa Rehkar bhi saath hai,Yeh ehsaas Dil mein jaga Lete hai
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2010, 04:31:31 PM »
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khwaish ji.......katle aam kar diya aaj aapne....sach me dilfareb likha hai...
itna khubsurat likha hai aapne ye reply poem k iska reply kuch ho hi nahin sakta..lajawaabbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb... poetry sidhe dil me ghus gai...
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«Reply #8 on: October 10, 2010, 07:13:59 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji ... aur Kasak ji k jawaab ka to koi jawaab hi nahi...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2010, 03:56:54 PM »
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good going khwaish ji kasak ji
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2010, 12:06:56 PM »
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Khwaish ji aur kasak ji bahut khoob......
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«Reply #11 on: October 14, 2010, 07:36:00 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on October 09, 2010, 11:21:52 AM
very nice khawish ji....
ek koshish hamari taraf se bhi...

Meri har subah har shaam hai tu..
dard hai tu hi.. aaram hai tu...
zindagi ka har ek armaan hai tu
meri to jaise pechaan hai tu..


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Manzil-e-ishq ji..

Aur Bahutttt ACha Likha Hia Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Mohabbat ke bhi kucch Andaaz hotey Hai
Jaag ti hui Aankhon mein bhi kucch khaawb hotey hai
Zaruri nahi ki ghum mein hi Aansu nikley
Muskurahat Aankhon mein bhi sailab hotey Hai
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